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Postby klasnic » Wed Oct 07, 2009 9:32 am

Thanks a lot for your hard/great work 04choiy :asuka_thumbsup: , finally I can see a translation of some Anima´s paragraphs (not only the covers...), I hope that you continue with this translation :wink: .

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Postby 04choiy » Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:28 am

Here goes...


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Situation [Ultimo] +14 minutes

"Shinji kun! Calm down! you'll lose control over the AT field!"
Misato's voice, and one of many window displays starts to blink, warning Shinji. The S2 device of Eva-1, which was currently sprinting sso fast that it was almost blurred to the human eye, was producing more energy than 4 Mid-sized Nueclear submarines. The imense output of heat units were fluctuating the air around it and the front armour which was laminated with atomic arangements was cuting throught the air. The equipments designed by man to arm the Eva's lasked effeciency; 20% of the total energy, equal to the output of that of one nueclear submarine, were lost during transfer in the form of heat. But the actual body-the actual compositoin of the Eva showed no loss of energy during transfer whatsoever. Of course, this is not possible in existing physics. (So much for the law of energy conservation..) Before the Eva's feet, taking ggiant strides at 0.2 secs per step, touched the ground something crushed the trees and rock below compressing the area beneath the Eva's feet and causing something red and angular to momentarily flash out- an AT field.
--The Eva-Type F- is also a testing unit for an AT field diviative control (Like....um.. concentrating the AT field on your hands or feet or etc...) Shinji applies teh AT field below Eva-1's feet and takes it as a replacement of a firm foothold. The vast area of the prevents destruction from the pressure of Eva-1's strides; 14000 times that of a large sized tank, and enables Eva-1 to move quickly over weak soil. Eva-1 entered the battle field at 93m/s. The LOS instantly allowed Shinji to see Eva-2 and the Mass-Produced Evas around it. The sight of Eva-2, wiith its head skewered by Longinus's spear reminded Shinji of one of those grotesque paintings. Shinji, forgetting the fact that the information likage between Eva-1 and 2 was severed, shouted. "Asuka!!!"



Chapter 1 (Huh?!?!)
[Memories in the watermelon field-NERV Japan base raided]
Jap-Korean trans = Mailune
Korean-English trans = 04choiy


Polluted-Battle Area- Early summer

The sound of a four-wheel scraping the sand and a voice calling "Yoohoo~" arouse Shinji back from his thoughts, turning around he saw Katsuragi Misato stepping off a military vehicle. Misato crossed her armes and looked up and down at Shinji.
"You've grown again?. Well boys just keep on growing don't they? Hm~ wonder what kind of man you'll grow up to.. hmm...well done you mutt"
"I said I was getting tired of hearing you saying :" hmm...well done you mutt"! "
"Ooooh~ fast reaction, You're now all grown now aren't you?"
Misato caught sight of Shinji glancing at the distant wall srrounding the Geo-front.
"...thinking about it again?.."

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Postby 04choiy » Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:04 pm

Hmph...

Situation Ultimo -50 seconds
"Katsuragi (Um..I'm not famliliar woth Katsuragi's position in English..) - The briefing results?"
"I've sent them to all the personel. It seems that everybody's rather taken aback by what happened to the Human Instrumentallity project sir"
"Including hte gov" Ikari Gendoh said, laughing hoarsly. "I'll have to thank Kaji. Even they wouldn't want to lose their dogs/him (Something wrong with the korean trans....) Even if they postphone any action in fearof retributionby ZEELE.."
"All that awaits them is complete self destruction" Katsuragi cut in.
"And so it is...What about the Moblie Support Units?"
"We've finished transferring Eva-1's combat, equipment and repair data to the super-parrel computer's (Something like that....not so good with proffessional words...) memory bank. We secured the survival of the computers by despersing them within 82 tanks. Equipment and repair reports will be ready shortly.
Ikari turned to the voice recorder after answering
"It is currently 02:35 I grant you permision to declare Situation Ultimo if their is any need"

"Something up ahead! Low orbital bowings, estimated 2024 rounds, 4 rounds per sec.. We lost contact with base but simulations predict that there is no change within the Geo-front!!"
'Only 26 hours form permision to declare Ultimo

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:16 pm

Just curious, is this just rough notes or how the writing style of Anima really is?

