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Postby Tumbling Down » Thu Jan 19, 2023 3:25 pm

View Original PostCoolJosh2002 wrote:I'm really excited to start work on this Episode! Especially all the stuff while Shinji is in the Sea of Dirac as the convo between two Shinji will now literally be between two Shinji's.

Having Casey voice Leilel is a stroke of genius. I'm really excited to see your work when this is done.

Also, when you get to EoE, you should use the Manga dub for the soldier that puts a gun against Shinji says "Sorry, kid. Nothing personal." In the Manga dub, he sounds genuinely sympathetic, while in the Netflix/VSI dub, he sounds like Coldsteel the Hedgehog.

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Postby CoolJosh2002 » Fri Jan 20, 2023 3:36 am

Tumbling Down wrote:Having Casey voice Leilel is a stroke of genius. I'm really excited to see your work when this is done.


It was always the idea I had that the Netflix Trio would take care of the pilots as Children, while the ADV trio handles the standard teenaged versions (which also makes the transition to Rebuild much easier to swallow), and also situations like this. So Casey is Leliel, and Ryan will voice Armisael later on in 23' as well. Stephanie will really only have moments as a young Asuka. However, all three will have situations where its the VSI Voice speaking directly to the ADV voice. (Casey to Spike in 16, Stephanie to Tiffany in 22', and Ryan to Amanda in 23')

Tumbling Down wrote:Also, when you get to EoE, you should use the Manga dub for the soldier that puts a gun against Shinji says "Sorry, kid. Nothing personal." In the Manga dub, he sounds genuinely sympathetic, while in the Netflix/VSI dub, he sounds like Coldsteel the Hedgehog.


It will be a while before EoE, but I'd say at this point most Extras will come from the VSI Dub, while the main cast (Pretty much every named character) will stay intact from the Manga Dub, while also fixing the Mangaisms from that dub. I'll obviously make the final decisions when it comes to putting EoE together however.

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Postby CoolJosh2002 » Sun Jan 22, 2023 7:31 am

Hi all! Episode 16 is pretty much complete, I just need to do a couple more adjustments before it's ready for release. In the meantime, here is the Changelog for this Episode!

Cast:
Shinji Ikari: Spike Spencer
Misato Katsuragi: Allison Keith (One fix with Carrie)
Ritsuko Akagi: Sue Ulu
Rei Ayanami: Amanda Winn-Lee
Asuka Langley Soryu: Tiffany Grant
Ryoji Kaji: Aaron Krohn
Maya Ibuki: Kendra Benham
Makoto Hyuga: Brian Granveldt
Shigeru Aoba: Jason Lee
Gendo Ikari: Tristan MacAvery
Kensuke Aida: Ben Diskin
Leliel Shinji: Casey Mongillo
Yui Ikari: Ryan Bartley
Extras: VSI

Part A:
1:31-1:35: VSI Asuka Vocalisations Pitch-Shifted to fix missing ADV ones
1:48-1:50: ADV Asuka Vocalisations Removed
1:54: VSI Asuka Vocalisation Pitch-Shifted to fix missing ADV ones
2:29-2:34: ADV Misato Vocalisations carefully removed around Kaji's line
3:35-3:46: Removal of ADV Vocalisations, and re-timing Asuka's line to better match subs
3:52: Removal of ADV Asuka Vocalisation
3:53-3:55: VSI Asuka Vocalisations Pitch-Shifted to fix missing ADV ones
4:46: Quick fade-in before Ritsuko's line because it isn't ADV for the previous background workers
6:37: Rei's line re-timed slightly
6:40: Removed Asuka Vocalisation
6:49: VSI Asuka Vocalisation Pitch-Shifted to fix missing ADV one
6:50: Removed ADV Asuka's "Yes"
7:03-7:04: Shinji's line re-timed to better match Subs
7:05: Removed Shinji's cry of attack
7:12: Removed Shinji Vocalisation
7:15: Removed Shinji Vocalisation
7:57: Removed Asuka Vocalisation
8:18: Removed Asuka Vocalisation
8:40-8:47: Re-timed Maya and Ritsuko's lines to better match subs, Maya's "Without Power" Part of line removed
8:59: Quick fade out to cut Maya's brief Vocalisation
9:22: Removed Misato Vocalisation
9:55: Removed Asuka Vocalisation

