Episode 20 Notes and Changelog!
Notes:
Mistranslations:
ADV: Missing a Committeeman Line
"Damages enormous" missing
Maya's line is not completely wrong but is missing the direct reference to this happening to an Eva before, it's simply implied instead.
VSI: "It's somewhat uncomfortable." From Maya should be "It will be difficult to work here"
"That's not possible." From Misato, the same idea, but it should be "What... the hell?"
"Misato's father" is now just "The target of Misato's vengeance." No reference to her father.
Rei says "Am I your substitute?" should be "And am I the substitute?"
Missing an "I see." from Ritsuko?
"Yourself" from Kaji, instead of "Myself"
Additions:
ADV: "Good names." From Yui
Seems Misato has an extra line or two in the final scene.
VSI: During Shinji's introspection he has an additional bit of dialogue during the Angel portion, I don't know what he says though.
Changelog Time!
Cast:
Shinji Ikari: Spike Spencer
Misato Katsuragi: Allison Keith
Rei Ayanami: Amanda Winn-Lee
Asuka Langley Soryu: Tiffany Grant
Ritsuko Akagi: Sue Ulu
Gendo Ikari: Tristan MacAvery
Kozo Fuyutsuki: Guil Lunde
Ryoji Kaji: Aaron Krohn
Maya Ibuki: Kendra Benham
Makoto Hyuga: Brian Granveldt
Shigeru Aoba: Jason C Lee
Toji Suzuhara: Johnny Yong Bosch
Kensuke Aida: Ben Diskin
Rei I: Ryan Bartley
Young Shinji: Casey Mongillo
Yui Ikari: Ryan Bartley
Extras: VSI
5.1: VSI
Part A:
1:31-1:32: Re-timed ADV Eva Roar, mixed with VSI.
2:51 - VSI Maya line used and Pitch-shifted to fix "Hayflick" error in ADV, trying to sub in just Hayflick didn't sound good
3:08 - Removed Ritsuko Vocalisation
3:25-3:27 - Removed ADV Vocalisation and Re-timed Aoba's line to better match subs.
3:27-3:29 - Subbed in VSI for missing Maya line and Pitch-shifted.
3:44-3:49 - Removed "Well" from Hyuga, and re-timed rest of line to match subs.
4:11 - Re-timed Hyuga's line to better match subs
4:13-4:16 - Slightly re-timed Keel's line to line up better with VSI
4:34-4:39 - Re-timed Keel's line to better match subs.
4:39-4:42 - Slightly re-timed Kaji's line
4:43-4:46 - Re-timed Kaji's line with the Cut
4:48-4:54 - Re-timed Fuyutsuki's line to better match subs
4:54-4:58 - Re-timed Gendo's line to better match subs
5:54 - Removed ADV Misato Vocalisation, VSI used and Pitch-shifted
6:03-6:18 - ADV Radio background cleanly removed, VSI Radio and ADV Rei's line remains
6:41-6:43 - Re-timed Misato's line very slightly to better match subs
6:44-6:47 - Re-timed Ritsuko's line to better match subs
6:47-6:50 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs, removing vocalisations
6:50-6:52 - Re-timed Ritsuko's line to better match subs
6:53-6:57 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
6:58 - Re-timed Ritsuko's line to better match subs
7:04-7:06 - Re-timed second half of Maya's line to remove lengthy silence
7:08-7:11 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
7:12-7:18 - Re-timed and broke up Maya's line to both match subs and remove lengthy silence stemming from removal of added Ritsuko line
7:21 - Removed Ritsuko "Yes"
7:26-7:28 - Re-timed Ritsuko's "What can be called his soul?" line to match subs
7:29-7:33 - Re-timed Ritsuko's "Substance to his Plugsuit" line to better match subs
7:33-7:38 - Re-timed Maya's line to better match subs
7:38 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
7:39-7:47 - Re-timed Misato's line to better flow off previous lines, it now also very slightly overlaps with the Fourth Day card, making a nice little effect
7:51-8:37 - Lots of Re-timing of Shinji's lines throughout this whole section to better match subs.
8:53-9:03 - More Shinji line re-timing
9:18 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
9:20-9:25 - Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
9:26 - Father subbed in using Episode 15
9:27-9:29 - ADV Shinji Scream subbed in using Episode 3, mixed with VSI Scream
9:37-9:38 - Re-timed Rei's line to better match subs
9:49-9:54 - Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
9:58-10:01 - Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
Part B:
11:55-11:56 - Re-timed Rei's line to better match subs
12:45-12:46 - Slight re-timing on Shinji's line to better match subs
12:47 - First "Nobody" from Shinji removed to keep three like subs
13:25 - Second part of Shinji's line re-timed to match subs
13:26 - "Somebody, please!" Removed to have line better match subs
13:38-13:40 - Fade out added on Shinji's line to account for shifted Misato line
13:42-13:43 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
13:47-13:59 - Pretty much every one of Misato's lines re-timed to better match subs
14:15-14:23 - Re-timed Rei's lines from here to better match subs
14:28-14:30 - For some reason ADV had Misato say Rei's line here, despite the fact that Rei is on the screen... fixed by copying and pasting Rei's line from earlier in the scene
14:32-14:35 - VSI Asuka, Rei and Misato added alongside ADV Misato to mainly fix the missing Asuka and Rei from ADV, lines have been turned down, creating an echo effect
15:07-15:19 - VSI Toji and Kensuke have been duplicated and set at a delay with volume lowered to match the echo effect in ADV's dub
16:08 - Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
16:10 - "What do I want?" replaced with a repeated "I" to better match subs
16:49 - Removed Shinji's "But...", "Why?" is kept
17:23-17:26 - Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
17:52 - Raised Volume of Shinji's "No, not them" line so it can actually be somewhat heard
18:02-18:04 - Re-timed second half of Gendo's line to reduce silence
18:05-18:14 - Raised Volume on Yui's lines because she's quite quiet in comparison to Gendo
18:20-18:29 - Raised Volume on Yui's lines
18:22-18:25 - Gendo's line has been cut down to "If it's a boy, Shinji, if it's a girl, Rei." to fit with VSI Yui
18:42 - Cut start of Misato's sobs so that it now switches with the cut
18:49 - Re-timed Misato's first "Shinji?", cut added second "Shinji!"
19:04-19:07 - Re-timed Ritsuko's line to better match subs
19:07-19:19 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
19:20-19:29 - Re-timed Ritsuko's line to better match subs
19:30-19:33 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
20:00 - Re-timed last part of Kaji's line
20:02-20:07 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
20:18-20:19 - Re-timed second part of Misato's line to better match subs
20:21 - Removed Misato Vocalisations
20:25-20:29 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
20:30-20:31 - Removed "There's smoke in your eyes" from Misato
20:31-20:33 - Re-timed Kaji's line to better match subs
20:59 - Removed Misato Vocalisation
21:15-21:18 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
21:28-21:46 - Slightly re-timed Misato and Kaji Vocalisations from ADV, everything before this cut due to heavy re-timing of Misato's lines
21:47-21:51 - Re-timed Misato's line to better match subs
21:53-21:56 - Re-timed Kaji's line to better match subs
21:56 - Missing ADV Vocalisation covered by Pitch-shifted VSI
22:01-23:05 - Fly Me to the Moon Restored