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Postby Mundane » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:35 pm

You have aroused my interest, what is that on her fingers?
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Postby cat42 » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:43 pm

Water, you damn perv.

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Postby Mundane » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:44 pm

Hey, you said it was porn.

Well, not you specifically, but it was mentioned in the start.
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Postby cat42 » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:46 pm

No, it's a doujinshi with an interesting story that happends to include graphic depictions of sexual situations, used in a fashion to tell the story.

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Postby Mundane » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:52 pm

Actually, I tried to imply nothing. Was wondering what the hell was on her fingers from NOWHERE.

Let's not argue over stupid things, /cookie
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Postby cat42 » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:53 pm

I'm not arguing WITH you, I'm arguing AT you...


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Postby Darius » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:56 pm

yes, a very good doujinshi at that. I certainly liked it. Although I can't speak in the past tense since I'm not finished..but I nearly finished...I'll continue tomorrow lol.

But generally, it is very good...it's not one of those doujins that just have a horny Asuka and Shinji screwing the life out of eachother (which isn't that bad if the artwork is good...xD)

It's just as cat42 said:

cat42 wrote: it's a doujinshi with an interesting story that happends to include graphic depictions of sexual situations, used in a fashion to tell the story.


and that's exactly how I see it, because the sexual stuff isn't the main hting at all but it sure as hell connects to it.

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Postby cat42 » Tue Oct 10, 2006 10:07 pm

Darius wrote:...it's not one of those doujins that just have a horny Kaworu and Shinji screwing the life out of eachother (which isn't that bad if the artwork is good...xD)...


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Postby Mundane » Tue Oct 10, 2006 10:09 pm

I almost LOL'D, gotta give it to you, Cat.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Wed Oct 11, 2006 11:21 am

Well, despite that one scene with Gendou (he went back to being the same bastard we know and love afterwards ie, Shinji to Gendou, about wanting to save Asuka and that she was pregnant: "I swear I'll kill you!") and Rei (if she had feelings for Shinji and didn't know how to express them, then yeah, Rei's not gonna be 100% in character!) the characters seemed more or less in-character. :roll:

Darius wrote (slighlty modified by me):
...it's not one of those doujins that just have a horny Asuka and Shinji screwing the life out of eachother (which isn't that bad if the artwork is good...xD)...


Now, THAT I can agree with! :D :lol:

Strangly enough, I stumbled across an H doujinshi series that was Shinji/Asuka at first, but ended up (from what I've found so far) Asuka/Kaworu (who were screwing the life out of each other though Kaworu seemed, um, evil to say that least.)
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Postby Mr. Tines » Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:33 pm

Sailor Star Dust wrote:Strangly enough, I stumbled across an H doujinshi series that was Shinji/Asuka at first, but ended up (from what I've found so far) Asuka/Kaworu (who were screwing the life out of each other though Kaworu seemed, um, evil to say that least.)


Was that Girls Bravo 2? That has some A/K, as well as Asuka/Asuka-clone in addition to the usual.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:28 pm

It was called Only Asuka (insert year here). The ones I've found were from 1999 (or 2000) to about 2003. I can't find the rest. >_<
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Postby cat42 » Wed Oct 11, 2006 7:20 pm

Sailor Star Dust wrote:
Darius wrote (slighlty modified by me):
...it's not one of those doujins that just have a horny Kaji and PenPen screwing the life out of eachother (which isn't that bad if the artwork is good...xD)...


Now, THAT I can agree with! :D :lol:


I'm glad we all agree.
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Sailor Star Dust wrote:Strangly enough, I stumbled across an H doujinshi series that was Shinji/Asuka at first, but ended up (from what I've found so far) Asuka/Kaworu (who were screwing the life out of each other though Kaworu seemed, um, evil to say that least.)


Was that Girls Bravo 2? That has some A/K, as well as Asuka/Asuka-clone in addition to the usual.


I'm confused now... Isn't Girls Bravo 2 it's own thing?

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Postby Mr. Tines » Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:16 am

cat42 wrote:Kaji and PenPen


Shinji and Pen^2 I've seen (at least the one frame quoted in the geektionary pairing entry).

cat42 wrote:I'm confused now... Isn't Girls Bravo 2 it's own thing?


"Girls Bravo" is a much re-used name - there is an EVA doujin of that name, as well as the separate anime series (and, presumably, any of its spinoffs).
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:26 pm

Cat42 wrote:Sailor Star Dust wrote:Quote:
Darius wrote (slighlty modified by me):
...it's not one of those doujins that just have a horny Kaji and PenPen screwing the life out of eachother (which isn't that bad if the artwork is good...xD)...
Now, THAT I can agree with! :D :lol:
I'm glad we all agree. :D


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Postby Trigger's Elysium » Mon Dec 11, 2006 11:40 am

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GOD DAMN EVERYTHING TO HELL. ReTake is back. Yeah, the worst doujin on the face of the fucking Earth (excluding fetish stuff, but that's a different issue) is back. Words are not enough to express my intense and hotblooded hatred for ReTake.

Yeah, apparently my topic sucked, so i'll just move it here. The art's nice and all, but that's about it. Man...
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Postby Mr. Tines » Mon Dec 11, 2006 1:44 pm

Trigger's Elysium wrote:the worst doujin on the face of the fucking Earth


It is at least better done than the manga, even if it is just an S/A fanfic with good art.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon Dec 11, 2006 1:45 pm

I think ReTake is far from the worst doujin on the planet there is probably a hell of a lot worse out there. I enjoyed ReTake and not because I'm an S/A fan but because it had a good story and wasn't just random sex like 99% of Eva Doujins out there.

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Postby Trigger's Elysium » Mon Dec 11, 2006 2:17 pm

The official manga has started to suck horribly lately, but it was at least interesting at the start and middle.

Anyway...I know a lot of you guys like it, so remember that it's just Trigger sprouting off his opinions again, nothing more.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Mon Dec 11, 2006 2:23 pm

Um, even if you're not a S/A fan, I don't see how you can think it's the worst doujinshi ever. :?:
First off all, it acutally had a plot even though it was H. And besides that, I've personally read doujinshi that are far worse, either because of the characters are totally OOC or the plot just sucks. (Hell, even with H doujinshi--when it's just "random fucking"--I've found some bad ones!)


Anyway, I do agree that the offical manga is starting to suck, too. ...Though I still have some hope for it. *crosses fingers*
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