I'd like to show my (biggest)gratitude to Lili-san, Synapsid-san, Lament-san, Ilari-san for the scan and other people that have been contributing in this thread.
I'm not done reading all of it again, but *cough*as a fairly new K/S fan *cough*
this is really an amazing find. It gives, at least, a little bit more enlightenment (and/or clarity if I may say?)
regarding their intial intention for e24 including Kaworu's character (he's so vague and hard to portray, usually I just cling to Kaworu in manga version/EMK before I read these drafts), and his relationship toward Shinji, etc, etc. Pay attention that I don't consider these as the 'lost pieces of canons'. :P
I thought ep 24 could've been much better because the way it played seems to be rushed which gives so much room to debate over.
How interesting that some part of the drafts has been 'recycled' in manga (in a different condition and situation) and spin-off's game.
.. and Anno-san to have a feeling (fanboy!?)
with Kaworu is pretty much unexpected. ^^;
Again, thank you thank you thank you very much for sharing this with us, I'm looking forward for further translation.