Evangelion: After the Impact - DISCUSSION THREAD (2)

[Defectron]

Yeah that might work, my next post will be about how me and Naomi find our way back to where Phoenix's house is.

Also keep in mind what he really wants is what's in that case, he just wants Issei because he knew that he was the one carrying it and he probably he knows where it is.

[Ryjin]

For unit Zero I was figuring that Rei snaps out of her shell shock after hearing Shinji has been kidnapped by Ritsuko and gets pissed.

For the Trident while having mana go down with her ship wold make for good drama it makes for bad tactics since right now we need all the fire power we can get so either Ryujin is going to remote operate it or some else takes up piloting it (I was thinking Shiro, the sheer irony of him being a good mech pilot speaks for its self).

For getting Shinji back, that works.

[GasmaskAvenger]

so perhaps we do the trade at Phoenix's house, then

that shall work out, since we end up meeting up with Naomi & Manticore at Phoenix's house, in which Lindquist & his crew end up showing up a bit after we show up

of course, only Johnson, Phoenix, Ryujin & the bearded man get out of the car & do the deal

of course, not only this is the first time Manticore is seeing Lindquist in a long time, but also this is the first time in a while Ryujin sees Naomi up close


& as for Shiro ends up taking over command of the Trident, that sounds both hilarious & brilliant at the same time

so that'll work out perfectly, but also, we should give Mana a proper burial & such, so while we keep the Trident, we also give Mana a big farewell in a different area of the factory

[Defectron]

Also he doesn't look like he did in his human form aside from the red hair, what tips me off to his identity is the name "Lindquist Von Spielberg" which was what he called his self insert lightning god mid boss when he GM'd our rifts rpg in highschool.

[GasmaskAvenger]

so yeah, there's going to be a lot of drama happening during the trade


now...as for the container, we secretly replace the actual contents of the container with something bogus & silly & we keep what was originally inside it

[Great Genius Shinji-Sama]

I posted a reply about the Shinji/Rits and Shinji/Rei H scenes and stuff; but I accidentally did it in the actual RP thread

[Ryjin]

I'm thinking we take Manas body with us since we don't have the time to give her a burial right now.

As for Ryujin seeing Naomi up close again, that should be interesting.......

[GasmaskAvenger]

I just saw that


now...speaking of Rei/Shinji, the first scene & the scene that happens later will the polar opposites, where in the first scene, Shinji is brainwashed & attempts to rape her, while the latter scene (Which is before we head out to Naomi's Fortress & commence the first part of the epic finale) is an actual, genuine sex scene between the two

this is a concept i've had in my head for a long time now & i'm finally sharing it

@Ryjin: So we end up taking Mana's corpse with us as well? Sounds fun

[Defectron]

Hey I just had an idea, what if somehow Biomancer got Manas body and made her into something weird?

[GasmaskAvenger]

now that's brilliant

somehow...during the exchange, Biomancer sneaks out the vehicle Lindquist & his crew came from & steals Mana's body

& after the trade, someone in our group says "Hey! What happened to Mana's body? It's gone!!"

[Ryjin]

About Manas body, yeah we take her with us so we can find a better place to bury her, after which if the Biomancer finds her, well these things just kinda happen ya know.

Also I might not be able to work on my post just yet, I know what I want to write but as to how to word it my minds drawing a blank.......

[GasmaskAvenger]

I suppose we just somehow put Mana's body down somewhere for the time being & Biomancer (Who snuck into the vehicle Lindquist & his crew came in, via using that technology Naomi mentioned to Manticore) ends up finding the body while sneaking around & snags it, since no one is by it

[Ryjin]

Just about what I was thinking, after we give her a proper funeral The Biomacner finders her somehow (I already got an idea on how he does that) and makes her into one hell of an psych op weapon.

Anyway I'm going to be off for a bit, my little brother wants to get back to watching B5, afterwords I'll probably have my writing gusto back.

[Great Genius Shinji-Sama]

While I do get into H from time to time, I have no experience writing it, and kinda feel uncomfortable doing so............. I know I was the one who suggested it in the first place

[GasmaskAvenger]

Wow..I now got the image of a dead-looking Mana walking around, killing people with psychic powers

perhaps when she dies the second time, she actually remembers who she really is & sacrifices herself. This won't be until much later, so yeah...sounds great

[Great Genius Shinji-Sama]

I got carried away here. Hate to disappoint everyone; but Im having a hard time getting to the rape and H scenes. Im currently trying to kill my bad H habits, so inspiration my muse is coming up short.

And I dont think the Coach will help............. its a personal issue.

[GasmaskAvenger]

I can easily pull of disgusting little rape/hentai shit

you can clean up my stuff & add your personal touch to my written smut if that'll help

[Great Genius Shinji-Sama]

It might help. But I'm thinking I'm just feeling dry right now. But I would appreciate something to help get me started.

[GasmaskAvenger]

alrighty

i'll just do the Ritsuko/Shinji part (The one where a brainwashed Shinji & Rei is more of an "attempted rape" rather than successful rape), then i'll PM it to you & you add your own touch to it & clean it up a bit

trust me, I haven't really done anything like this in quite a few years, but it'll be interesting

[Great Genius Shinji-Sama]

Sounds good. BTW, for the Shinji/Rei part i have in mind for it to involve bdsm, tying down, and attempted vaginal and/or anal. I was going to give little clues that Ritschan was in control or something like having Shinji call Rei a doll and such.