A few questions still remain, and inevitable rewrites lay ahead, but the situation has improved considerably, so I'll give you a "slight" revision of 20-D now. This includes part of the sentence that I absent-mindedly forgot to give you (the reason being unimportant)
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20. Second ImpactD. In-Depth InformationThe other Seed of Life, Adam, was awakened by humankind. The Katsuragi Investigation Team frantically attempted to reseal her using the Spear of Longinus, but failed. Ultimately, through the phenomenon of the S2 Engine apparently going into overdrive by artificial means (details are vague due to the team's complete annihilation), it became that only an absolute catastrophe -? the resetting of all life due to the disappearance of A.T. Fields, and the construction of an ecosystem with an Adam base -? was prevented. This is called the Second Impact. The incident blew Adam completely apart.
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There. That should at least be an improvement.
Wayne's already made a few suggestions that definitely seem to be in the right place. (I was pleasantly surprised to come back to the thread -- after another round of suffering -- and see that he'd already taken to the turf.) Here are some notes (brain noise in places, but being selective takes additional energy):
The "phenomenon" refers to what happened to Adam's S2 Engine, but they're not telling us much about that here except that it went out of control, berserk, into overdrive, or what have you as a result of human interference. Artificial or synthetic here, in the sense of "caused by humans".
The catastrophe mentioned is described as "complete and total", or, I suppose one might say, "
utter", "absolute". I guess this wording might be used in contrast with "a catastrophe of lesser caliber". What falls under the "absolute catastrophe" label here is sort of confusing, since they structure the sentence like so:
(kanzen na hakkyoku) = (A.T. Field shoushitsu ni yoru zenseimei no reset) (to) (Adam base to no seitaikei kouchiku) //
(absolute catastrophe) = (the resetting of all life due to the disappearance of A.T. Fields) (and) (the construction of an ecosystem with an Adam base)
Tentative as I am about the language, I'm not sure if the = relationship works like this:
(absolute catastrophe = the resetting of all life due to the disappearance of A.T. Fields) (and) (the construction of an ecosystem with an Adam base)
or this:
(absolute catastrophe) = (the resetting of all life due to the disappearance of A.T. Fields *and* the construction of an ecosystem with an Adam base)
But now that I understand the whole sentence a bit better, I'm thinking it's the latter. :wonders if that sort of minutiae actually matters to anyone else
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So to get to the point, I'm
thinking that the implications are something like this: Second Impact was a big enough disaster as things stood (see 20-A), but because of the S2 stuff, the ABSOLUTE catastrophe entailed by the two things mentioned (i.e., Adam carrying her task out to the full) was averted. (I.e., it was "only" because these two things were prevented that we didn't get an
absolute catastrophe.)
If you have any questions about the changes I neglected to mention, let me know, since I'm too tired to go through them right now.
thewayneiac wrote:If the Katsuragi team caused the "overdrive" with their anti-A.T. Field, then they were in fact successful; it just wasn't enough to save themselves.
Translation flub from bochan_bird. It's unclear why Adam's S2 started going out of control, but, in the extremely economical top-secret UN tape (#21'/DEATH):
Man F (left) "Stop the surface luminescence! It's surpassing calculated predictions!"You can see, far in the back, that the source of this "luminescence" is getting more intense as the cut progresses. This is certainly Adam turning into a "Giant of Light". We get a hint as to what this entails in #26': The MP Evas glow when they "release" their S2 Engines in preparation for that giant explosion. (Their artificial components are what we can actually see lighting up, but the same thing happens with Adam, as well.) The difference is that, with the harpies, the S2s were controlled and the explosion planned.
What went wrong with Adam? Just humans messing with things they don't understand? I've actually been wondering if the CE was "sabotaged" (as it were) by somebody to prevent both Seele's AND Adam's dreams from actualizing that day, but that's just an idea I've been messing around with.
Reichu go sleepies now.
Originally posted on: 06.15.2006, 12:38 AM