Evangelion 2.9: You Will (Not) Survive
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Evangelion 2.9: You Will (Not) Survive
It has been 14 years since Third Impact, and all that stands in the way of Fourth Impact is the group known as Wille. With barely any production capabilities, a lack of properly trained crew, and daily attacks from Nerv, defeat seems inevitable. But for Asuka, still traumatised from the attack of the 9th Angel, the most difficult battle is not against Nerv, but in her mind.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12592224/1/Evangelion-2-9-You-Will-Not-Survive
So, this is my first Evangelion fanfic. I've been thinking about doing one for a while, and I was interested in what things would look like shortly before the events of 3.0, especially from Asuka's point of view. In 3.0, she's extremely agressive towards Shinji - not as a form of hiding her own insecurities like we're used to, but blind, raging hatred for Shinji (though I'm certain that she still has positive feelings for him). What's been happening in those 14 years? Well, this is my intepretation of the post-Third Impact world.
More chapters coming soon.
Constructive criticism will be appreciated
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12592224/1/Evangelion-2-9-You-Will-Not-Survive
So, this is my first Evangelion fanfic. I've been thinking about doing one for a while, and I was interested in what things would look like shortly before the events of 3.0, especially from Asuka's point of view. In 3.0, she's extremely agressive towards Shinji - not as a form of hiding her own insecurities like we're used to, but blind, raging hatred for Shinji (though I'm certain that she still has positive feelings for him). What's been happening in those 14 years? Well, this is my intepretation of the post-Third Impact world.
More chapters coming soon.
Constructive criticism will be appreciated
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Re: Evangelion 2.9: You Will (Not) Survive
I think its pretty interesting so far, the events in the gap between 2.0 and 3.0 is something i'm very interested in exploring
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This is really good please carry on
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Just read it today.
I'm real interested to see where this would lead to. So this takes place just before 3.0? I wonder how much pent up hatred Asuka has towards Shinji.
I'm real interested to see where this would lead to. So this takes place just before 3.0? I wonder how much pent up hatred Asuka has towards Shinji.
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Thanks for the feedback guys, I hope you continue to enjoy it
Chapter 2 is up, and now we're introducing some OCs. Don't worry, though - Asuka's still going to be the main focus. Her character in 3.0 is one of the most interesting parts of Rebuild for me, so I definitely want to explore that
Chapter 2 is up, and now we're introducing some OCs. Don't worry, though - Asuka's still going to be the main focus. Her character in 3.0 is one of the most interesting parts of Rebuild for me, so I definitely want to explore that
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Chapter 3 is up.
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So, what do you guys think?
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Chapter 4 is up. This one's just a short one, with the focus being on Misato and Mari.
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Just read through all chapters, very short but good work on them so far. Only thing I'd say is that you could maybe do with using some sort of divider between the scenes as it sometimes blended into one. Aside from that good job, I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses.
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Very enjoyable so far you can feel the tension with Asuka and the mental trouble she is suffering
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Thanks for the feedback guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll remember your advice.
Chapter 5 is up.
Chapter 5 is up.
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No problem, already reviewed it was a good chapter. Set up a few interesting things, the nature of BM-01 for one and also Asuka/Mari's relationship as it stands. Looking forward to seeing what comes new
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Chapter six is up, and chapter seven isn't far behind
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I just read the latest chapter. I see a bit of emotional struggles going on with Misato and Asuka regarding Shinji, like they may still care about him; though that wasn't shown in the film. It's a bit hard for me to believe that Misato and Asuka still have some positive feelings for him considering what happened to them during the past fourteen years. I'm wondering what the future chapters will imply, or what will occur afterwards.
Anyway, I'm liking it so far. Good job!
Anyway, I'm liking it so far. Good job!
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Great update
Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy.
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Thanks for the feedback guys, chapter 7 is up.
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I enjoyed the latest chapter and how it looks at nightmares and I like that you spoke about the children who die in war.
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Chapter 8 is up, and the downward spiral continues.
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So, what do you guys think of the last few chapters?
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Deep dark stuff as I said in my review I do wonder where Wren and Asuka's relationship will go.
Little side not use an 8 symbol to separate your scene changes as the website allows numbers rather than symbols
Little side not use an 8 symbol to separate your scene changes as the website allows numbers rather than symbols
Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy.
My Eva fanfiction ff.net Fading In To The Stolen Light For download version please go to AO3
Sequel As The Divine Light Breaks For download version please go to AO3
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