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Postby Karma Burn » Thu Aug 12, 2004 4:35 pm

Damn straight Hexon.Arg! Now, none of you have reasons not post feedback!
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Postby Olin of Xephon » Thu Aug 12, 2004 10:57 pm

Rereading the story, I have to say it holds up well. (anything looks well written at 1:57 in the morning, so I got back here early)

I'm pretty horrible at feedback since I'm not very picky about how something was written.

I just care about what was written. I do like what I see.
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Postby advent_child » Mon Sep 20, 2004 1:59 pm

It's a very well-done job...if you wrote it all by yourself congratulations...

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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Sep 21, 2004 12:34 am

~Leons Rateing is in. Dont be mad at any rateings!

~The Good ^;^
*>* Fun to read
*<* Easy to get into
*/* BIG words

~The Bad >_<
>o^ NAMES SUCK ( what the hell is Samul Frost sounds like a cult leader)
^o< SPRB (Some Parts Repetios and Boring)
~_~ Long ( need shorter chapters or a few breaks or somthing)

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~Score out of 10 : 5
~Bonus : 1 (how much time and effort put in)
~EXTRA!!(rarly given) : 2 (true Evangelion fan :wink: )

~Total : 8 (Almost perfect BUT ITS NOT!)
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Postby Karma Burn » Sun Sep 26, 2004 11:41 am

~THE UGLY O.O
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I suppose it's hard to be original when dealing with a story about the US branch, or anything to do with eva for that matter. I've heard it's been attempted many times.

Anyway...who knows when I'll have time to work on it again...BUT IT WILL BE FINISHED! That's a promise. I hope as the story continues you'll like it a bit more, and everything will make sense.
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Postby sadsadshinji » Sun Sep 26, 2004 5:19 pm

sorry...i dont remember what i was talking about either...
its a good idea...stick to it...

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Postby Karma Burn » Mon Oct 18, 2004 6:33 pm

I know many of you don't care but I'm going to try to start updating the story soon. Hopefully, by next week I'll have added the rest of 2.5 and at least starting to work on chapter 3.

I think I should start updating by chapter pieces inside of complete chapters, that should make it seem like I'm doing more work than I actually am or something...

High school sucks...
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Postby Dark FireStar » Tue Oct 19, 2004 5:39 pm

Damn got dizzy reading this whole post. lol. Its good you should keep going!! :!:
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Postby the_seventh_child » Wed Oct 20, 2004 5:31 am

yeah you should keep going Karma..
and indeed high school sucks a lot..
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Postby sadsadshinji » Wed Oct 20, 2004 8:57 am

what year of high school are you in?

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Postby the_seventh_child » Wed Oct 20, 2004 1:05 pm

sadsadshinji wrote:what year of high school are you in?

this is reffering to who?
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Postby sadsadshinji » Wed Oct 20, 2004 9:41 pm

freshman, sophmore, junior, senior....

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Postby Karma Burn » Thu Oct 21, 2004 10:32 am

Me? I'm a senior so it's especially hard. It's not the work load that's the problem. It's the "no motivation" part that really gets to you. Trust, me for those you who are younger, unless you're extremely focused (in other words, not a normal slacker teenager), it doesn't stop getting harder.
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Postby sadsadshinji » Thu Oct 21, 2004 5:20 pm

i know...i'm in junior year...
at least you can kind of relax second semester...


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