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Asuka'sBigBrother

That's not a story, that's a sequence of events. Why would that be interesting? What I find is interesting is how you were actually expecting me to write a story... But nah, "if it can be done, why don't u do it?" isn't a legit argument. I haven't made a lilo and stitch/Kim Possible cross...

Asuka'sBigBrother

Cybermat47#874298 wrote:Check out Neon Genesis Evangelion by Hideaki Anno.

I meant after instrumentality -_-

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silvermoonlight#874259 wrote:Then please show us your skill and make it work.

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Tommy meets Asuka. Asuka and Tommy play on a slide. Tommy and Asuka go home.

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Gendo'sPapa#148053 wrote:No more a slap on the wrist than those American kids who watch some anime and feel like popping random words of Japanese in their speech is cool.

It's not.

I use baka in my speech, whatchu gonna do bout it.

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That said the plot of a given fanfic often necessitates that he be the antagonists because his canonical goals run very much contrary to those of most main characters. He's not a nice person either and that would be even more inaccurate. Not really. His goal, to avoid instrumentality and extinction...

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how about ->a one shot about gendo, ritsuko, and kyoko chillin in instrumentality. I would prefer they don't get out, but we get a slimpse into their experiences -> a story focusing on Misato as she tries to take care of adoptive kids as a single mom -> a story about Kaji trying to sever all ties ha...

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Silvermoonlight speaks the truth. Now, you can certainly find a way to make them work (you could take the post-apocalyptic setting of Splatoon and place it solidly after Instrumentality), but you'd have to significantly alter parts of either setting (maybe both) to make the story effective. There's...

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They don't, but it definitely helps. Writing a story is like cooking--you can't throw ingredients together at random, you have to know which ones complement each other. Otherwise you'll be left with a disgusting slop. Any two stories can compliment each other if told the right way. The stories them...

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C.T.1290#874231 wrote:
And about my writing, I guess that you may be right about maybe being a bit too detailed.

Nope, that's not the issue. The issue is what that detail is spent on. Don't tell us what the characters are thinking. Use sufficient detail that we can infer what the characters think.

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The Eva Monkey#874088 wrote:I believe it's been well-established that Sadamoto favors Rei.

Sadamoto is aware who Rei is in relation to Shinji, right?

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I just wanna

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5th chapter is finished(the story is all on page 1). I've also revised chapter one and given minor edits to the chapters in between.

Read.

Give feedback.

Have Cream Soda.

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Ray#874218 wrote:Character development for Ritsuko a mom? Also, where does Rei Asuka and Misato fit in this story?

It's your story, you tell us.

Asuka'sBigBrother

Tohsa Akagi offers a helluva lot of potential for character development.

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Some nice scenery but you're telling the reader too much. Don't tell us what Asuka thinks of Shinji, show us by describing her face, thoughts, ect. You spend too much time expositing on what these characters are feeling or thinking rather than showing us what they think or feel with their actions. T...

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C.T.1290#873975 wrote:I wrote the first chapter on my very first EVA fanfic on here, but no one has left a review yet.

Gotcha fam.

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I don't understand why your freaking out, i just suggested an idea for a fanfic jeez Vux is right. This thread's purpose is to get ideas going, there's no need to get worked up because you find an idea uninteresting. Additionally, there's no story which [i]couldn't[/i[ be good. It all comes down to...

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^ With all due respect, that ancient Chinese proverb is a crock of shit. I mean, the ratio is already off, because I can objectively say that, as miserable as I am at times, my life is pretty damned good in the grand scheme of things. The majority of human beings can objectively look at their lives...

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Someone make a satirical nge crossover with the boondocks. Would be funny as hell if executed right.

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* Makes a crossover between nge and alvin and the chipmunks that works

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If it wasn't for the guns, the human species would have went extinct early on and we wouldn't have a show.

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