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Postby zephyr72 » Fri Dec 08, 2006 8:04 pm

First, i liked eva-r quite a bit.

second, i hated the whole "Rei thinking she is Shinji's mother" thing.
correct me if i'm wrong, but something like that cannot happen right. i was under the impression that eva-01 had yui's soul in it, and that Rei is just a clone physically. maybe i'm missing something

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Postby Mr. Tines » Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:00 am

zephyr72 wrote:i was under the impression that eva-01 had yui's soul in it, and that Rei is just a clone physically.


That is correct.

The problem I had with EVA-R was more fundamental. Streams of dialog like

A: ...

B: ...

A: ...

B: ...

etc. stopped me dead in my track (and this is from someone who could read NXE through to the end).
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Postby ThroneofDravaris » Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:17 am

She was in Eva-01 when she started thinking she was Yui, so I guess they traded souls.

Or something.
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Postby zephyr72 » Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:46 pm

ThroneofDravaris wrote:She was in Eva-01 when she started thinking she was Yui, so I guess they traded souls.

Or something.


i'd forgotten about that. it makes more sense to me now, but i still don't think it made that much sense and i just didn't like that part.

as far as the script-style of writing, i am fine with that, it makes it a faster read. though it is fun to immerse yourself in book-style writing as well.

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Postby 68th Angel » Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:54 pm

I just wish they would do a whole episode doujin instead of random pages. :roll:
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Postby DatDude » Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:30 pm

I can't even remember that part of the story its been so long
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Postby Opteron-O3 » Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:22 pm

Sorry but what is Eva-R?
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Postby Omegagouki » Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:44 pm

Opteron-O3 wrote:Sorry but what is Eva-R?


It's this. It's pretty much a large-scale fanfiction that does away with 25 and 26 and adds new content, characters, and development, before eventually ending with Instrumentality. I thought it was an interesting read, but a lot of people here would disagree. It has its flaws, some glaring, but it was decent enough, IMO.
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Postby Opteron-O3 » Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:30 pm

Thanks Omega.

From what I've read it sounds pretty good!
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Postby Hexon.Arq » Thu Apr 05, 2007 4:44 pm

Mr. Tines wrote:
zephyr72 wrote:i was under the impression that eva-01 had yui's soul in it, and that Rei is just a clone physically.


That is correct.

The problem I had with EVA-R was more fundamental. Streams of dialog like

A: ...

B: ...

A: ...

B: ...

etc. stopped me dead in my track (and this is from someone who could read NXE through to the end).


I felt that was one of the more illustrative utilities of EVA-R. I figured "A: ..." translated to "shot of A looking pensive".

What I didn't like was the part where the people would talk. And stuff happened. That got boring.

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Postby Reichu » Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:08 pm

Hexon.Arq wrote:What I didn't like was the part where the people would talk. And stuff happened. That got boring.

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Postby Executor » Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:14 pm

Which is better? NXE, or EVA-R?

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Postby Ornette » Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:18 pm

Executor wrote:Which is better? NXE, or EVA-R?

I've actually read all of EVA-R, but I couldn't get very far in NXE. One thing about EVA-R (the author came to ANF and answered to some of the criticism people were giving EVA-R) is that it was written during a time when very little outside source material was around and not much discussion had happened in the English speaking world. So you're going to get some incorrect assumptions made by the author.

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Postby Mr. Tines » Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:44 am

Executor wrote:Which is better? NXE, or EVA-R?

I've actually read all of NXE, but I couldn't get very far in EVA-R. One thing about NXE is that it was written during a time when very little outside source material was around and not much discussion had happened in the English speaking world. So you're going to get some incorrect assumptions made by the authors, like Maya being straight.

I preferred the intense luggage packing action in NXE to the inferred helpless pauses in the EVA-R narration.

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Postby Executor » Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:34 am

Between reading both, I prefer NXE more, because it really seemed to hit home as far as a story goes. EVA-R is decent, but the pauses are annoying...

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Postby Thedoctorinaevauniverse » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:13 pm

could anyone give me a link to NXE?


Thanks in advance
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Postby Ornette » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:18 pm

Thedoctorinaevauniverse wrote:could anyone give me a link to NXE?


Thanks in advance

You can choose any of these sites and download or read online:
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Postby Jay911 » Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:55 pm

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