This is a new fic I wrote, titled Forget (2,796 words). It's a 2nd POV, post-series fic. A bit of Kensuke/Rei if you want to take it to the extreme. Because of the 2nd POV, I can't upload this FF.net. Summary: Post-3rd Impact. A camera, an assignment and a press minder; Aida Kensuke ...

Hello Evageeks, I've been lurking here for a long time ever since my last brush with Evangelion fanfiction. It's been 2 years since I've posted and received a lot of great feedback on the fics I posted here and on FF.net. And I'm really grateful for helping me grow as a writer. So mu...

And on the subject of tentacles, I'll share a link that O-chan sent me some time back - SPAR . It's unpleasant, but very, very well done. Award-winning levels of well done. There's even an audio link. Slightly off topic because this is a 'bad fics' thread but: I read Spar when i...

Asuka X Shinji fics- lemon or otherwise. It's the most overused pairing by far, and it's very rarely done well. This. More specifically, fics where Asuka x Shinji is the main plot/ story have been done to death. Partly because they're so common, and partly because there are very few nov...

I do trigger writing. Just randomly writing about anything through prompts, which can be a line of poetry, a song lyric, a photograph etc. It might not necessarily be related to the subject I want to write about. But once in a while the stuff that's written can be reused for a story or a piece o...

Anyway. . . will you do anymore? Will you build upon this and add to it? Or is it a one and done thing? Yep. This is one-shot, and I'm not continuing it any further since the ending is ambiguous enough for closure on these two characters brief relationship. After all the discussion in this thre...

Well look at that, it looks like a merciless critic while I genuinely enjoyed your story! -o-; If more people were merciless critics, I think it would help improve the quality of Eva fanfiction as whole. Then there won't be so many things to say in the 'Worst Eva fanfic you've ever read...

Thanks Mariachi and Ray for your comments! @Mariachi I thought Genuine/ fake is a bit too extreme. Since there are a precious few Sakura fics out there, I wanted Sakura to be tougher. She's a 2nd Lieutenant in an organisation that's fighting NERV, and while in canon she's got some kind o...

I'd like to see an Omake with Shinji and Sakura just talking to each other. (maybe taking place between 3.0 and Final) Sakura coming to terms with the person who apparently killed her brother with N3I, albeit unintentionally. I'd really like to see someone build upon her character. ...

I'm a bit new to NGE fanfiction. But since I trawl for fics on LJ quite often, a very compelling candidate to one of the worst eva fic ever will have to be this old gem from 2005: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2260578/1/Vampire-meets-Evangelion - The premise of the story: Rei is a vampire. It'...

A recently posted one-shot that I would recommend: MAI742's Old Gendo . https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10089087/1/Old-Gendo So this follows a similar idea as Cosmonaut . The key difference is that it's done in MAI742's signature style - straight-to-the-point and stripped down. It's als...

You're right. They're Hyuuga/Misato fics are hard to come by. Off the top of my head, I can recommend only two: - Between the Bars by koneko_zero (LJ) - is a short story from Hyuuga's POV that from halfway through the series up until Instrumentality. - The Coming of the First One...

I can help. Let me know what you need me to do. I've PM-ed you my email address for convenience.

... it aligns with my own idea of Asuka, and actually conveys the continuing simmer of frustration she'd be feeling very well. Although with the 1st POV it's quite hard to determine the way the story would go. Asuka's 'voice' is so overblown and over-the-top that it interferes w...

Interrupting the architect & gardener discussion for some NGE fics recs. They are culled from a handful of public Livejournals, and in my opinion are the best few hosted on that site. All of them are one-shots. - and everything we've lost disappears , by feast - Shinji/Rei, Shinji/Kaworu, Ka...

Wolf Tone on F# and Wolf Coda by Moonsheen (on A03) are must-read short fiction (one-shots).

The Foregone Conclusion by The Mustachioed Cat is a great fic that centres around the premise: what if the angels never stopped coming.

Here are my thoughts on the chapter in particular: - I feel the questionable subject matter only concerns one explicit image - the "macabre wings" - and your historical grounding of it that follows (from out of Shinji's dialogue). - The details about blood being drained, incisi...

I've been wanting to re-visit Neon Genesis Victoria for awhile, primarily in reediting and cleaning up the chapters up to the current point before adding more (simply to reacquaint myself, as well). I was also thinking of downgrading it from an M back to a T, but I wanted a second-opini...

Read it and left in review on the site. In addition to what I've said, I think you can also work a bit on your speech tags (i.e what comes immediately after your characters' dialogue). While it's not a fixed rule, but you have a particular habit on describing another character...

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