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Postby Shamsiel-kun » Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:08 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:I know there have been non-lemon fics using the idea that Shinji didn't simply settle with just jerking off during the hospital scene in EoE. But was the idea ever used in a lemon fic? And I mean other than low-quality smut.

I have a mental image in this regard: just as Shinji finishes up, he notices that Asuka's eyes are open and she's looking directly at him. Startled "oh, crap" silence ensues, followed by Asuka quietly saying "That hurt, you know." (Shinji didn't do any foreplay before putting it in, so she's sore like crazy), pulling Shinji into a rough kiss, then adding "Now get out of here."


Alternative version: Unbeknownst to Shinji, Asuka suffers from sleep sex (a variant of sleep walking, except people perform sexual actions on themselves or others who happen to be present). The moment he jams it in and starts to have a go, Asuka responds in a more than eager way to the stimulation...while still sleeping. Overpowered, Shinji can only watch as he ends up on his back with Asuka straddling him and roughly fucking him, making him climax more than a few times until he is exhausted and scarred for life some more. Of course, Asuka doesn't remember anything, but does end up pregnant without knowing it. In the stinger, she realizes this as one of the MP Evas
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rips her unborn foetus out of her and dangles it before her dying eyes.


Adds a few sick layers to the final EoE scene, too.
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Jan 30, 2016 10:32 pm

View Original PostShamsiel-kun wrote:In the stinger, she realizes this as one of the MP Evas
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rips her unborn foetus out of her and dangles it before her dying eyes.


JESUS CHRIST. NO. DO NOT WANT.

And I thought my ideas were fucked up.
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Postby Stillborn » Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:59 am

Anno faps claps in approval ^_^
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Postby NemZ » Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:07 pm

That doesn't make any sense. You do realize these two scenes would be happening on the same day right?
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Wed Feb 17, 2016 1:49 am

Hey James, if you can read this great job on that lemon with the Shinji/Asuka/Kaworu three-way, it was pretty sexy.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Feb 17, 2016 5:15 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Hey James, if you can read this great job on that lemon with the Shinji/Asuka/Kaworu three-way, it was pretty sexy.


Haha I can, and I didn't expect to ever see someone comment on that here. Thank you, it was a lot of fun to write! Only really came around because I have a few friends who write fics of that nature of other fandoms so I thought, "eh what if I gave it a shot."

Glad to see people like it :D

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Feb 18, 2016 2:10 am

View Original PostShamsiel-kun wrote:Alternative version: Unbeknownst to Shinji, Asuka suffers from sleep sex (a variant of sleep walking, except people perform sexual actions on themselves or others who happen to be present). The moment he jams it in and starts to have a go, Asuka responds in a more than eager way to the stimulation...while still sleeping. Overpowered, Shinji can only watch as he ends up on his back with Asuka straddling him and roughly fucking him, making him climax more than a few times until he is exhausted and scarred for life some more. Of course, Asuka doesn't remember anything, but does end up pregnant without knowing it. In the stinger, she realizes this as one of the MP Evas
spoilered by Monk Ed for brief but graphic description  SPOILER: Show
rips her unborn foetus out of her and dangles it before her dying eyes.


Adds a few sick layers to the final EoE scene, too.


I like it, it should be created as an alternative to that scene that occurs later the same night as the wall of Jericho scene, you know instead of "sleep" walking, she should sleep rape him.
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Postby Rommel » Fri Feb 19, 2016 2:50 pm

Hello guys.

Some of you will be happy to know that I'm finally working on a Rei/Asuka/Mari lemon. Got about 30 pages in, though it's mostly Rei centric as she seems to be the one I've never based a lemon off. So yay for that. Also, while doing that I'm remembering how damn hard it is to write Rei.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sat Feb 20, 2016 2:29 am

Good to see you on here at least, Lemontastica hasn't had anything posted on it since January 22.

Also disturbing lack of Shinji disturbing, care to make it a universe where he's a she so the main cast is in the story but the pureness of Yuri is retained??
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Feb 20, 2016 7:36 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Good to see you on here at least, Lemontastica hasn't had anything posted on it since January 22.


I posted a while ago. It wasn't even that much of an idea, to be honest, involving Toji and a sleepwalking Asuka.

Something different that came to my mind a few days ago, though.

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Takes place in an AU where Yui and Kyoko are the ones alive instead of their husbands.

Unknown to their classmates, Shinji and Asuka are in a lesbian relationship. They act normally while in public but as soon as they get home, the clothes come off and sexy stuff starts. And I mean they are so crazily inseparable that they literally rip off each other's clothes if the other takes too long to get ready after arriving home. They eat together (with Asuka giving Shinji cunnilingus while the latter is cooking and Shinji returning the favor under the table while the former is eating), they sleep together (in the nude), they go to the bathroom together (and sit on each other's lap while doing their business), they even bathe together (with requisite bathtub sex every day).

Yui knows about the girls doing naughty stuff; they don't actually do it in front of her but there's no way for her not to know, considering that they aren't exactly subtle or quiet about it, even when they know Yui is right next door. She's also oddly casual and dismissive about it, which should be the reader's first clue that something isn't right.

It would be revealed eventually that Yui and Kyoko started using a pheromone-derived bullshit-hentai-aphrodisiac on their daughters from an early age. Shinji and Asuka became an item at the ripe age of six, albeit it was restricted to handholding and chaste kissing in private. At the age of eight, the girls started french-kissing; at the age of nine, they started to touch each other in a sexual way and at the age of ten, they began deliberate sexual stimulation of each other. When they turned twelve, Kyoko brought them several other sex toys, including an adjustable strap-on with fake ejaculation capabilities (which the girls usually use lukewarm tap water for). Yui and Kyoko are actually a lesbian couple themselves, but they don't touch or even look at the girls.

