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Postby Atropos » Sun Aug 23, 2015 9:13 pm

Anyone recall the name of that fic where Asuka joins NERV as staff and becomes disturbingly obsessed with Gendo?

I tried googling it, but turns out that's a rather unwieldy term to type into a search engine.

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Postby gorgeousshutin » Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:16 am

There's been one post E0E fic that gets better and better as it goes along called The Human Equation over at AO3. Wonder if it's been mentioned here yet?
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Tue Sep 01, 2015 1:46 pm

View Original PostAtropos wrote:Anyone recall the name of that fic where Asuka joins NERV as staff and becomes disturbingly obsessed with Gendo?

I tried googling it, but turns out that's a rather unwieldy term to type into a search engine.


Is that the one where she tries to fuck him? If so Nemz likes that one so he should know.
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Postby NemZ » Tue Sep 01, 2015 1:50 pm

I don't recall enjoying any such thing, Chaddy. I'm not an Asuka fan in general, so why the hell would I enjoy a fic of her sullying Gendo with her slatternly ways?

I vaguely know the fic but can't think of the name, sorry.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Tue Sep 01, 2015 2:28 pm

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Damn, I could have sworn it was you that liked it, nevermind then.
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Postby Mr. Tines » Tue Sep 01, 2015 2:31 pm

View Original PostAtropos wrote:Anyone recall the name of that fic where Asuka joins NERV as staff
This one?


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Postby Atropos » Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:29 pm

It wasn't a doujinshi, it was an English-language fanfic. I think it was on FF.net. I think I may have found it the first time in this thread, but apparently "Asuka tries to seduce Gendo" is a pretty unwieldy search term.

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Postby Bagheera » Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:42 pm

View Original PostNemZ wrote:I don't recall enjoying any such thing, Chaddy. I'm not an Asuka fan in general, so why the hell would I enjoy a fic of her sullying Gendo with her slatternly ways?


You are talking about the girl who botched a simple kiss so badly it literally led to the end of human civilization as we know it, right? The notion of her seducing anyone is high comedy.

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Postby Atropos » Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:55 pm

As I recall it was one-sided and Gendo locked her in one of the NERV detention cells. Not funny at all, actually, though it could have been.

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Postby Iuvenal » Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:08 pm

Bagheera wrote:The notion of [Asuka] seducing anyone is high comedy.


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Postby Gob Hobblin » Sat Sep 05, 2015 12:46 pm

I was wondering: have there been any fics out where the only change in the story is that Gendo is undeniably altruistic? In other words, as opposed to trying to hijack instrumentality solely for the purpose of reuniting with Yui, he is instead focused on stopping Seele completely (as in being a double-agent, and trying to sabotage Instrumentality from the inside).
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Postby Iuvenal » Sat Sep 05, 2015 1:05 pm

It's vague but I think that was the direction Get Mother Back was going. That's the closest to a dead ringer I can think of, and it's short and done as a series of vignettes.

Walking in the Shadow of Dreams had a more-or-less Good Guy Gendo post-3I, but not before, but you're probably already familiar with that.

Our very own Chuckman's delightful Scrooged was arguably a take in that direction after a run-in with some recognizable ghosts, though it skipped from the beginning of the series to the end because being a day-one AU wasn't it's purpose.

The under-appreciated work Asuka Langley Sohryu, Pilot Errant from the tail end of the early FFN era had a Gendo who wasn't up to anything too nefarious, but that was a quasi-Ep26 AU, and it's certainly not the focus.

Also, besides Scrooged, none of these were or ever will be finished.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon Sep 07, 2015 8:27 am

View Original Postgorgeousshutin wrote:There's been one post E0E fic that gets better and better as it goes along called The Human Equation over at AO3. Wonder if it's been mentioned here yet?


Oh man, I didn't expect to see that get mentioned over here! That's mine, glad to see you like it ^_^

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Postby gorgeousshutin » Tue Sep 08, 2015 11:58 am

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:Oh man, I didn't expect to see that get mentioned over here! That's mine, glad to see you like it ^_^

It's very well done. Keep up the good work ;-)
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Postby Gob Hobblin » Wed Sep 09, 2015 8:36 pm

Okay, I'm going to bump a fic:

Shadow Technocracy Evangelion.

The writing is very good, the dialogue flows naturally, and the writer has a good grasp on the terminology he uses. It feels like a good story, reads like one, and has a good balance so far.

Also, the entire cast is OC: that might be a turn-off for some people, but I think that's quite a thing for a fanfic writer to attempt. Nothing wrong with setting a whole new story in a universe: it is a sandbox for our imaginations, after all. The characters kind of feel flat coming out, but I'm willing to give him time to develop them.

The story shows a lot of promise, and I think that the author (Venom Chills) can follow through on that.
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Postby NemZ » Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:17 pm

It's not just OC worldbuilding, it's also an AU. They don't even call things evas and angels, and there are cyborg people running around. At that point why bother calling it eva fanfiction at all?
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Postby Gob Hobblin » Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:27 pm

Because it's largely inspired by Evangelion. It might as well be called a fanfic, if it is too close to the source material to call your own product.
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Postby Reichu » Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:50 pm

Evangelion without the Evas? Inconceivable!

...I figure at a certain point of divergence, you just have to bite the bullet and differentiate your universe all the way. At first it's painful, but you'll be glad you did it later.
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Postby Stillborn » Thu Sep 10, 2015 2:57 am

Something called Infinite Genesis. I don't know if I posted it here already, but it's pretty much AU Evangelion with technology of Infinite Stratos. Sadly its unfinished and I can't contact author, but for what there is to read, it's rather nice. There are only few things that annoy me, but otherwise I enjoyed it. I also hope that someone here either can contact author about it or it will inspire someone to write his own version of this :P
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Postby gorgeousshutin » Thu Sep 10, 2015 5:42 pm

View Original PostGob Hobblin wrote:Okay, I'm going to bump a fic:

Shadow Technocracy Evangelion.

The writing is very good, the dialogue flows naturally, and the writer has a good grasp on the terminology he uses. It feels like a good story, reads like one, and has a good balance so far.

Wow . . . a "EVA fanfic" with an entirely OC cast and without EVA . . .

Yes, the writing is better than many others on FFnet. But the vast majority of people read fanfics precisely because they want to see the show's characters and/or elements in situations not shown in the canon. Thus why this story has such a low review count despite the writing quality. I myself generally tend to find the presences of OCs jarring in fanfiction, and I do believe I am not alone here. It feels to me like that author is barking up the wrong tree by trying to pitch their 95% original work to Eva fans -- most of whom expects to see Eva characters in fics. They would've gotten more recognition by making the story 100% original and displaying it as original fiction.
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