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Postby MAGI » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:53 pm

Would you like me to give an account of my life story?
It all started on tha fateful night... there I was. Watching some obscure non-commercial television channel. Then, there was Evangelion. I knew straight away that it was for me. But I knew I couldn't watch it, because I didn't watch it from the beginning. However, I caught with a couple of episodes, and even saw the last ones.
I tried to forget it, and I even tell myself, to this day, that I never saw it.

That was the first time it was aired in Australia. Little did I know that it will rerun in Australia the enxt year...
(More on that, later. I got to go.)
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?

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Postby Dark FireStar » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:55 pm

Youve led such an exciteing life(sarcasem) lol
Don't ban me for a limited time! Either ban me for good or let me be. (I only hold grudges for a few years lol)

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Postby MAGI » Mon Nov 08, 2004 9:01 pm

MAGI's exciting life Part 2:

That year was a year of excitement and discovery. It was perfect. Once a week, two episodes were aired. I loved it. At my local library, if I was lucky, I would even find a tape. Since my knowledge on Evangelion was still limited, I had a hard time deciding if it was an episode that I've seen before.
But, wait... No! As swiftly as a silent assasin, my joy turned to frustration as a missed two whole episodes. Should I veiw the next? Can I? I don't know!
It all turned to a chaotic mess. I watched the first 15 or so episodes, but I began having blacnkness here and there. Since episode 20 or there abouts, it was all random viewings. I regretted it.

MAGI's exciting life Part 3:

One day, in the year of 2002, MAGI got... cable.
And guess what they were airing a month into it? Evangelion.
So, the vigil begun one last time....
And guess what happened on the 22nd week? We had to move houses!
And guess what that meant? CABLE CUT! No more Evangelion, no more nothing. I was left... with nothing.
,_n.

Death takes you like night
The slow, quiet death of dusk
You flee but to night
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?

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Postby ChronoX » Mon Nov 08, 2004 9:07 pm

poor, poor Magi, lets hope you get your dvd's soon
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby Phaze » Wed Nov 10, 2004 8:53 pm

Your Haikus all suck.
Don't take me seriously,
but do read this page.
The purpose of writing is to inflate weak ideas, obscure poor reasoning, and inhibit clarity. With a little practice, writing can be an intimidating and impenetrable fog!

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Postby MAGI » Wed Nov 10, 2004 9:14 pm

Don't tell me bullshit
I know what a haiku is
Re-read mine again

I can see how many people are prone to skim through poems and haikus, and don't give any serious thought about them. But I nurture everone of mine. I don't talk bullshit unless it's not about Evangelion. I devote my time to my haikus. Sure, English haikus may not be true haikus, but it's a poem, and it's the thought that counts.
Why don't you try to see what I was thinking, again?

The wretched shall wake
They shall turn the tables round
And bring forth Justice
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?

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Postby Phaze » Wed Nov 10, 2004 9:28 pm

===============================================
Read the second line
of the last haiku I wrote.
Do as it tells you.

The haiku I wrote,
and the link that I posted,
were not personal.

I humble myself
when I read your poetry.
Clearly, it's better.
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The purpose of writing is to inflate weak ideas, obscure poor reasoning, and inhibit clarity. With a little practice, writing can be an intimidating and impenetrable fog!

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Postby MAGI » Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:20 am

Expressing passion
That's just all I was doing
Wasn't serious

I thought it went without repeating. :lol:
(And I am humbled by your humility, Phaze 8))

The rain is petty
Only itself is gloomy
I embrace the rain
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?

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Postby Hexon.Arq » Thu Nov 11, 2004 7:10 pm

These things we write
I guess they don't really count
Emptiness with form

_you can't do anything, so don't even try
_get some help
_don't do what sonic does

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Postby MAGI » Thu Nov 11, 2004 8:54 pm

"These things we write" is four syllables. :lol:

Night time is falling
Stars shine like the city lights
Which has all but gone

All that's left is night
A red scarf on glittered black
A smile for Shinji

And the cresent moon
Such beauty, there, for him, but...
Asuka ruined it!
ココにいても、いいの?
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Postby Hexon.Arq » Thu Nov 11, 2004 9:39 pm

Doesn't matter. They don't count. :P

_you can't do anything, so don't even try
_get some help
_don't do what sonic does

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Postby MAGI » Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:50 am

It's a shame this thread isn't very active. Oh, well.

The eyeballs sliding
The skin lets loose its innards
Pieces everywhere

A beautiful sight
Your eyes redden like your hair
And your heart still beats

Inside, you wriggle
Your wretched abdomen messed
And twisting around

Hanging on a spear
You reach out to the heavens
And receive more spears

...

Your eyes, now aimless
Stare up at the day-blue sky
Or are they at him?

Waiting, pierced with spears
A white-haired girl reaches out
And you disappear

...

Your eyes, unblinking
Stares on the starry night sky
And then on to him

You still want to live?
Escape nothingness with him?
Oh, how disgusting
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?

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Postby MAGI » Thu Nov 18, 2004 4:45 am

m(__)m

So... this is the death of poetry? Then here's the death poem:

Fall to the water
Exchange a silent farewell
She falls to the sky
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Postby Oblivious » Fri Nov 19, 2004 7:47 am

http://sazanquest.net.8.isreserved.com/rei-shinji/forum/viewtopic.php?t=358

8)
http://graveyardofroses.spaces.live.com
You can either choose to change yourself or change your surroundings. All decisions are variations of those two.

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Postby MAGI » Fri Nov 19, 2004 7:11 pm

Right, now there's an example to follow.

Rushing to the wreck
They shall see what remains, there
Then resurrect her
ココにいても、いいの?
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Postby Zuggy » Wed Aug 17, 2005 1:13 pm

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Postby Olin of Xephon » Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:33 am

Fascination

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There are things you'll never see, hidden behind my walls.

There is a me you'll never meet, hidden behind my walls.

My mystery is infamy in the questions you all ask, my secrets hidden from your mind, in secrecy I bask.

I am thirty people, I am ninety-nine, I am four and twenty, I am baked in a pie.

You pretend to know me, you pretend to understand, struggle, decide, decline, use your mental hand.

Still I elude you, the mystery that is me, still hidden behind my walls I am, elusive, imprisoned, yet free.

Look once more into my azure eyes, question all you know, try to understand me, seeds of deception I'll sow.

You can not catch me, I'm elusive as the mind, you can not understand me, behind my walls I hide.

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What Am I? (more then one answer)
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I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby ObsessiveMathsFreak » Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:41 am

This Haiku prose
Bothers me greatly
I cannot understand
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May The Maths Be With You.

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Postby sachiel » Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:19 pm

ObsessiveMathsFreak wrote:This Haiku prose
Bothers me greatly
I cannot understand


ZOMG

Incorrect haiku format.

:lol:


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