Part B:
10:27: Removed Shinji VOcalisation
10:40-10:43: Re-timed Shinji's line to better match subs
10:45: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
11:29-11:30: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
11:31: Removed Shinji Vocalisation
11:36-12:01: Re-timed all of Shinji's lines and removed some repeating instances
12:02-12:04: VSI Misato slotted in to fix mistranslation in original dub
13:03-13:05: Removed ADV Vocalisations
13:15-13:16: Removed Ritsuko Vocalisatons
13:25-13:31: Re-timed Misato's line to match Subs
13:38-13:39: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
13:44: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
13:49-13:50: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
13:58-13:59: Slightly re-timed Shinji's line
14:26-14:28: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
14:32: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
14:35-14:36: Re-timed VSI Shinji's (Leliel's) line so there's no overlap
14:57-15:01: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
15:06-15:10: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
15:20-15:23: Re-timed Shinji's line to match Subs
15:37-15:39: Re-timed Misato's line to match Subs
15:41-15:42: Moved Shinji's "No, I don't want to hear this!" Line up to match Subs
15:54-15:56: Re-timed the first half of Shinji's line as it's shorter than the subs. There's now a bit of silence between the two halves.
16:04-16:11: Re-timed both Hyuga and Maya's lines to better match Subs
16:46-16:48: First part of Shinji's line re-timed to match Subs
16:59: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
17:06: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
17:08: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
17:24-17:25: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
17:27: Removed Shinji Vocalisations
18:02-18:06: Removed ADV Shinji Vocalisations
18:08: Removed ADV Vocalisation
18:20: "Well, that's good for you" re-timed and Pitch-Shifted to better match Yui
20:28: Remvoed Shinji Vocalisation
20:48-20:55: Parts of Ritsuko's line re-timed to better match subs
21:18: Removed ADV Vocalisation
21:22-21:23: Removed Shinji Vocalisation
21:41: VSI Asuka Vocalisation Pitch-Shifted
21:50: Very Slight Re-timing on Shinji's sniff
21:54: Removed Shinji Vocalisation
22:01-23:05: Fly Me to the Moon Restored
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Postby CoolJosh2002 » Wed Mar 08, 2023 6:21 pm

Morning all, I'll have the changelog for Episode 2 up later today, but I had an idea regarding that mistranslated line that we all know in EoE.

Due to using Allison Keith for Misato, she naturally has the mistranslated line in EoE that goes like this: "Mankind was created from a being called Lilith, just like Adam was." I've had a thought that with some careful manipulation of the line, I can instead make it: "Mankind was created from a being like Adam, called Lilith." Obviously, I'll have a better idea if this is possible when I get to working on EoE, the main thing will be making it sound natural.

As mentioned at the start, Changelog's for Episode 2 and well as 17 will come hopefully later today or over the next couple days. Episode 18 will have a changelog when it's done.

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Postby CoolJosh2002 » Sun Mar 19, 2023 1:50 am

Episode 17 Changelog!

