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Postby Shinoyami65 » Thu Apr 17, 2014 1:46 pm

View Original Postxanderkh wrote:And the cycle of destruction continues!

Will the circle ever be broken? :sniffle:


Will the circle...be [s]unbroken[/s] broken

By and by...by and by...

Damn Bioshock Infinite flashbacks.

Maybe you could write a fic after the end as more peoples start to come back and Shinji slowly starts to [s]rebuild[/s] heal himself.
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Postby H-MangaEnthusiast » Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:24 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:Hey anyone know if there are any fanfics for 3.0 where the treat Shinji really bad? Like really, really, bad? Like they are this close * makes an inch between thumb and index finger* to killing him.


I can't tell you where you definitely can't find one.

On the front page of FF.net.

By some guy with a similar avy and name...

HA!

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:31 pm

View Original PostH-MangaEnthusiast wrote:I can't tell you where you definitely can't find one.

On the front page of FF.net.

By some guy with a similar avy and name...

HA!

I regret nothing.


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Let me repeat what I said in the other thread Good Sir *Ahem* "Please do amazing things with Unwanted Passenger, I need something to get the bad taste of Reticence and Reconciliation out of my mouth" Though I'm kinda disappointed at how sympathetic Asuka is towards Shinji in your fic, coming to see him while he's cleaning? You make her too weak. :shifty: That may or may not be sarcastic

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Postby ElMariachi » Thu Apr 17, 2014 3:05 pm

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Wait, I can understand why you despise the drug-induced batshit insanity that is Reconciliation, but what do you have against Reticence?
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Apr 17, 2014 3:20 pm

View Original PostElMariachi wrote:^
Wait, I can understand why you despise the drug-induced batshit insanity that is Reconciliation, but what do you have against Reticence?


Just personal reasons bro, but a major one to me was that they never follow up on using the Longinus Spear and the Cassius Spear to repair the damage done, Shinji doesn't even mention it to them "Hey guys I know a way to reverse the damage I've done".

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Postby ElMariachi » Thu Apr 17, 2014 3:37 pm

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Well to be fair after the disaster that was 3.0 no one wanted to try the spears trick ever again, besides no one knew where the LoC had gone
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until EVA-13 appeared out of nowhere and impaled EVA 8+2 with it, and just after EVA-13 had been destroyed and Unit 01 ended in its 3 year space vacation, so at this point using the LoC was impossible anyway.
Also, Yui's presence in the epilogue imply that EVA-01 was definitely dead when it crash-landed the carcass of the Wunder back on Earth.

Finally, except with the red oceans, the world is still inhabitable, only the people were mass tanged by Third Impact, and its starting to be partially reversed with the return of the victims of Third Impact.

Besides 3.0's narration did everything it could to show us that this kind of plans are flawed from the start.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Thu Apr 17, 2014 3:46 pm

View Original PostElMariachi wrote:^
Well to be fair after the disaster that was 3.0 no one wanted to try the spears trick ever again, besides no one knew where the LoC had gone
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until EVA-13 appeared out of nowhere and impaled EVA 8+2 with it, and just after EVA-13 had been destroyed and Unit 01 ended in its 3 year space vacation, so at this point using the LoC was impossible anyway.
Also, Yui's presence in the epilogue imply that EVA-01 was definitely dead when it crash-landed the carcass of the Wunder back on Earth.

Finally, except with the red oceans, the world is still inhabitable, only the people were mass tanged by Third Impact, and its starting to be partially reversed with the return of the victims of Third Impact.

Besides 3.0's narration did everything it could to show us that this kind of plans are flawed from the start.


I don't feel that Kaworu was lying when he said it would work, Kaworu doesn't seem the type to lie. No one went on a quest to find it, Shinji didn't even tell anyone, it's an important piece of information.
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And where the hell did Eva 13 find it?

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Postby ElMariachi » Thu Apr 17, 2014 4:04 pm

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Well personally I'm not so sure that Kaworu wasn't lying, or at least that he wasn't holding some information about what the spears would exactly do, but that's a debate for another place.

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As for the LoC, remember that it didn't disappeared, but according to Kaworu it morphed into a LoL, so Gendo probably found a way to morph it back into a LoC.
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Postby Cody MacArthur Fett » Thu Apr 17, 2014 9:04 pm

After nearly a year long absence "Dazed and Confused" has finally updated not once, not twice, but three times. The following is a link to the first update in the chain.

[url]http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dazed-and-confuzed-evangelion-peggy-sue-thread-two.208081/page-9#post-13880066[/url]
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Postby Bagheera » Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:43 am

View Original PostCody MacArthur Fett wrote:After nearly a year long absence "Dazed and Confused" has finally updated not once, not twice, but three times. The following is a link to the first update in the chain.

[url]http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dazed-and-confuzed-evangelion-peggy-sue-thread-two.208081/page-9#post-13880066[/url]


How bizarre. I can read it when I'm not logged in, but once I log in it tells me I don't have permission to view the page. Guess I'll have to rely on random checks to remain updated on the fic.
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Postby H-MangaEnthusiast » Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:59 am

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:
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Let me repeat what I said in the other thread Good Sir *Ahem* "Please do amazing things with Unwanted Passenger, I need something to get the bad taste of Reticence and Reconciliation out of my mouth" Though I'm kinda disappointed at how sympathetic Asuka is towards Shinji in your fic, coming to see him while he's cleaning? You make her too weak. :shifty: That may or may not be sarcastic


I can't wait to disappoint you. :devil:
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Fri Apr 18, 2014 3:15 am

View Original PostH-MangaEnthusiast wrote:I can't wait to disappoint you. :devil:


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Oh my God man just have Asuka bust a few caps in Shinji's ass, it's not that hard, please someone let Asuka kill Shinji. Don't make me cry bro, don't make me cry.
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Postby ElMariachi » Fri Apr 18, 2014 3:25 am

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Oh, that's what you meant by not being disappointed. :|
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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Fri Apr 18, 2014 3:26 am

View Original Postxanderkh wrote:Will the circle ever be broken? :sniffle:


Like Bags said, it's already broken: now it's up to them to apply the emotional equivalent of duct tape and see if it holds together long enough for the mending to take place.

And that's just canon. Now, when it comes to what we come up with? Remember one of the rules when it comes to them: "To create a better relationship, the old one must first be destroyed...pretty much from the ground up". Fire to ashes, then a rebirth.
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Postby Monk Ed » Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:34 am

Er, what? Shinji/Asuka relationship writing advice in this topic too?
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