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You need to choose the window seat, half-way back. That way you get to meet the mysterious girl who will take you to a world of adventure.
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You need to choose the window seat, half-way back. That way you get to meet the mysterious girl who will take you to a world of adventure.
Guest wrote:Dude, you are a freaking genius. Your writing is schizophrenically hilarious and dark. It reminds me of Vonnegut-whom I love dearly.
After reading some of the other reviews, I was relieved to find that I am not the only one who doesn't understand what's going on. But, in this instance, I don't think that's a bad thing. Please continue writing this, if for no other reason than to keep me in that nauseatingly brilliant state between laughing-on-the-floor and gazing-at-the-screen-like-a-stoner.
P.S., that whole paragraph about the photons was awesome and I am writing it down to preserve it in case I never read this chapter again.
WritingWithoutWarning wrote:This is one of those moments where you sit for a few minutes after its over and eventually you utter two words, which, while simple, sum up the entire experience.
"... the fuck?"
This was strange, to say the least. You bounce back and forth like a ping pong ball on crack, ricocheting off its own hallucinations. There's a story line in there somewhere, enough that you get a gist of what is going on, but you're left questioning if that gist is, in fact, anywhere near correct.
In short, brilliant mate, Bloody Brilliant.
Just as long as the rest of the story isn't quite as mindfuckery as your opening chapter, this promises be a rather interesting story.
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