Cast:

Shinji Ikari: Spike Spencer
Misato Katsuragi: Allison Keith (one fix with Carrie Keranen)
Ritsuko Akagi: Sue Ulu
Rei Ayanami: Amanda Winn Lee
Asuka Langley Soryu: Tiffany Grant
Gendo Ikari: Tristan MacAvery
Ryoji Kaji: Aaron Krohn
Toji Suzuhara: Johnny Yong Bosch
Kensuke Aida: Ben Diskin
Kozo Fuyutsuki: Guil Lunde
Hikari Horaki: Abby Trott

Extras: VSI

Changelog

Part A:
1:31-1:45 - Keel and Misato's lines re-timed to better match subs.
1:55-1:59 - Misato's line re-timed to better match subs, and second part removed.
2:02-2:05 - Misato's line re-timed to better match subs.
2:14-2:22 - Misato's line re-timed to better match subs.
2:22-2:33 - Committeeman's line re-timed to better match subs.
2:33-2:38 - Misato's line cut down ("been observed" removed) and re-timed to better match subs.
2:43-2:50 - Keel and Misato's lines re-timed to better match subs.
2:51-2:59 - Keel vocalisation removed, and Keel and Gendo's lines re-timed to better match subs.
4:13-4:19 - Makoto's line very slightly re-timed.
4:20 - Aoba's added "Right" removed.
4:36-4:37 - Second part of Misato's line re-timed.
6:17 - Removed Ritsuko Vocalisation
7:03-7:05 - Ritsuko's line re-timed.
7:21-7:23 - Gendo's line re-timed.
7:25-7:27 - Rei and Gendo's lines re-timed.
7:45-7:56 - Shinji and Asuka's lines replaced with Amazon 2.22.
8:03 - Shinji and Asuka's line replaced with Amazon 2.22.
8:07 - Ritsuko's "Uhhh" removed.
8:24 - Misato's "hmph" removed. The sigh is left intact.
8:36 - Ritsuko's "Hmmm" removed.
8:50 - Misato's "It's hard." removed.
8:54 - Ritsuko's "Uh huh" removed.
9:13-9:15 - Misato's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted to fix translation error.
10:26 - Shinji's "Uhhhhh" removed.
10:32 - Removed ADV VOcalisations
11:28 - VSI VOcalisation kept (as ADV didn't dub it) and turned down to match Japanese.
11:55 - Rei's volume increased.
12:10-12:12 - Rei's volume increased.
12:34-12:36 - This part of Rei's line re-timed.

Part B:
13:31 - Fuyutsuki's "Hmmm" removed.
13:45-13:50 - Fuyutsuki's "Now" removed, and the rest of the line re-timed.
15:13 - Kaji's "Uh" removed.
15:27 - Misato's "Hmmm" removed.
15:44 - Shinji's line re-timed.
15:45 - Removed Misato Vocalisations.
15:57 - Kaji's "Ahh!" removed.
16:50-16:52 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 2.22.
16:52-16:53 - Kaji's line re-timed.
17:03-17:04 - Kaji's line re-timed.
17:09 - Kaji's "Hmm" removed.
19:01-19:02 - Shinji's volume increased.
19:23 - Hikari Vocalisation from ADV inserted to fix missing VSI one.
20:10 - Toji's sigh removed.
21:05 - VSI Asuka Vocalisation used and Pitch-Shifted
21:35-21:40 - Hikari Humming inserted from ADV because VSI is missing it.
22:01-23:05 - Fly Me to the Moon Restored.

Fun Fact: The Use of FMTTM as Diagetic Music in Kaji and Misato's conversation is still there in the VSI Dub.

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Postby CoolJosh2002 » Sun Mar 19, 2023 1:54 am

Episode 2 Changelog!

Cast:

Shinji Ikari: Spike Spencer
Misato Katsuragi: Allison Keith
Ritsuko Akagi: Sue Ulu (Some Fixes with Erica Lindbeck)
Gendo Ikari: Tristan MacAvery
Kozo Fuyutsuki: Guil Lunde
Makoto Hyuga: Brian Granveldt
Maya Ibuki: Kendra Benham / Amy Seeley
Shigeru Aoba: Jason C Lee
Keel Lorenz: Rick Peeples
Human Instrumentality Committee: VSI (According to IMDb, two of them are Henry Dittman and Lucian Dodge)
Pen-Pen: Amanda Winn-Lee / Cherami Leigh

