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Working on my NaNoWriMo novel, and I decided to devote it to Part Three of my fanfic Neon Enoch Evangelion. I've got 20,000 words banged out already and I'm about to add a few hundred more...
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Avatar: At least the wintry gent is smiling a bit, instead of facepalming...
Avatar: At least the wintry gent is smiling a bit, instead of facepalming...
This one I'm still playing with, but I might post it soon on fictionpress. Don't have a title yet (probably "I Am the Dog" or something, seeing as how it's succinct enough), but I can say for sure that it's shorter, more emotive, more imaginative, and more evocative than the last one.
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I am the dog.
I’ll look to you for a scorn on the wind
Like an expression in the sunset
As it falls beneath the cloud.
I’ll stare after your footsteps
When you leave to board the train
When you leave me behind on the platform again.
I’ll wait for a passing decree or command
When I cry for the bone, though your obedience
Flees with the sound of the whistle.
I’ll wait for the ball you dropped as the doors
Hiss closed behind you, I’ll wait for the time
On your wristwatch that feeds you the day,
I’ll wait for the sound of the trolley, or the sight
Of the coach, I’ll wait for the shoes at the crossing,
And I’ll wait for the bars at the gate.
I’ll wait for anything your lonesome being feeds to the late.
Through the wind in the station and the hum of the crowd,
I’ll wait for the lilt in your tongue or the sigh on your brow,
Though I’ll never hear the sound of your words
As you murmur your goodbye.
I’ll look to you for a scorn on the wind
Like an expression in the sunset
As it falls beneath the cloud.
I’ll stare after your footsteps
When you leave to board the train
When you leave me behind on the platform again.
I’ll wait for a passing decree or command
When I cry for the bone, though your obedience
Flees with the sound of the whistle.
I’ll wait for the ball you dropped as the doors
Hiss closed behind you, I’ll wait for the time
On your wristwatch that feeds you the day,
I’ll wait for the sound of the trolley, or the sight
Of the coach, I’ll wait for the shoes at the crossing,
And I’ll wait for the bars at the gate.
I’ll wait for anything your lonesome being feeds to the late.
Through the wind in the station and the hum of the crowd,
I’ll wait for the lilt in your tongue or the sigh on your brow,
Though I’ll never hear the sound of your words
As you murmur your goodbye.
- Bomby von Bombsville
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Preparing to shoot a no budget, minimalist film next semester. The story's been refining in my mind for the past two years or so, now I'm ready to tell it.
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- Uriel Septim VII
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I've got two essays to turn in tomorrow. One is about the assassination of Abraham Lincoln and my view on whether or not limitless historical evidence from that event would cover all the mysteries. My other essay is for the infamous and widely abhorred English Composition class. I have to state whether I think volunteering is selfish, selfless, or a combination of both. If I had known college was predominantly essays, I would've gone to an art school.
Also I'm trying to start another screenplay. Hopefully it won't turn out like the grotesque monstrosities my first three were.
Also I'm trying to start another screenplay. Hopefully it won't turn out like the grotesque monstrosities my first three were.
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You know what, rip me off once, shame on me. But twice? I'm coming after you and taking back what's mine. --Billy Mays
You know what, rip me off once, shame on me. But twice? I'm coming after you and taking back what's mine. --Billy Mays
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Mongoosedog wrote:i have 3 projects due in a week or 2. if i don't complete them there is a possibility i might fail this course... it's my own fault for slacking off though
Do you consciously put off all work until right before it's due just like me?
AVATAR-- Hedy Lamarr: actor, inventor of spread spectrum communications technology, and main villain of Blazing Saddles.
You know what, rip me off once, shame on me. But twice? I'm coming after you and taking back what's mine. --Billy Mays
You know what, rip me off once, shame on me. But twice? I'm coming after you and taking back what's mine. --Billy Mays
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Uriel Septim VII wrote:Mongoosedog wrote:i have 3 projects due in a week or 2. if i don't complete them there is a possibility i might fail this course... it's my own fault for slacking off though
Do you consciously put off all work until right before it's due just like me?
sort of, i plan to do it earlier but don't work on it because i tell myself i have heaps of time and then before i know it i find myself in my current situation
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Okie dokie, time for the very first glimpse of "they fight crime" yes I only have one panel done right now, I gotta get my speed a bit faster
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I wrote a love song for eggnog. It was okay.
"Now, from Nature we obtain abundant information about ourselves, and precious little about others. About the woman you clasp in your arms, can you say with certainty that she does not feign pleasure? About the woman you mistreat, are you quite sure that from abuse she does not derive some obscure and lascivious satisfaction? Let us confine ourselves to simple evidence: through thoughtfulness, gentleness, concern for the feelings of others we saddle our own pleasure with restrictions, and make this sacrifice to obtain a doubtful result." -The Divine Marquis
"I agree Hans, but we have talked about those anal fisting analogies." -Werner Herzog
"I agree Hans, but we have talked about those anal fisting analogies." -Werner Herzog
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And here's the 2nd panel, I had an easier time doing this one then the last one.
And here's the 2nd panel, I had an easier time doing this one then the last one.
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I'm just now finally getting around to working on the awards for the lilim design contest. Go me.
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"I'd consider myself a realist, alright? but in philosophical terms I'm what's called a pessimist. It means I'm bad at parties." - Rust Cohle
"Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize that half of 'em are stupider than that." - George Carlin
"The internet: It's like a training camp for never amounting to anything." - Oglaf
"I think internet message boards and the like are dangerous." - Anno
You might want to use a different font. I can barely read that without blowing it up to full size.
Yeah I'll probably replace that when I put the page together.
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If you want to support this comic buy something from me on amazon
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