This is a script for a proposed disturbing ending that I wrote for Rebuild of Evangelion. In the script Gendo secretly builds a supercomputer called "Golgotha" that he uses to download control algorithms into the hive mind that emerges during the instrumentality process in order to control the hive mind and become all-powerful.

Below is the script:

As the Instrumentality is taking place, spies for Wille, upload information into its network. Misato reads the information on her monitor in the Wunder's bridge and immediately makes an IP call to Shinji.

"Shinji, I have shocking news! It turns out your father deliberately married Yui Ayanami because she had the DNA that enabled her to assimilate with the Eva and act as the master control for the Eva during its use as the Instrumentality Conduit!" Misato calls out to Shinji through the WIFI system in the Wunder's bridge.

"He also had you as a son through Yui, and Rei as the clone of Yui because he needed extra master controls for the Instrumentality Conduit!" Misato adds.

"And... unbeknownst to the rest of the NERV staff, Cmdr. Ikari secretly had the Golgotha supercomputer constructed to control the Instrumentality process!" Ritsuko concludes the conversation as strong turbulence generated by the Instrumentality Process shakes the Wunder violently.

"Shinji! It's me! Your mother Yui! I've been trapped in this Eva for years and all of what they are saying is true! Your father has been lying to us all!" Yui appears to Shinji and nervously confirms the truth.

"Mother... So his cold and distant behavior was just an act so that we wouldn't suspect what he was planning... Oh for fuck's sake!!!! We've all been deceived! Fuck!!!!" Shinji shouts hysterically upon learning of the shocking revelations.

"Damn! He was supposed to share the power with us! We've all been conned by Gendo's scheme!" Chairman of SEELE Keel Lorenz comments in absolute shock, and, while seated, slams his fist on a table as he bursts into LCL and then turns into a light yellow stream of energy that collects into a large yellow orb.

"No!!!!" Yui shouts in a panicked breakdown as she also bursts into LCL.

"Fuck!!!!" Shinji shouts in terror as he and everybody else bursts into LCL and then merges with the orb that comprises the hive mind.

Professor Fuyutsuki bugs the conversation between Shinji, Misato, Ritsuko, and Yui using his smartphone and upon hearing the disturbing news, rushes to find the room containing the Golgotha supercomputer.

"I am going to download these control algorithms from the Golgotha supercomputer into the hive mind during the assimilation process." Gendo says to the panicked Professor Fuyutsuki upon seeing him barge into the room.

"Why, why are you doing this!? Our organization is supposed to be for human survival!!!!" Professor Fuyutsuki asks nervously.

"Because... it will place me in control of the emerging Hive Mind... and make me God." Gendo says before he shoots Professor Fuyutsuki in the head, killing him instantly.

After all the streams of light yellow energy containing particles that comprise the bodies, brains, and thus consciousness of the people of Earth, Adam, Lilith, and the White and Black Moons are all absorbed into the orb, it rises into the air, and Gendo, who also bursts into LCL and merges with the orb announces: "I... Am Almighty."

Suddenly glowing versions of all the NERV staff including the Eva pilots emerge from the ground, all saying the same phrase repeatedly: "We will assimilate... We will assimilate... We will assimilate..."

Then the Nerv staff teleport into the Wunder and the Eva pilots teleport into their Evangelions before flying out of the Earth in multiple directions, seeking new worlds to assimilate as part of Gendo's quest for universal domination.

Evangelion is one of the most disturbing anime I have ever seen, but its ending was boring, so I want the ending of Rebuild of Evangelion to be disturbing so that it will be thrilling to watch.

Here is an example of concept art from the Weta Workshop for the proposed live action Evangelion movie series, what do you think?:

I split your post into its own thread because it was basically short-form fanfiction and not a speculation post. What does the Weta concept art have to do with anything? That would go in Everything Else.

Reichu wrote:I split your post into its own thread because it was basically short-form fanfiction and not a speculation post. What does the Weta concept art have to do with anything? That would go in Everything Else.

I just thought it would be interesting to share the concept art because it looks cool. I have been wanting an Evangelion live-action movie for a long time now, but the studio that has been producing the movie has stopped because of a lack of funds.

Wanting to share is fine, but you should have created a new thread in the Everything Else subforum for it. Try to keep threads on-topic, please.

Reichu wrote:Wanting to share is fine, but you should have created a new thread in the Everything Else subforum for it. Try to keep threads on-topic, please.

Sorry.