Extras: VSI

Changelog

Part A:
1:33-1:35 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
1:35-1:36 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
1:36-1:42 - Misato's lines were replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
1:48 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
1:50 - Shinji's line re-timed to better match Subs
2:00-2:01 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted
2:12-2:14 - Shinji's vocalisations replaced with Amazon 1.11
2:15-2:18 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-Shifted
2:15-2:18 - Shinji's vocalisations removed through line replacement
2:28-2:33 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-Shifted
2:36-2:38 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted
2:42 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted
2:53-2:54 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
3:00-3:01 - Maya's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
3:02-3:03 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-shifted
3:21 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
5:06 - Removed Misato Vocalisation
6:19-6:23 - Gendo's line re-timed to match Subs
6:26 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
6:56-6:58 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted
7:54-7:57 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-Shifted
8:48-8:51 - Ritsuko's line re-timed to better match subs
8:51-8:54 - Fuyutsuki's line re-timed to better match subs
8:57-8:59 - Ritsuko's line re-timed to better match Subs
9:00-9:02 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
9:09-9:11 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-Shifted
9:12-9:16 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
9:39-9:42 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
9:43-9:44 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
9:45-9:47 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
10:21-10:24 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-Shifted
10:25 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
10:27-10:28 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
10:34-10:35 - First part of Shinji's line re-timed to match Subs
10:47 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
11:22 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
11:25-11:28 - Misato's line re-timed to match Subs
11:35-11:38 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and re-timed

Part B:
11:53-12:02 - Misato's lines replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
12:23-12:27 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
12:29-12:33 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
12:46-12:47 - Shinji's line re-timed to better match Subs
12:49 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
13:22 - Removed Misato Vocalisation
13:48-13:50 - Misato's line re-timed to match subs
14:08-14:13 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 to fix translation error
14:14-14:15 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
14:16-14:23 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
14:24 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
14:25-14:33 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
14:35 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
14:51-14:53 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
15:01 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
15:03-15:05 - Shinji's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
15:11-15:13 - Removed Shinji Vocalisations
15:15 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
15:18-15:23 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 to fix translation error
15:24-15:30 - Shinji's lines re-timed to better match subs
16:04-16:14 - Volume adjusted on Gendo and Ritsuko's lines with the cut to match subs
16:50-17:03 - Misato's lines re-timed to better match subs, and vocalisations removed
17:06-17:15 - Shinji's lines re-timed to better match subs
17:21-17:22 - Shinji's line re-timed to better match subs
17:44-17:46 - Aoba's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
17:48-17:49 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
17:49-17:52 - Maya's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
17:52-17:53 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-shifted
17:54-17:56 - Maya's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
17:57 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
18:04-18:09 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
18:09-18:11 - Maya's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
18:12-18:14 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
18:17-18:19 - Removed Shinji Vocalisations
18:23-18:25 - Maya's line replaced with AMazon 1.11
18:26 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
18:48 - Removed ADV Vocalisation
18:58-19:00 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
19:00-19:01 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-shifted
19:05-19:06 - Aoba's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
19:06-19:07 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
19:11-19:15 - Maya's line replaced with Amazon 1.11
19:16-19:18 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-shifted
19:22-19:25 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
20:34 - Ritsuko's line replaced with VSI and Pitch-shifted
20:35-20:37 - Misato's line replaced with Amazon 1.11 and Pitch-shifted
20:53-20:55 - Ritsuko's line re-timed to better match subs (Misato and Ritsuko's lines are still swapped in the dub)
20:56 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
21:04 - Removed ADV Shinji Vocalisation, VSI used instead
21:06 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
21:14-21:16 - Removed Shinji Vocalisations
21:37-21:39 - Misato's line re-timed to better match subs
21:40 - Removed Shinji VOcalisations
21:43-21:50 - Misato's lines re-timed to better match subs
21:55 - Removed Shinji Vocalisation
22:00-23:05 - Fly Me to the Moon Restored


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