[Fic] Ayanami: Vengeance (New Version of Chapter 40 Online!)
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without a doubt, she'll see regular Rei at one point in the tale
(Most likely via a dream, though)
(Most likely via a dream, though)
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Of course you can always give the fans what they really want to see! And no I don't mean hawt Mari on Rei action!
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Ryjin wrote:And no I don't mean hawt Mari on Rei action!
I figured someone would look at the friendship between Rei and Mari and think of it being somewhat homoerotic sooner or later (Just kidding )
now..that goofy fight seems more likely for the RP than the fanfic, so it will happen one way or another
speaking of Mari, I wonder what you think of my take on her?
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So far so good and I'm liking the added detail of her having a thing for Kenske, poor kid almost never gets any love. I also think it's a good thing that you kinda eased up on the her British slang, doing accents and foreign slag is a really tricky line to walk especially if you don't have any real personal experience with the culture.
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I would like to have her toss out as much british slag as I could, but finding good moments to squeeze in the slag words is hard, especially since a lot of the words I think would have a british slang versions don't
now...with that said, i'll be flat out pissed if her english dub actor doesn't give her a british accent (It's highly possible, but whatever)
now...with that said, i'll be flat out pissed if her english dub actor doesn't give her a british accent (It's highly possible, but whatever)
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Come now, the American dub actor is a lessor breed of creature; one should not try to expect to much of them for they are simple breed limited in both capacity AND intelligence, kinda of like a politician, cheerleader or a CEO.
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just caught a few typos I made in Chapter 5, so I immediately fixed them before anyone can notice :)
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given as I'm an atrocious speller I do tend to miss those too.
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The people who voted for Obama or Romney are fucking idiots. Wake the fuck up.
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Might wait a little longer before I start on Chapter 6
since I posted Chapter 5, I researched some of the extracannonical things and have gotten some great, yet screwed-up ideas, especially a subplot involving three newcoming Nerv technicians
once that and the Iruel sequence show up, its back to being an M-rated FanFic on FanFiction.net
since I posted Chapter 5, I researched some of the extracannonical things and have gotten some great, yet screwed-up ideas, especially a subplot involving three newcoming Nerv technicians
once that and the Iruel sequence show up, its back to being an M-rated FanFic on FanFiction.net
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Angry smiley does not find your excuses amusing........
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The people who voted for Obama or Romney are fucking idiots. Wake the fuck up.
"The Constitution was our last, best hope for peace... It failed. But, in the Year of the War against the Globalists, it became something greater: our last, best hope
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the sad and funny thing is that with the massive (for the most part) changes I made to Rei, it may make Shinji look more pathetic than he already is and Asuka even bitchier and more unlikeable than before
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Just wait and see ;)
once I get my next part of the RP out of the way, the typing of Chapter 6 will commence
once I get my next part of the RP out of the way, the typing of Chapter 6 will commence
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Wait! Asuka's not a Bitch! She's just........ chronically bitchy, that's it!
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a doujinshi adaption would be as cool (though I refuse for anyone to add sex scenes in it if that happens)
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You know it's not a requirement by law that all doujinshi have to be porno's....... wait a minute, what's this? According to Section II a) paragraph 4 of HR369 Doujinshi Regulations Act of 2007 all doujinshi must, "Have a bear minimum of no less then 4 pages of characters either male or female depicted in the nude or in the act of sex or engaging in the act of sodomy or the act of fallatio." Damn, looks like you're SOL man!
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so if a doujinshi doesn't need to be pornographic in nature, then great
though this tale is a long way from being truly finished, because even after I complete it, it needs massive proofreading, cleaning up and such, thanks to another person on another forum
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