Just finished reading the epilogue. You found've a really good, uncontrived reason for them to be able to live on, and I liked the way you handled their relations without having to explain all the in-between. I wasn't expecting such an ending, but it worked very well, and brought some kind of closu...

Well, I dun went and did it. The Epilogue has been posted.

I shared it just in case you want it.

Might as well update this. I finished an Epilogue that will be posted as soon as it's proofread. There's also an edited version that's slowly being updated on Ao3 that adds a bit more character stuff on some scenes (up to chapter 6 so far). https://archiveofourown.org/works/6810040/chapters/15549823...

tuxedo_jack#890012 wrote:I'm old, little one.

I'll restore it when I get a minute (read: between nostalgia / preservation efforts / trying to bring back what once was).

There's some stuff on there not posted anywhere else, just FYI. So if it has to vanish make an archive somewhere.

Christ, if they were going to fuck up this badly why bother with a dub at all?

Thanks, mate.

Dude, you come out and accuse me of lashing out without even understanding what the post was about and then say I'm defensive? Come on now. Did it occur to you that if the people who usually proofread were available I wouldn't have made the post to begin with? Anyway, I got someone to look this over...

Yeah, so someone insinuates that I shouldn't contribute when all I've done is make a post giving an update but if I call him out on it I'm the one lashing out? Give me a break. PP2 is not going to get 'fixed', so don't get your hopes up. I remember that story you mentioned. It has a bunch of other s...

Bro are you still working on that? Should really focus on improving Power Plays 2 first. You should really focus on one project at a time. You're going to keep on doing stuff and it's never going to get completed. Why would I continue to put time into something there's no interest in? As for the pr...

So does anyone want to help proof read a 75 page lemon involving Asuka, Rei and Mari with some ... moderate D/s thrown in because of course it is? Asking for science.

I read that recently. Very nice. Specially liked the second scene. Only thing I can suggest would be Asuka being more active with her mouth, lol. Very good job.

Spreading it out. FFN seems a logical place, but they have always appeared to be more strict with their lemon policy (or their ban thereof) yet that seems to not be the case. So, if there's a likelihood it won't be taken down, then it might as well get posted. Fanbards is ... well, not exactly user ...

Hey guys, I have seriously been thinking of putting some lemons up on FFN but I know they are picky. Anyone got any experiences like them taking down stuff or banning accounts? Now, i was planning 6 Days and Room Service so nothing too extreme. Obviously not PP, as I am pretty sure that would be del...

Some of that might come in handy.

Bagheera#858355 wrote:That donkey has seen some shit. His story must be told.

It would probably be a flashback of some sort, probably a few chapters in.

Also, it probably is no surprise that is a pretty grim story, as it needs to be following up on the end of 2.0. I really should watch that again.

So let me get this straight: I post saying I'm trying to work on something new and your response is to bitch at me for previously saying I wasn't interested. I wonder, do you think this is MORE or LESS likely to get a story finished, or is it just complaining for the sake of complaining?

I finished Genocide, didn't I?

Um, so thanks to one of my pre-readers I decided to write a fic that includes all the preview bits from the trailer at the end of 2.0

Wish me luck.

PS: It will include Gendo and Fuyutsuki going hiking with a donkey.

amitakartok#856681 wrote: Long post

Not bad, but I feel it lacks Asuka getting naked.