Between this fic and Tiberium Wars over on FFN, you could get a pretty decent education on how to run a near future fictional battlespace. I'm torn on my opinion of the decision to pull Eva-02 out. On the one hand, its a potentially priceless tactical asset, but on the other assets are meant to ...

What did you think of that fact that Toja's sister is actually appearing, by the way? In fact, generally of the way I write the OCs (well, technically she's not one, but she might as well be) I'm using to flesh out the setting? Works for me, at least. For my money, that's th...

You have been busy, that was a monster of a chapter. I compared against the relevant section of the previous fic, and man does a couple of years make a difference. I liked Toja's motivation for leaving the shelter a lot better in this fic than the original series, a better look into what he'...

Is it wrong of me to chuckle at Shinji's tshirt?

The next chapter looks promising.

So wrong, or so many levels :)

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And as if early-series Rei wasn't creepy enough...

A lot to like here. Even if the name 'dimensional refrigerator' makes me chuckle every time I see it.

I'm not sorry at all...for liking the snippets so far.

Not exactly what I would've expected out of Shinji...

As if the third layer didn't already have enough badass gunslingers... :)

Nice look at the other conquered territory, which one can only hope will be ripe for a counter invasion soon.

Leave it to Shinji to take passive aggressive to a fine art. An interesting look at Rei too. I do wonder who the 2 who sent messages of their own volition were.

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Kensuke's comment towards the end of Chapter 2 seems strangely prescient...

This looks promising.

Finally got around to reading this, and certainly not disappointed. I like the changes from the first version's opening, the extra detail sets the scene a lot better.

I'll give you credit, Bob. You do a good nightmare dream sequence. If I'm getting the chronology right, we've jumped forward a bit given the references to China getting back under control. That had better not be all we hear about the opening shots of the second Revolution, though. Just s...

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I never thought I'd say this in a million years, but you've gone and made me do it.

Gendo, you are a man among men.


I like the last segment as well, as odd as it might sound I liked having the old Asuka back for a short visit.

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Fixed several glaring errors, so not so much new content as the content that should've been posted in the first place

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