As for why Yui and Kyoko did this to their girls... it would be implied that it has something to do with Evas. After all, the ventral tegmental area, AKA the A10, is stimulated by orgasm...

In any case, the current situation isn't quite snazzy either. Shinji is on friendly terms with Mana, but it's rather strained by constant interruptions from a jealous Asuka. Shinji isn't trying to cheat on Asuka, Asuka is the one being overly jealous; Asuka also doesn't like acting like that, but she just can't help it. So in order to prevent a yandere escalation, the two slip Mana some of the bullshit-aphrodisiac and bring her home for a threesome.

To be absolutely clear, the bullshit-aphrodisiac doesn't mind control or anything like that; it simply lowers inhibitions and causes a spike in sexual desire. In other words, giving it to Mana causes Mana to feel all hot and bothered and be more receptive to sexual advances she'd normally reject out of embarrassment. It doesn't turn her into a sex-crazed slut, it merely turns "Iyaaa~, don't touch me there!" into "Well... *averts eyes with a blush* okay..." So the mental image here is that of Mana lying on her back, holding hands with a masturbating Shinji and biting her lower lips with eyes squeezed shut while Asuka is slowly claiming Mana's virginity with the strap-on. Afterwards, Shinji kisses a panting, freshly-orgasmed Mana on the lips and promises to be the one using the strap-on next time.

Optionally, there could be a side-story later where Shinji and Asuka have a foursome with Toji and Kensuke just to see what it's like to do it with a guy. Highlights would include the foreplay between Shinji and Kensuke getting interrupted by Toji and Asuka getting into an argument because the condom Asuka bought is too small for Toji, Toji insists that if he pulls it on anyway, it's going to tear apart during sex, and Asuka counter-insists that there's no way he's putting his dick inside her without protection. The argument finally ends with an aroused and frustrated Asuka throwing on some clothes (but not underwear) and running off to buy a bigger condom. She ends up buying two on the basis that, since the previous ones she bought are of the same size and fit Kensuke, this way both Toji and Kensuke have two condoms, meaning the girls can switch partners.
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Postby Rommel » Sun Feb 21, 2016 11:07 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Good to see you on here at least, Lemontastica hasn't had anything posted on it since January 22.

Also disturbing lack of Shinji disturbing, care to make it a universe where he's a she so the main cast is in the story but the pureness of Yuri is retained??


Why would it be disturbing? It's the girls having some fun, following Mari's lead. No boys needed. He might eventually get dragged into it by them, but probably as more of a diversion than the main thing.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:12 pm

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If Shinji ceases to exist, is it still Evangelion, or has it become something else? Like Neon Exodus Evangelion for instance?
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Postby Shamsiel-kun » Thu Feb 25, 2016 2:39 am

View Original PostNemZ wrote:That doesn't make any sense. You do realize these two scenes would be happening on the same day right?


Oh come on, we're talking about the same series that has giant aliens with physically impossible anatomy attacking the earth being fought by organic mecha infused with the souls of the pilots' deceased mothers. Does that make any sense?
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Feb 25, 2016 3:13 am

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Yeah it does actually

But it would make more sense if the sleep rape happens early on in the story.
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Postby Celepito » Thu Mar 10, 2016 4:41 pm

I have no idea how to put it or if this even belongs in here so I´m just going to write it:

Can someone give me like a list or something with good (read: with plot) LAS lemons? Something along the lines of Wake + Water Hazard or Best Laid Plans + OVA would be great. The fanfiction giving the lemon enough plot with it, though I also enjoyed Pheonix very much. Would be great if somebody has the time because I´m not accustome to searching fanfictions, much less for specific topics.




PS: Best first post ever, basically asking for porn :facepalm: ( Sorry if there are mistakes or rule violations, I´m not a native speaker and new to the board)

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Fri Mar 11, 2016 1:55 am

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I'll also give you a list of Doujins to read, if you want. good stuff.

Jimmy's stuff is good, and Rommel has some good stuff too, most of it can be found on here http://fanbards.net/groups/lemontastica/stories/all Also check Sailor Star Dust''s stuff too.

You can also talk about lemons there too, we haven't had much activity there in a while though, last post was on jan 22nd.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Fri Mar 11, 2016 3:36 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:^
I'll also give you a list of Doujins to read, if you want. good stuff.

Jimmy's stuff is good, and Rommel has some good stuff too, most of it can be found on here http://fanbards.net/groups/lemontastica/stories/all Also check Sailor Star Dust''s stuff too.

You can also talk about lemons there too, we haven't had much activity there in a while though, last post was on jan 22nd.


You've actually reminded me that I need to finish uploading all of my stuff to FanBards. I have another story of that nature to put up as well but I'm waiting on a friend to check through it. Kind of strange, first time I wrote a lemon was basically just for a bit of a challenge and fun, didn't think I'd end up writing five of the things :/

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Postby amitakartok » Tue Mar 22, 2016 5:55 pm

Anyone up for Kyoko giving Asuka erotic massage after school?
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Postby cyharding » Tue Mar 22, 2016 10:48 pm

^What the hell is wrong you? :cringe:
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Postby amitakartok » Wed Mar 23, 2016 1:33 am

Did you happen to miss the post about abortion porn on the top of this very page?

Compared to that, what is your problem?
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