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Postby Kendrix » Mon Jun 07, 2021 5:11 pm

Ah, so they're building a little model battlefield? cute
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Postby Blockio » Mon Jun 07, 2021 6:21 pm

I wasn't thinking of it as all of them doing a collaborative effort on a single project (at least not the ones that are in progress) as much as them just being a modeling club, but either interpretation works.
That being said, if it was a single project it would be absolutely massive in scale, probably the size of a large dining table or a whole room if the "mass production units" that Rei is painting are Evas instead of tanks
...alternatively, could be something with forced perspective. Damn, I kinda want to write a sequel now that goes into them building a diorama together
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Postby Kendrix » Tue Jun 08, 2021 3:41 am

I'm just reminded of how O'Brien and Dr. Bashir would always build those model battlefields in Star Trek DS1
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Postby Blockio » Tue Jun 08, 2021 7:13 am

I haven't seen any significant amount of the Star Trek shows, so I can't claim inspiration there; but I always like it when scifi shows acknowledge model kit nerds in-universe
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Postby Kendrix » Fri Jun 11, 2021 10:59 pm

"Planning against monsters gave me good training"

i do like that Misato sort of effs up but not enrirely
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