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Postby xanderkh » Sat Apr 16, 2016 4:50 pm

I think the parts that I love the most about these recent chapters is the back and forth dialogue between Leliel (or at least I think that's Leliel) and Shinji.

The Shinji in this story is a lot more adjusted than his original counterpoint, a lot more accepting of his flaws, and is able to call bullshit on his old values when even called out upon them.

In the old series, Shinji was so wrapped up with his faults and flaws (being called a "pervert", not having any value outside of Evangelion, making mistakes, or having to be "perfect" so he would have any value in the eyes of others.), that even IF he was perfect, it wouldn't be enough for him to not be paranoid of the people around him and how they would view him. Thankfully, due to the efforts of the Doctor and some healthy psychology, this Shinji now realizes that such views are immensely unhealthy and that it's natural for people to make mistakes. The trick is that you have to be willing to admit you made mistakes and work towards atoning for it, not wallowing in self-pity thinking that nothing you do will make anything better.

Heck, I'm detecting a bit of "Doctor-isms" in Shinji's dialogue, and that just makes me squee with joy seeing how Shinji has improved. ^_^
"You're na�ve, Cecil. Even knowing betrayal and despair, you would depend on the whims of others?" - Golbez
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.

"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera

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Postby TraxXavier » Sat May 14, 2016 1:47 pm

Write faster! I can't wait longer for the next chapter ;)
Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
Discussion thread: thread/17927/Deus-est-Nadia/?f=28

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Postby xanderkh » Tue May 17, 2016 3:19 pm

Hey, give him a break. ^_^

Greatness can't be rush. Take all the time you need philopoemen, we can be patient.
"You're na�ve, Cecil. Even knowing betrayal and despair, you would depend on the whims of others?" - Golbez
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.

"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera

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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Jul 10, 2016 3:34 pm

Break's over, hop hop! ;)
time for the next chapter.
Pretty please. ^_^
Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
Discussion thread: thread/17927/Deus-est-Nadia/?f=28

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Postby Gob Hobblin » Sun Jul 10, 2016 5:20 pm

Child abuse!...the best Christmas gift of all!
Though, Gob still might look good in a cocktail dress.
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Postby xanderkh » Sun Jul 10, 2016 11:45 pm

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Not when the DOCTOR is around!

THAT is the best Christmas gift: The Doctor!

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"You're na�ve, Cecil. Even knowing betrayal and despair, you would depend on the whims of others?" - Golbez
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Sephiroth: "Do you miss the Light?"
Golbez: "Hmph...I merely have duties to fulfill."
Sephiroth: "Too close to the brightness, and you may get scorched."
Golbz:.............
Golbez: Your loss can strengthen you.

"NGE Shinji is broken, Manga Shinji is an asshole, Rebuild Shinji is an idiot. Which is best? Uh, can I get some other options? All of these really suck." -Bagheera

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Postby TraxXavier » Wed Jul 13, 2016 11:51 am

please don't tell me i have to wait till Christmas :cringe:
Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
Discussion thread: thread/17927/Deus-est-Nadia/?f=28

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Postby TraxXavier » Wed Dec 14, 2016 5:17 pm

Christmas! Almost when can we expect the next chapters?
Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
Discussion thread: thread/17927/Deus-est-Nadia/?f=28

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Postby philopoemen » Sun Oct 08, 2017 11:21 pm

All of Episode 12 (minus some extras) is up now.

Edit: This episode really lays out my theory of Asuka and what makes her tick. I'd be curious to know what people here think.
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Postby Mainblag » Mon Oct 09, 2017 8:49 am

What a good read, as usual. I swear, I've read everything up to the latest episode three times now; it's that enjoyable.
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