Archer wrote:What’s stupid was skipping it, instead of actually re-writing the story AROUND the fact that that period of time was no longer being covered.
The easy and obvious solution is just to make it so that the end of 2.0 actually WAS the end of the world. No near-third-impact bullshit, straight up just Shinji awakening Unit 1 causes the apocalypse and rewrite the rest of the story around that.
Which honestly isn’t even hard: instead of there being an extended period of time in between where apparently Gendo and Fuyutsuki get exiled, Kaji and Kaworu get promoted to commander, and Gendo and Fuyutsuki come back and sieze control and THEN the remaining NERV personnel rebel and form WILLE, literally just condense that all into the immediate aftermath of N3I: Gendo and Fuyutsuki summon Kaworu from the moon, Kaji makes a deal with Kaworu (which involves his own death) to betray Gendo. Then you can still justify it being called “near” Third Impact, because it wasn’t actually allowed to fully progress all the way. And now instead of the stupid Fourth Impact/Final Impact shit in 3.0+1.0, you just make the Gendo’s goal completing the still-unfinished Third Impact.
Not only does this get rid of the whole “entire movie’s worth of convoluted events that gets untold” thing, it honestly also makes it make WAY much more sense why everyone treats Shinji like a pariah, because at least in this scenario it’s pretty unarguable that he is directly responsible for the end of the world.
BernardoCairo wrote:I've come to the same conclusion as you a while back. Why not have Shinji actually destroy the world at the end of HA and that's it? It would've been so much more digestible to the viewer. But, no. Anno and Tsurumaki had to inject another impact there. I guess they have a boner for this sort of thing. Man, I just can't wrap my head around this whole mess. What were they thinking? It's so weird...
Some things could have been kept as mysteries, like the birth of WILLE or what exactly happened to Asuka. That way, the surprise and impactful nature of Q's first half would've been kept intact...
I've though about it, and an alternative of the timeskip, if you need to have some time to pass so WILLE's rebellion can happen would be that instead of that Near and Actual Third Impact thing, have Third Impact stopped by Kaworu at the end of 2.0, but it had the time to start the core erosion of the land around Tokyo-3 (come up with some technobabble to explain that the city is spared that fate because it had pillars hidden underground, or the Black Moon protected the space just above it as long as Lilith was alive or something like that), and it's now spreading uncontrollably, as there aren't enough pillars to close off the area.
So the story continues in Tokyo-3 as it's implied to had happened, with Kaworu and Kaji leading NERV in an abandoned Tokyo-3 while the rest of the world sink in increasing chaos as the core erosion continue to advance and every country dumps their resources into trying to find a way to revert it and protect their biggest centers of population with pillars (depriving NERV from resources) while everyone tries to move to the protected areas.
Then once the 12th Angel arrives, WILLE is born and everyone ask where did this began, they can say that this was this asshole Shinji Ikari who started this.
Or, more bold, since the theme of the movies are Shinji's immaturity and his journey to grow beyond it, have the events of the timeskip stay the same, but change what happens after his return to actually play on his immaturity and insecurities: instead of dropping the guilt of the end of the world on him, have WILLE simply... not having any use for him, like they know that he was a tool of his father, so no hard feelings, but now we only have two Evas and a pilot for each, who are now veteran fighters after 14 years of services, while you're still a rookie and literally 14 years old without any particular competency since you apparently lost the ability to sync with an Eva, so you don't have anything to do here, thanks for your service I guess? Oh yeah and sorry but you didn't saved Rei.
Of course, have Misato refuse to talk to him because of her guilt of having cheered on him and be responsible for him losing 14 years and life, plus her abandonment of her son, and have Shinji sent to Village 3.
That will vindicate Shinji's feeling that Misato is like his father, that she only kept him around as long as he was useful to discard him the moment he failed, for extra bitterness have Toji and Kensuke unable to connect to him because they are grown-ups and with their own responsibilities so Shinji always feels awkward and a bother around them (especially as each has a respected specialty - doctor and survivalist/handyman/professor respectively - while he doesn't have any special skill aside piloting the Eva and be a good cook), and meet Kaji Jr, only to come to the conclusion that Misato really replaced him with a "real" son, turning him into a closed-off and bitter loner who came to the conclusion that Rei was the only one who understood him and that he was sure that he saved her.
Then Mark.09 arrives, take him (because obviously it's Rei who's piloting it, so Misato must had lied!) and the his time at NERV is more or less the same (minus the soul-crushing revelation of his guilt) with Kaworu convincing him to pilot one last time to repair the world, not for redemption, but to show everyone that he's still useful, and to save Rei. Then have the fight in Lilith's Chamber is roughly the same as in canon 3.0, except that Shinji fight to show them that he still can be useful and that he'll show them, and that he
will save Rei this time, refusing to listen to Kaworu to not touch the spears because he desperately wants save Rei, to show that he didn't lost 14 years for nothing, and because he feels that she's the only one who can understand him. (beside Kaworu)
So after Fourth Impact happens and Kaworu dies, Asuka will have good reasons to chew him as an immature brat, that they didn't "abandoned him" but gave him the chance to live the closest to a normal life in this world, and because he's a kid and had a past of being at best an instable fighter prone to losing his shit and do whatever he wanted, a liability in a real war,
and he just proved them right. And that if he really wanted to be useful to the cause, then all he had to do was to surrender Unit 13 when Asuka and Mari arrived, then that would had deprived NERV and SEELE of a great asset while probably seriously fucking up their plans, he would had proved that he was able to turn one of Gendo's manipulation against him, and if he wants so much to pilot, him piloting Unit 13 proved that he still has the ability to pilot, so he would had certainly been accepted as an extra pilot for WILLE, he would had gained nearly everything he wanted.
But no, he had to play hero, the one who knows everything and will do things his way or the highway, and as a result delivered an awakened Eva to NERV and WILLE's own Evas were severely damaged cleaning his mess, so now they will have to fight in a worse position and with him kept as a prisoner, because while he can pilot, he also proved that he's too dangerous to be left alone.
There: you have the theme of Shinji's immaturity conveyed in a way that's more fitting than "lol you can't keep your cool after being put the guilt of the end of the world on your shoulders, be mentally and emotionally tortured to near insanity and have the last chance at redemption taken from you in the middle of an (apparent) battle to death", and you even have the theme acting like his father in a way more fitting than "you wanted to save Rei in the heat of the moment without having any idea that an Impact could happen, you're like your father who planned for this shit for decades".