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Postby Olin of Xephon » Tue Oct 26, 2004 12:26 pm

And now...since I love to hear people groan...Eva Poetry!

I'm serious. (half serious) Anybody have a ode to Rei's silky thighs?
A verse about Asuka's rage? Perhaps a balad about Kaji's stubble?
Or other more heavy matters?

Post them here!

(because if you don't, and very soon, Evamonkey will lock this on general principle)
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby Hexon.Arq » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:29 pm

Rapturous Apathetical Nonaligned Terror

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"If you cannot identify
I only ask you do not try
If you cannot identify
I only ask you do not try"

Swallow, engorged, enrapture overboard
Obsession, depression, outrageous confession
I've become a window with only one side
Look out to look in, from the seat of my pride

"I am not you and I don't want to be
I don't care if you live if you won't die for me
This has not been a person you've tried to ignore
A beast has arrived to lay waste to your world"

<The Banner>
Don't you dare preach to me about truth
Cause we all know that this has been all about you
Just wait till I reveal what I've been forced to hide
Cause I know that it's much more alive

Resident, pestilence, confined to my decadence
Excellent, brilliant, now where is the rest of it?
"I am the sun and I don't care to shine
An era, a dream from a core so benign"
Symbolic, arrested, a truth gone untested
Demonic, subsonic, a soul never rested
Unfeeling for born out from nether the mane
Shit glory and passion from swallowing pain

"I am not you and I never could be
The world's not the same when you view it from me
The view's not the same when you make yourself try
But you'd have to know me just to hope to know why"

<The Banner>
Don't you dare preach to me about truth
Cause we all know that this has been all about you
Just wait till I reveal what I've been forced to hide
Cause I know that it's much more alive

Coy faker of paper, the loser of gods
Won't you retouch this gospel and leave us alarmed
Our end is upon us, they're ready to die
Deception, the only and true other side
The story, the lies and the reason for doubt
The re-think, the crutch we could not live without
The fantasy spoiled, the souls made to rust
No reason to dream, now the crutch leans on us...

"And all who don't care, continue."

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_don't do what sonic does

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Postby Kiel » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:31 pm

ooh. Very nice, Hexon.Arq.
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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:17 pm

~Thats some deep $hit Hex. lol.

~Does Haiku count??
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Postby Xanatose » Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:33 pm

Well, I don't hate you, but I could make an exception if you insist. :) As for closing this site down, I probably should just because I'm finally able to post again and I need to lay down The Law(tm) so you munchkins don't get out of hand. :twisted: Tell you what -- since this is chit chat, I'm not going to touch this -- yet. ^_^

Oh, and so this isn't completely off topic:

Shinji's voice, too shrill
English dubs, it is painful
Damn you, ADV

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Postby Hexon.Arq » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:17 pm

God in a hard shell
Christ as a wingless maggot
New Age Messiah

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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:25 pm

Void
In my heart there is emtyness
In my Soul there is Emtyness
My will may shatter
But my mind will wonder
why is the a void there and here
Then there is Rei
She fills my emtyness with hers
Now we are one

~Im not a poet so that was my best.
~That was for Rei1, 2, and 3
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Postby ChronoX » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:27 pm

Eva-01

EVA-01 goin' berserk
kicking angel ass a lot
Ritsuko all confused
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby Hexon.Arq » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:30 pm

Zombie screen children
Esoteric passion born
Complete consumption

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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:36 pm

U.1 Revenge

Crunch, crunch
He tasted so good
Seeing the other half his body
Makes life so good
$hit got indegestion
Damn master and taco bell


I tried to make it funny. Was it?
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Postby Dave » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:58 pm

*Gives Hexon a standing ovation*
Chilling my friend, and true indeed.

Tell me my love, which is worse?
To shed more tears than blood,
or more blood than tears?

-To Rei
Beatus vir qui suffert tentationem.

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Postby ChronoX » Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:10 pm

nicely put dave

and dark firestar, yours was a bit funny but interesting
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:44 pm

Thanks chronoX's
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Postby Hexon.Arq » Tue Oct 26, 2004 7:52 pm

Tell me my love, which is worse?
To shed more tears than blood,
or more blood than tears?


Tears than blood, I say
The soul can fly and bleed on
Tears may never dry

This thread has got me
But I think it should be moved
Over to fandom

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Postby sadsadshinji » Tue Oct 26, 2004 9:15 pm

who am i?do i belong?
the sky is grey with sorrow
i dislike red
Rei

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Postby Dave » Tue Oct 26, 2004 9:26 pm

Hexon.Arq wrote:Tears than blood, I say
The soul can fly and bleed on
Tears may never dry


Blood than tears, I say
For tears leave hope
Yet death is hope's last breath
Beatus vir qui suffert tentationem.

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Postby MongolSquad » Tue Oct 26, 2004 9:40 pm

::in a beatnik style::

You fuck with my mind
But I love it
You warp my views on society
But I hate it
You fuck with me
And I still yet....have not had enough

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Postby Olin of Xephon » Wed Oct 27, 2004 12:44 am

:shock: Not only do they NOT hate it...their posting! :shock: Wow!

I like everything up so far, good haikus.
Good God Hexon! People, we have a resident poet on our hands!

Here's one I wrote awhile back...


Unfamilliar Ceiling

There are two things that look me in the eye when I awake.
A unfamilliar ceiling and the desire to tear it down.
I wake and walk, and sometimes run, but the unfamilliar ceiling has come.

I'm stranger at home, I'm a stanger abroad, I'm a stranger to myself.
Nothing seems familliar.

Still searching fruitlessly for a kind word or two, the unfamilliar ceiling is my life, and there is nothing I can do.

I go to sleep at night staring up at a unfamilliar ceiling. For what was good is gone, and the futures a mystery, the present is the ceiling.

And the ceiling is unfamilliar to me.
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby MAGI » Wed Oct 27, 2004 2:00 am

Children equals three.
Enter one, then kick him out:
Shinji goes berserk.

Sad, sad Shinji sleep.
Wake to see Kaworu peep.
Revenge is so sweet.
(It rhymes :D)

Shinji is pissed off.
Uber-Rei asks what he wants:
"Everyone, just die."
("asks" is one syllable, but I'm not sure.)

How's that? I think it's funny. :lol:
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Postby ChronoX » Wed Oct 27, 2004 6:36 pm

Dark FireStar wrote:Thanks chronoX's

no prob DFS

here's another crappy hiku by me:

so firery red
so ever filled with anger
fighting gracefully

Asuka Langley Sohryu
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.


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