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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Jan 01, 2016 7:16 am

Awesome :D

He started to pace around the room in a circle. "You absorb the factory... then you get into Unit Zero. And that's important because..." The Doctor slapped his head. "OH! Because that's where she LEARNED HOW TO MAKE NOT-ZOMBIES! The factory - it must've had some kind of blueprint for 'em in its programming! Along with... hydrogen. HYDROGEN! She's producing hydrogen within her own body, just like the not-zombies do, then using it in an internal fuel cell! THAT'S HOW SHE'S POWERING HERSELF! Am I right?! Tell me that I'm right."


mmh.... what about energy conservation?


> Curious to see if anyone gets the trick to Part VI.

*) The voices are SEELE? is it that simple?

*) Also how old was the girl she must have been older than the pilots...
"He's been out on disability leave for the past six years. Committed to the Chitose hospital."

Given that I would say she must be about 25 "now", that is SEELE started working on her 10 years before the second impact.

EDIT: but since the contact experiment of you was in 204 iirc that would also mean that they instated teh sole in unit 00 last, strange.

*) And of cause given what Rei is made from, Dr. Akagi senior would never have be able to strangle Rei1, so the Rei we have now is still the first Rei.

Just bouncing ideas of what this "trick to Part VI" might be, some ideas may be obvious, but whats obvious and what isn't is highly subjective hence I'll just through everything into the ring that might be the "trick" ;)


cant wait for the next chapter ;)
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Postby philopoemen » Sat Jan 02, 2016 12:53 pm

*) And of cause given what Rei is made from, Dr. Akagi senior would never have be able to strangle Rei1, so the Rei we have now is still the first Rei.


No, that still happened. (It's subtle, but look at what Rei does when she talks about "delivering a message" for Zero.) She was very young at the time, and inexperienced both in terms of defending herself and using her body's unique properties. That she refrained from consuming Naoko is a testament to how strongly she was trained or conditioned against using that ability -- or maybe a result of the drugs used to stabilize her form while she was younger.

Or maybe Naoko was conveniently wearing gloves that the anime neglected to show. ^_^ One way or another, that still happened, and the Rei that appears in the story is the second Rei.

*) Also how old was the girl she must have been older than the pilots...


Significantly, yes.

Just bouncing ideas of what this "trick to Part VI" might be, some ideas may be obvious, but whats obvious and what isn't is highly subjective hence I'll just through everything into the ring that might be the "trick" ;)


It's less about the content, more about the way it's written. And that's all I'm going to say for right now.

Thanks for reading!
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Postby philopoemen » Tue Jan 26, 2016 5:14 pm

Updated with Part VII.
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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Jan 31, 2016 3:39 pm

hmm... now I'm confused, if Zero looked exactly like Rei that means that she must have head Yui's DNA, but here I would guess she was to old to be a clone.
So the pressing question is did Yui have a twin sister?
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Postby philopoemen » Mon Feb 01, 2016 10:09 pm

View Original PostTraxXavier wrote:hmm... now I'm confused, if Zero looked exactly like Rei that means that she must have head Yui's DNA, but here I would guess she was to old to be a clone.
So the pressing question is did Yui have a twin sister?


Good question. :)
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Postby philopoemen » Fri Feb 05, 2016 8:02 pm

Part 8 is up.
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Postby TraxXavier » Mon Feb 08, 2016 3:32 pm

Dr. Adam Savage

like the mythbuster Adam Savage LOL :D
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Postby philopoemen » Mon Feb 08, 2016 3:56 pm

View Original PostTraxXavier wrote:like the mythbuster Adam Savage LOL :D


Throughout the multiverse, wherever there is Stuff Blowing Up, an Adam Savage is there. :)
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Postby philopoemen » Tue Feb 16, 2016 11:58 pm

Last part of Episode 10 is now up.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Feb 17, 2016 5:17 am

View Original Postphilopoemen wrote:Last part of Episode 10 is now up.


Just read this, will try to leave a review on FFN when I have time but just wanted to say here that I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to what the next episode brings :)

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Postby philopoemen » Sun Mar 20, 2016 12:23 am

First part of Episode 11 is up.

And here's the Spotify playlist for the episode, in an actually clickable form: https://open.spotify.com/user/philopoemen/playlist/6Ksq7WwwRD3sdwSFs8Ay0d.
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Mar 25, 2016 8:40 am

Great :D
cant wait the next part.
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Postby philopoemen » Sun Mar 27, 2016 10:16 pm

Speaking of which... Episode 11 Part II is up.
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Postby TraxXavier » Mon Mar 28, 2016 1:38 pm

ah perfect :D
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Postby philopoemen » Thu Mar 31, 2016 9:42 pm

Episode 11 Part 3 now up.
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Apr 01, 2016 1:51 pm

Please, Please write faster! I'm to inpatient to wait :D
"What is SEELE!"
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Postby xanderkh » Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:13 pm

"When disaster comes, he's there. And brings a storm in his wake". Seele's Fate will be sealed when the Doctor learns of their true purpose. (HAH, I made a pun. :D ).

Forgive my lack of a reply. You know, real life gets in the way, but these last few chapters have been Epic all the way, and I look forward to reading one every time me and my brother get a notification.

I think one of my favorite parts of the recent chapters is the confrontation with Gendo and the Doctor. Gendo is like a calmer and more sinister form of "The Master", and just as well may be, if not closely, the Doctor's intellectual equal in this universe, and that scares the hell out of me. If we didn't know what Gendo's plan was as well as Seele's plan was as Eva fans, the moral and ethical battle the Gendo and the Doctor have makes you wonder what to believe in, that is if you're struggling on the "Sliding scale of Cynicism and Optimism". Fortunately, we're Eva fans, and thus we root for the Doctor ALL THE WAY. ^_^

However, as Leliel was the beginning of the Descent Arc, I'm deathly afraid of what's going to happen to Shinji, Asuka, Rei, Misato, and the Doctor, cause as these latest chapters prove, it's starting to wear everyone, INCLUDING THE DOCTOR down. I just pray that all of this won't break any of them like in the original series.

Again philopemen, I look eagerly towards the next chapter. :) Good luck.
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Postby philopoemen » Wed Apr 13, 2016 11:27 pm

Okay, Part 4 is finally up. Phew. Full disclosure: this one gets... pretty Gainax-ish.

xanderkh wrote:Forgive my lack of a reply.


Don't worry about it. Like you said, life.

xanderkh wrote:If we didn't know what Gendo's plan was as well as Seele's plan was as Eva fans, the moral and ethical battle the Gendo and the Doctor have makes you wonder what to believe in, that is if you're struggling on the "Sliding scale of Cynicism and Optimism".


Honestly, I kind of think "Sliding Scale of Cynicism and Optimism" is this story -- the whole story, not just this episode -- in a nutshell. Or at least the back-and-forth between the two.
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Apr 15, 2016 12:39 pm

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So... I understand you guys like long chapters.


yes very much :D
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Postby philopoemen » Sat Apr 16, 2016 1:06 am

Part 5 now up. Plus some bonus / omake stuff before.
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