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Postby Zeak » Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:31 pm

Na the paint wasnt that hard to do it looks nicely done still a tad jumpy at the moment. But the stuff from the manga I change the words slightly as Rei didnt burn her hand in the original eva cartoon. But the wording is still along the lines an still fits.
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Postby Zeak » Sun Feb 10, 2008 3:26 am

Ok begining to pack up for the night and head back to base. Just a little update image here so people get an idea where im at. Im finalising all the animation and removing un needed clips. Signing off for the weekend in 30 mins so if I dont post again see ya all next weekend.

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Postby BEsERk EVA01 » Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:12 am

Good work, Zeak. I'll be looking forward to your end result. See ya next week, sir!

Also, email me the sound file I gave to you-I'd like to see the end result of my Zeruel-growling-technique-voice.
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Postby Zeak » Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:25 am

as you can see from the image above I havnt done the sounds as of yet. Consider yourself lucky I gave you that other clip to lol. Ill do it this week and give it to you next weekend. Will have to be Sunday though cant get off base Saturday so leaving the computer there friday night. Got duty Saturday. Well catch you all im off
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Postby EvaCub » Mon Feb 11, 2008 10:11 am

what Volume does Tabris come in??
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Postby Captain_Morgan » Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:07 pm

at the end of the second volume, like the last two panels or something

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Postby Themaninblack » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:08 pm

I going to upload my voice tonight! Enjoy...
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Postby Zeak » Fri Feb 15, 2008 12:58 am

Ok everyone im finalising retake 01 just fixong a few clips but I think its now a good time to discuss the music and sounds. What songs if any would be good for what part of the episode also I managed to remove most of the crap from the story and cut the episode down to just over 20 mins (like eva). also where are the best places to sorce sounds from I managed to get ahold of evangleion mugen so that has a few good sounds im going to use.

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Postby BEsERk EVA01 » Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:50 am

I just realised that the song "Apologise" is pretty suitable for Re-Take. Perhaps you could use that for the ending...or some other scene? Seriously, though, I think the song is pretty good for something like this.

If you want to use it, it's by Timberland, and hope you don't get caught for copyright infringement lmao.
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Postby Zeak » Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:54 am

The opening credits song "ReTake" is staying. I was thinking about during the episode like when Asuka is being strangled by Shinji at the start. Or another I have for when Rei commits suicide and Shinji finds her. But one thing is for sure and I have a very nice sound clip for Asukas death at the end of ReTake 02 (I know dont give it away). Ill post the link
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Postby BEsERk EVA01 » Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:56 am

Zeak wrote:Or another I have for when Rei commits suicide and Shinji


Apologise. THE perfect song. You SHOULD use it. It'll sound GREAT.
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Postby Zeak » Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:55 am

Ok do I get approval on the song for the end of retake 02 almost ready to start editing clips for this. Tell me what you think
The song is called "Synchrotone" the composer is "Hans Zimmer"

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Postby UrsusArctos » Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:12 am

Great choice, although it does get a little wierd towards the end. I think it would work very well.
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Postby Zeak » Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:14 am

Thanks well as for retake 01 im finalising some of the clips tonight and putting in new subtitles so ill put up on youtube to the mid point anyway.
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Postby Themaninblack » Fri Feb 15, 2008 10:05 am

BEsERk EVA01 wrote:
Zeak wrote:Or another I have for when Rei commits suicide and Shinji


Apologise. THE perfect song. You SHOULD use it. It'll sound GREAT.



How about Shake It or Hit Me With your Best Shot, or better yet the Monster Mash Or Take Me To Funky Town
those would work too
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Postby Zeak » Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:12 pm

Themaninblack wrote:
BEsERk EVA01 wrote:
Zeak wrote:Or another I have for when Rei commits suicide and Shinji


Apologise. THE perfect song. You SHOULD use it. It'll sound GREAT.



How about Shake It or Hit Me With your Best Shot, or better yet the Monster Mash Or Take Me To Funky Town
those would work too


I was trying to keep it more along the lines of songs that would fit certain scenes like from the evangelion ost, black hawk down ost, serenity ost ect...
But ill make up an list of songs I could through together for an ost for this one.
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Postby Themaninblack » Fri Feb 15, 2008 11:01 pm

I was joking...I hope
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Postby Zeak » Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:05 am

Thaut so lol anyway Its looking good so ill try get as much as I can up on youtube without the voices but if anybody is ready to start recording im more than happy to give them the script for a character.

*edit* damb I have gone over my monthly downloads sory cant upload till it resets this week
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Postby Zeak » Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:13 pm

well I started compiling a list of songs for the ost

01 - ReTake - Studio Kimigabuchi
02 - Esta soy yo - El Sueño de Morfeo
03 - Lips of an Angel - Hinder
04 - Canon Rock - Guitar Play by JerryC
05 - I miss you - Blink 182
06 - what went wrong? - Blink 182

thats where im at for sountrack at the moment although some of these songs will be in instramental vertion in the episodes.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:56 pm

May I give my own input on songs?

Personally, I think we should stick to Re-Take OST and Eva related songs only. I think anything else just simply wouldn't fit. :shrug:

Here's what I was thinking:


Re-Take OST:

Reincarnation: Somewhere shortly after Shinji's back (or RIGHT after he's back) in the past/AU world.

Girl- When Shinji starts falling for past Asuka.

Double Bind- Possibly one of several scenes: Either when Shinji meets Post-3I Asuka, when he goes to Rei's apartment or when Shinji sees past Asuka after she lost her mind.

The Last Angel- When Shinji gets the news from Post 3I Asuka.

God Bless- When God appears.

Re-Take- Final battle music. ^_^

Ever Dream- Shinji's innermost desire, on the hill with Asuka and their child, the final sequence of this? ("Thankyou. Now I know what it is I want to protect.")

Holy Day- Last few scenes of Vol 4 (This other world and "the Real A/S" on the LCL beach are okay), the final notes would play during that close up of Space/the stars.


Evangelion related songs:

~Eva BGM, either from the original series or Rebuild depending on what works better.

~Tsuki no Meikyuu (Moon Labyrinth) sung by Yoko Takahashi- During a "love" scene? (regardless of whether or not it would be implied sex.) It's the perfect song for such.

~Everything You've Ever Dreamed sung by Arianne- Would be great for the End Credits.
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