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by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 16, 2018 5:34 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Today we continue where we left off, with the finishing touches to Chapter 9. Let me know what you guys think. ^_^ ‘Yet. Nobody would have bet on mankind putting a man on the moon a hundred years ago, either. Didn’t stop us from doing it,’ Mari promptly replied, applying some seldom used sobriety to...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 09, 2018 2:31 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

So it seems this organization knows quiet a bit about the nature of the Evas. I'm looking forward to learning more about them. I also wasn't expecting Yui to be conscious enough to actually carry on a conversation with someone. Anyway, great job with the chapter. Each one has definitely been worth ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 09, 2018 6:36 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time! With a split up scene, as previously mentioned. The remaining bit and the end of the chapter will come next week, since I'm starting to believe that Chapter 9 will get too massive for its own good unless I split it up, as well. In any case, enjoy! ^_^ “Mmm... the smell of LCL...” the Fi...
by Gryphon117
Sun Sep 02, 2018 4:51 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Preparations for the new schoolyear begin in earnest tomorrow, so I might be quite busy for a couple of days on top of the usual writing time loss that work brings with it. I've got another scene in the chamber already (or half of one, since it's a pretty large one I'll probably split), but just be ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 5:39 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

That's understandable. It's always sucks when you find a great story only to find out it wasn't finished. Also don't worry about not getting that many views. Your stories might not be the most well known, but they're easily some of the best. 'Legacy of the Forgotten' is in my top 5, and I've read a...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 4:53 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

I thought it might be influenced by 'Mind Games'. It was a pretty good story and I'm glad to see one of my favorite authors is doing their own version of it. Maybe someday someone will do their own take on 'Deus Ex Evangelion'. Also you might get more feedback if you post this on FFN or SV. They se...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 4:28 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Both chapters were great. I really like where this story is going. Haven't read many like it. Doesn't appear to be the general consensus by the sheer lack of faces around these parts, but what can you do. Always appreciate the support. As for the story idea, I'll admit that it was heavily inspired ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 26, 2018 7:54 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Following twenty minutes of traversing the absurdly large hallways of NERV while Mari complained about how some ‘Pizza Pasta’ guy was really unfair, both Pilots made it to the labs, buzzing with activity in preparation for the day’s tests. Asuka was quick to spot Akagi among the workers in the room...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 19, 2018 6:19 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Sunday update time, which I didn't almost forget about. At all. :blush: In any case, this one's a bit shorter than the previous one, although not nearly as short as I first thought it would be. Turns out you can get quite a bit of mileage out of embarrassing situations, who'd have thought? In any ca...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 12, 2018 3:28 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

sonichu#881205 wrote:This was definitely one of the best chapters so far. I'm really looking forward to Shinji finally getting to speak to Asuka.


Thanks, glad you liked it! :D
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:13 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

And here we are again with an end to the current chapter. Big update once again, sort of meant to make up for the next one which will probably be on the short-ish side of things. Enjoy and comment, if you want! Those are the lifeblood of any content creator! ^_^ “Pretty sure this is the place...” Ac...
by Gryphon117
Sun Aug 05, 2018 3:37 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Nothing much to say here, other than that we pick up where we left off and that the next scene will probably be the end of the chapter. Now, back to writing with me. Enjoy! ^_^ “...Where are we now?” Shinji looked all around him, taking a few exploratory steps of his surroundings just as soon as Ace...
by Gryphon117
Sun Jul 29, 2018 5:20 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Sorry for missing out on the last update, but I was busy on my trip and this one was a large update that I didn't want to split. I think it came out fairly alright, but let me know what you guys think. ^_^ On the topic of chapters, we might be two or three scenes away from the end of this one, depen...
by Gryphon117
Wed Jul 18, 2018 4:30 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

sonichu#880320 wrote:Still enjoying every chapter of this. Please keep them coming.


Thanks. People might not think them too important or worth saying, but little things like that do help at keeping the motivation going. :D
by Gryphon117
Sun Jul 15, 2018 1:16 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, maybe the last one in a small while. I'm beginning the second leg of my trip, which means that I'm going to be sticking to phone navigation to fulfill my Internet needs for a couple of days. As far as the piece goes, this one's probably a bit rougher than normal since it hasn't gone thr...
by Gryphon117
Sun Jul 08, 2018 6:13 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Update time, and we're going back to Shinji for this chapter in order to advance his side of the plot a little bit. This update is a little on the short side of things, however, since it's just meant to set up the rest of the upcoming scenes. Also, I've been kinda busy this week getting things ready...
by Gryphon117
Sun Jul 01, 2018 4:22 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Bit of a short update, today. I decided to go ahead and get that Interlude I talked about last time going and, while it's not too extensive, I do hope it will get some people thinking. ^_^ A single light shone in a storeroom within NERV HQ, the one that had flicked its activator carefully and silent...
by Gryphon117
Fri Jun 29, 2018 1:42 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Well, I'm saddened that you didn't like it. Hopefully the next one will be better on that respect. As for Kensuke and Mari... I don't really plan on doing anything with them. I intentionally gave a nod in that direction, sure, but its only purpose is to set up an inside joke for one of my other ...
by Gryphon117
Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:49 am
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: An Insider's Look
Replies: 143
Views: 36162

Re: An Insider's Look

Here is the final scene for this chapter, people. Next week we will be going back to Shinji and how he's been dealing with the fun times in Asuka's day, as well as some development of his own. Although I might put in a brief interlude in between chapters, depending on whether I can finish figuring o...
by Gryphon117
Fri Jun 22, 2018 2:27 pm
Forum: Fanfiction
Topic: The lesser evil (NGE AU)
Replies: 9
Views: 4053

Re: The lesser evil (NGE AU)

It was my pleasure. Best of luck with this. ^_^

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