Been a while since I've posted anything fanfiction related on here. Kinda took a bit of an extended break from it after finishing Braver Than We Are last year for a number of reasons but I've been wanting to get back into it for some time. This is something I started planning out some time ago, it's something I've been wanting to write for ages and therefore I'm more than a little bit nervous about finally sharing it. This is Evangelion - Fallen Light, the basic premise is to take the cast/concepts of Eva and set it within the Star Trek universe, so it is a bit of a crossover although I am keen to try and avoid just having cameos from Trek characters all over the place.
Anyway, hope people enjoy it
Summary: 2390 - A young man by the name of Shinji Ikari boards the USS Tokyo after being summoned by his father to a remote colony in the Gamma Quadrant, once there he learns he is to pilot the strange ship known as the Evangelion against an enemy that threatens the entire galaxy.
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Table Of Contents
Chapter 1 - To Boldy Go...
Chapter 2 - Where Even the Dominion Don't Go...
Evangelion - Fallen Light
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I like this! Glad to see I'm not the only one with similar ideas for Evangelion in mind.
I'll definitely keep an eye on this.
I'll definitely keep an eye on this.
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Great to see you writing again I look forward to the coming chapters
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Thank you both!
Hope anyone else who is checking out the fic/has read it also enjoys it. Second chapter has now been uploaded
Hope anyone else who is checking out the fic/has read it also enjoys it. Second chapter has now been uploaded
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Re: Evangelion - Fallen Light
Not a crossover I would have considered. Interested in seeing where it goes.
I made it part of the way through Chapter 1, but I honestly think you need to give it another proof-reading sweep or two. There is a problem in general with punctuation not being properly applied, resulting in e.g. a lot of run-on sentences, or commas where there should be semi-colons or sentence breaks. All of that stuff is important is dictating the flow of the work and eliminating any ambiguity in how the phrasing is parsed. In addition to that, there are frequent moments where the wording breaks down and doesn't make sense, like you were in the middle of implementing an edit and forgot to finish, or it's just a simple "brain fart"-style typo.
If you need help spotting some of these, I can help, but definitely challenge yourself to find as many as you can on your own.
I made it part of the way through Chapter 1, but I honestly think you need to give it another proof-reading sweep or two. There is a problem in general with punctuation not being properly applied, resulting in e.g. a lot of run-on sentences, or commas where there should be semi-colons or sentence breaks. All of that stuff is important is dictating the flow of the work and eliminating any ambiguity in how the phrasing is parsed. In addition to that, there are frequent moments where the wording breaks down and doesn't make sense, like you were in the middle of implementing an edit and forgot to finish, or it's just a simple "brain fart"-style typo.
If you need help spotting some of these, I can help, but definitely challenge yourself to find as many as you can on your own.
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Very enjoyable update
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