Lurkis#791534 wrote:http://archiveofourown.org/users/Lurkis/works

I'm not a writer and it's very cliche, but it was still my best shot from awhile ago.

Not bad, but it does have a bit of purple prose thrown in at random places. I wonder why I never read thia before.

Black mail's been done to death, Izurumi has beaten everyone to it, done it better, and had pictures to go along with it. Rommel's a decent tracer and colorist but can't match Izurumi as he is. Not sure when I claimed to be a better artist than Izurumi, even if I have some beef with him...

It's not that hard. Just ... don't have anyone delivering pizza.


BTW: love your avatar. RIP Gin

Shamsiel-kun#790880 wrote:Should I try writing this, despite having close to zero RL experience in the matters at hand ?
(where the hell could I find a realistic description of female sexual experiences?)

Sounds like a great idea. Been trying to work on something involving Rei myself.

Well, now I feel bad for working on yet another story with some mild blackmail cliches.

Urk. I liked the ending, so I hope it doesn't get hit too hard. Well, it doesn't touch the ending. It's more like stuff that never had closure happening elsewhere. The epilogue is a sort of 3 years later thing to show how things have gone. @Mister Yes, the revised version is on AFF. Pre...

More like I'm not happy with it. Got another lemon I will post soon, but it will definitely be controversial. Also, working on something with Rei (maybe along the lines of ReixAsukaxMari) and Genocide epilogue and some grimdark in between that and the ending. Edit: also posted a revised ...

I guess I should just say not to get your hopes up for the PP sequel any time soon.

@ El I've been noticing some weird coincidences between Fanfiction and Rebuild bro. For instance, there's this story called Child of Love , in it there this chapter called You Are Not Alone. It was made in 2001 and deals with the child of Shinji and Asuka. Also that cannon AT Field thing th...

ChaddyManPrime#737222 wrote:Hey Gob, I think Bad Idea inspired somebody bro [url]https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10554812/1/Stoned-Eva[/url]

this was brilliant.

There's a different between not answering question and bad storytelling. Empire Strikes Back did a great job at the former. Shoving in a Timeskip (TM) because you have no idea what to do with your story is pretty good proof of how bad this actually is. And that's the worst of it, bec...

Q was brilliant. Heavy handed at times, but brilliant nonetheless. It turned expectations on their head and got everyone talking, can't ask for more than that. It was crap. Why bother doing an Eva movie when it has nothing to do with Eva and when you are going to ignore everything? Oh, Asuka go...

amitakartok#730663 wrote:Dirty talk is also a kink.

Being naked is a kink. You need to stop reading lemons, in that case.

If 6 Days is not vanilla I don't think people know what vanilla is. The only thing even slightly weird is the bit in the shower and even that I was careful to put enough motivation and curiosity on the part of the characters to make it passable (or tried to anyway, YMMV). Sadly I never g...

Thats not true. It was curiosity in the first place. Currently im reading Room Service while watching Game of Thrones ... god damn. I don't even have the power to continue reading TP ... since i saw Meguro's "art". :yuck: Curiosity killed the cat. And you read it and you know. Sto...

I think curiosity is the major driving force. amitakartok said it was so bad that he wanted to kill himself ... and i thought this would be something cynical in the first place. I thought he couldn't write properly ... the unsettling thing about this fic is that he can write and describe stuff ...

Bagheera#730033 wrote:That's because Anno has talent and the neckbeards don't. Also, the neckbeards are misogynistic assholes, while Anno isn't. So that helps.

>3.0
>talent

Nah, bro. Some neckbeards have actually done better.

This seemed like the best place to complain. I freaking hate it when people will review a fic but not read it. Like, I've gotten bad reviews and that's bene: two I can think of come from NemZ and Bagheera, and I appreciate them! They've let me know where I'm weak as a writer and I c...

In b4 we recommend the same fics as always.

Man, I wish Jimmy would write more stuff.

But the sort that usually involves getting locked in a room and refused food or water until you like each other.