Reichu#892315 wrote:I expect both Asuka and Mari to fall in battle and get taken into Eva-13, but death is a pretty flexible concept in Eva so they'll probably be fine. :p

Yeah, I can totally see that.

I have always had a bad feeling Asuka is going to die. If we are lucky she might get some development before it happens, but the way this has gone I'm not hopeful.

I think it's important to keep in mind that I wrote a LOT of this story with certain things being purposely vague so people can take their own meaning from it so you are free to reach any conclusion. FFN has the only complete copy of Genocide. Ao3 has the updated smut. Any other source is out o...

https://i.imgur.com/g8z6gWU.png https://i.imgur.com/g3pripQ.png Judging by the size of their fleet, I think they are fine. And yet Asuka was using tape to hold her plugsuit together, they were forced to recover Unit-01 for power and to raid Paris for spare parts.

From my perspective If you need to 'force' someone to be happy, that isn't real happiness. I mean, you can make someone happy by giving them lobotomy, too. And sure, you can 'help' someone with anxiety disorders by making them face their fears. That could help. It can also make ...

Not gonna lie, if they really wanted more red on Asuka's suit, they should have used the same red that's already there. This new tone looks practically black. It just seems strange that they keep throwing new suits for no reason (of course we know Khara's reason). I thought WILLIE was supposed to be...

One of the messages there is that he can't simply afford to do nothing until HE thinks he's ready because by then it might be too late, and if Asuka gets to that stage then there is nothing he can do, no matter how much he wants to help. It's also a reference to Gendo being 'broken&...

Thanks for taking the time to make a video.

Just finished reading the epilogue. You found've a really good, uncontrived reason for them to be able to live on, and I liked the way you handled their relations without having to explain all the in-between. I wasn't expecting such an ending, but it worked very well, and brought some kind of closu...

Well, I dun went and did it. The Epilogue has been posted.

I shared it just in case you want it.

Might as well update this. I finished an Epilogue that will be posted as soon as it's proofread. There's also an edited version that's slowly being updated on Ao3 that adds a bit more character stuff on some scenes (up to chapter 6 so far). https://archiveofourown.org/works/6810040/chapters/15549823...

tuxedo_jack#890012 wrote:I'm old, little one.

I'll restore it when I get a minute (read: between nostalgia / preservation efforts / trying to bring back what once was).

There's some stuff on there not posted anywhere else, just FYI. So if it has to vanish make an archive somewhere.

Christ, if they were going to fuck up this badly why bother with a dub at all?

Thanks, mate.

Dude, you come out and accuse me of lashing out without even understanding what the post was about and then say I'm defensive? Come on now. Did it occur to you that if the people who usually proofread were available I wouldn't have made the post to begin with? Anyway, I got someone to look this over...

Yeah, so someone insinuates that I shouldn't contribute when all I've done is make a post giving an update but if I call him out on it I'm the one lashing out? Give me a break. PP2 is not going to get 'fixed', so don't get your hopes up. I remember that story you mentioned. It has a bunch of other s...

Bro are you still working on that? Should really focus on improving Power Plays 2 first. You should really focus on one project at a time. You're going to keep on doing stuff and it's never going to get completed. Why would I continue to put time into something there's no interest in? As for the pr...

So does anyone want to help proof read a 75 page lemon involving Asuka, Rei and Mari with some ... moderate D/s thrown in because of course it is? Asking for science.