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Postby The18°angel » Fri Aug 13, 2021 11:30 am

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:I too considered writing Shinji/Misato before, but ended up not doing it because it would be massively out of character for her to propose it and massively out of character for him to go along with it.


well the way Shinji and Misato can end up having sex is after the battle against ramiel, let's say they are celebrating the victory at Misato's apartment and they both end up drunk because of Misato and after she teases him about Rei and that Shinji reveals the little incident that he had hours before in Rei's apartment they both end up having sex, the next morning they both agree that nothing happened between them and that it is better to forget it, bonus points if when Kaji asks Shinji the question about on whether Misato is wild in bed Shinji tries to defend her accidentally revealing the incident between them.

In another idea set in 2.0, Asuka decides to help Hikari go on a date with Touji, enlisting the help of Shinji, Kensuke and Rei. They end up organizing several double dates but on the day of the dates Rei cannot attend due to some experiments related to nerv, so before hikari and touji arrive at the agreed place Asuka tells Shinji to get a girl for the date or to Otherwise it will end as a friends' outing, Shinji ends up bumping into Mari and pressured by Asuka he manages to blackmail Mari into taking the role of the girl on their date by telling him that he is going to inform Nerv that she arrived by parachute at school, after that the date between touji and hikari is a success Asuka and kensuke start a competition in a nearby arcade which leaves Shinji and mari alone, Shinji tries to apologize but mari drags him to her apartment where she "seduces" and has sex with Shinji while recording it, intending to blackmail him into giving it to Rei if he tries to reveal anything about her, things get weirder when a drunken Kaji and Misato arrive at the apartment lost in a moment of passion, just To discover that the apartment is trashed and a naked mari strangling a naked Shinji who is trying to reach a camera. and now Kaji must explain to Misato everything that is happening especially because the pilot of unit 05 is alive and why she is doing "that" with Shinji
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Postby amitakartok » Fri Aug 13, 2021 1:08 pm

Eehh, I don't really like the "sex between two people who wouldn't normally do it by way of alcohol" trope.

And funnily enough, I tried retooling the aforementioned Shinji/Misato into Shinji/Mari, but didn't finish that one either. I just can't get into Mari's head to give her a proper characterization.
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Postby The18°angel » Fri Aug 13, 2021 1:43 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Eehh, I don't really like the "sex between two people who wouldn't normally do it by way of alcohol" trope.

And funnily enough, I tried retooling the aforementioned Shinji/Misato into Shinji/Mari, but didn't finish that one either. I just can't get into Mari's head to give her a proper characterization.


A Mari she really is a problem to get a proper caracterización, because she is and inmortal being from Yui a gendo generation, a clone or a loli-cat-girl-clone depends on the continuity or your headcanon.

so in the second idea i gave is basically a lemon between Shinji and mari with some comedy and drama, Shinji was pressured by Asuka to get the replacement on the date and he ran into mari by chance, then mari felt threatened by Shinji and decided to have something to threaten him so that he does not say anything about her which ends up causing the video of them having sex after she "seduced him". Funnily in that idea if i actually complete a write Mari is friendly to everyone But a jerk to Shinji (for a while) because of that incident, she really dont like when someone is a threat to her or that have valuable information or objects that can be use to control her.

Also if You would like the take on Mari being inmortal the most closet characterization that i have found would be based of rin from daughter of mnysione, if You don't take her being inmortal then i could suggest Faye from cowboy bebop to try to get her characterization

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Postby The18°angel » Wed Sep 08, 2021 8:28 pm

In a gender-bent AU what are the odds of male Mari having a one night stand with a fem Shinji

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Postby amitakartok » Thu Sep 09, 2021 4:39 pm

Well, I did have some sketches about futanari Mari giving femShinji hands-on teaching on how to be more confident in herself...
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Postby The18°angel » Mon Nov 15, 2021 3:57 pm

How about these ideas for lemons.

1) only fans

Mari has rebelled against her conservative family and their funds have been cut to force her to leave Tokyo 03 so she starts a channel of onlyfans to earn money eventually decides to increase the profits to the maximum by involving the eva pilots, eventually she tries with Asuka and Rei but fails and ends up involving kaworu and Shinji. She first has separate sex with both of them and then ends up in a threesome in the final stream.
(Kaworu knew but he did not care, Shinji was with hidden cameras) the scandal is so great that nerv to be able to control the situation and have an excuse to keep everything confidential they recruit mari as eva pilot. possibly end up in an open relationship between Shinji / kaworu / mari.

2) star crossed lovers

One night in Tokyo 03 shortly after Ramiel Misato is celebrating victory and meets a man who is familiar to her for some reason. after several drinks, some flirting and good chemistry they end up in a hotel having a night of passion. (nge Misato meets rebuild! adult! Shinji)

3) village romance 03

Kaji Jr. shows how similar he is to his parents when he sees Shinji interact with a mysterious girl with blue hair and red eyes. with some help from Shinji they both date and end up doing it.

4) NNN

The boys begin the challenge of not masturbating for a month and the girls find out by starting a bet to see who can make any of the boys lose.

some parody, multiple couples, threesomes and others.

in the end the winner is hikari of all the girls by achieving a "double kill"

5) rivals

gendo and mari are competing for yui's affection in college. after several incidents they end up hating fucking their brains out. they decide to share yui after that.

6) collegue days

ritsuko, Kaji and Misato have a sex marathon for a whole week.

7) the huntress

Predator Asuka has her eyes set on Nerv Shinji Ikari's PMC Marine. After he survives several ambushes of his and xenomorphs, Asuka decides to give him a reward for being an excellent prey

8) before i am gone

mana and Shinji share a moment before she has to leave tokyo 03.

9) we are the same

Before the core of the angel within Mayumi awakens she meets Kaworu Nagisa who takes a strong interest in her. kaworu ends up making love to her in the library and mayumi turns out to be a pervert with some exhibitionism.

10) there can only be one winner

Asuka and Kaworu compete to be the pilot of Unit 02 until the redhead decides to confront him in the showers taking more than was expected from that physical confrontation.

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Postby amitakartok » Wed Nov 17, 2021 1:25 pm

View Original PostThe18°angel wrote:8) before i am gone

mana and Shinji share a moment before she has to leave tokyo 03.


I have an incomplete draft for that that's been collecting dust on my hard drive for the better part of a decade now. Non-penetrative mutual masturbation only.

9) we are the same

Before the core of the angel within Mayumi awakens she meets Kaworu Nagisa who takes a strong interest in her. kaworu ends up making love to her in the library and mayumi turns out to be a pervert with some exhibitionism.


I have a nearly-finished draft of Kensuke accidentally chikaning her one morning and do plan on them having quickies in semi-public locations down the line.

And I also have a oneshot draft specifically of her being an exhibitionist, this time with Shinji on the receiving end.
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