NemZ wrote:It's not like he didn't foreshadow both charecters' ends well before the time came though (check the Pen^2 scene again), so it's far from just shoehorned in there.
What really does bug me, however (and in most post-3I fics), is the idea that there's still a town left to wander about in. The black moon got yanked out of the Earth right under the city and it's wider by far than Tokyo-3's city limits, so what the hell town is left? It should be just some random debris, and certainly no intact shops full of snacks and whatnot. Even worse are fics where Nerv HQ is somehow still down there... but I digress. Pet peeve.
It's conceivable that at least some of the outskirts are still there, but yeah, pretty unlikely. There
are buildings shown in the final scene, though.
Also, it's a modern metropolitan area; 13.75 kilometers is nothing.
If you don't like the person you were, is ending up a different person really such a bad thing though?
No, but I'm not sure that applies in this case.
My favorite part of the fic was not Asuka however (though that wasn't bad), but rather the exploration of how Shinji and Misato dealt with her condition. Lots of stuff there that absolutely rings true, though depressing all the same.
True.