Expansions?

Dooo ehhhht

I'm all for it.

Nerv Branch 3, Berlin Footsteps echoed in the hallway as a young serious faced man with short and neatly trimmed brown hair headed towards his destination. He was dressed in a uniform and had a firearm at his side, and it seemed that the few people he passed would go out of their way to stay as far...

You've got an intriguing setup there Blue, looking forward to the next part.


Also I think it's Nuke next then Lance.

ChocoBP BPES

I know I'm not on as much lately but that doesn't mean I don't want to drop in every now and then ;)

Valda was sitting on a bench looking at the sky forlornly with her mask sitting in her hands for a change. She was lost in her thoughts and reflected upon her time with Sakamoto earlier; that stummer affe was dumb, brutish and irritating, but at the same time was surprisingly earnest and well meanin...

The night was still and the light of the moon barely grazed the artificially illuminated streets below. Sabre looked out of the window of the room he and his master had occupied to enact their scheme with caution and some apprehension. "Are you sure about this?" he asked his master as she ...

Interesting post, though all I could think to myself when Shirou was trying to talk about the whole physics thing was This

Impressive Aggro, I look forward to a part two

As tempting as the first one is... 2... go with 2

yeah, that's the end of chapter 1.

Now remember your score, it'll carry over to chapter 2

Valda: A Maiden's ' Fragile ' Heart Chapter 1. pt 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now at home, you find yourself lazing about in a simple red polo shirt and white shorts. The TV is on but you aren’t paying any attention to what is on it, right now all you can think about is the delicious smell t...

1, Black blade ftw

Valda: A Maiden’s ’Fragile’ Heart Chapter 1 Your name is Ayaka Nagori, you are a girl in class 2-A of Tokyo 3 junior high where you also serve as the class representative, though no one seems to care all that much. You stand at 5’3 with long wavy brown hair and a fringe that is trimmed to just abov...

Sorry Blue, can't do that... wont fit with the set-up I've got going XD

Though if it makes you feel better, if this one goes well I'll write another one that you CAN choose carter for

Valda: A Maiden’s ‘Fragile’ Heart CYOA All right, now that this has been revised it's going to work a little differently. First of all, this story is going to be in segments and chapters, at each segment you get a choice ut this doesn't affect the overall chapter, itll still follow it's...

And posted

@Blue: Hope you enjoy the character development I put in for our dear side character. ;)

( BGM ) The bell that signalled the end of school sounded and Valda stretched as she rose to her feet, having just taken a brief nap on the roof. It was a nuisance, but she’d have to head back to class for her things. She sighed and looked at the sky again before heading for the roof access...

Turns out it was Nuke's place that exploded... but no worries I installed a skybase to make up for it

For Valda, the school day has been a complete blank, paying half attention to the lessons and idly doodling around her notes. Although she’d always been bad at staying in schools for very long, she did make sure to study and keep her mind sharp. Lately though she could barely focus on the work that ...

I say 2. so they can get all there friends and no one has to worry about what kind of wedding it'll be.

Note I say HAS to, rather than wont... since there's always someone.