By the way, Misato's a Captain until episode 12 then becomes a Major, at least in the series canon. Rebuild has something different for her ranks.
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She's a Lt Col in 1.0 and Col in 2.0.



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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Tue Oct 13, 2009 8:39 am

That is pretty much how it's written. The direct Jap->Eng draft I have is quite similar in structure.

Also shitty scans of the new Dengeki are out, Yamashita blows up the moon.

I should be getting my Dengeki this week hopefully.
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Postby 04choiy » Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:45 am

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'Only 26 hours form permision to declare Ultimo, they're quick... Misato cursed silently inside the shell shocked vehicle.
The heavily armoured vehicle in whihc Misato was in was about 40 kilometres away from Geo-front but ZEELE'S raid was far beyond what they expected.
"Sensor wipeout confirmed! Dammit! We've defened it so much!"
"The sensor's position must have leaked out, anything that doesn't move can't survive. What happened to the moblie support units?"
"Still standing, 35secs till inter-vehicle communications restores"
'Geo-front should be safe; no matter how great this attack is this is still human. Geo-front's walls can't be penetrated if it's not as powerful as an Eva or an angel'...Misato breathed deeply then said;

" 'As superior commandor I hereby declare situation Ultimo. All operative authorities and right to dispatch Eva's are now mine, over and out' send that to all the MSU as soon as the line restores."

[Ultimo] is a declaration code given to Misato
After declaring, information from the Mobile units spread within hundreds of square kilometres support the Eva.
But of course, nobody know which will be safer, the Geo-fron or the Mobile support unit.

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Postby BattleMonkey » Wed Oct 14, 2009 2:29 pm

Woo yay!

So where do these translations connect to. Are these all from the same chapter or each segment is a different one?

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:31 pm

TMBounty_Hunter wrote:That is pretty much how it's written. The direct Jap->Eng draft I have is quite similar in structure.

Also shitty scans of the new Dengeki are out, Yamashita blows up the moon.


...Yamashita's one crazy mofo.

And now I'm somewhat disappoint. ANIMA could have been so much more then it is with how it's written... :sigh:
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Postby chee » Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:31 pm

Wow.

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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:17 pm

BattleMonkey wrote:Woo yay!

So where do these translations connect to. Are these all from the same chapter or each segment is a different one?

This is all still chapter 1, roughly half of it.

Although personally I don't think it's quite useful to have a bit-by-bit quick and dirty translation of a translation laying around I won't interfere since some people are fine with having that.


The TL that I got earlier to do straight jap->eng translations should be getting me the last bits of chapter 1 after which it will be checked, rechecked, typeset/photoshoped onto the ready templates, checked again and released properly.


Sailor Star Dust wrote:...Yamashita's one crazy mofo.

I might be exagerating just a little bit :P


Sailor Star Dust wrote:And now I'm somewhat disappoint. ANIMA could have been so much more then it is with how it's written... :sigh:

y so disappoint?

would you have prefered it to be a poem? personally I see nothing wrong with the style, and also it's another guy responsible for "novelizaion" so you can probably shift some of your blame on him.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:49 am

I meant Yamashita's nuts considering Werewolf Asuka, but in his unused Proposal ( IIRC) TV and film ending, his prose is at least nice.

I blame the novelization guy then (here I was thinking Yamashita himself is writing the damn thing while that hentai artist guy's doing the art). In this case, dunno if that artist is also the author.
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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Sat Oct 17, 2009 12:39 pm

Chapter 23 rawrs

"Fly Me To The Moon" taken literally.

http://www.mresources.info/Eva_stuff/Ev ... 11_RAW.rar

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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:38 pm

And look who it is!

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Arael Carrier wut

アラエルキャリヤー

Yes that is the moon for Arael and not aerial. One of the different katakana spellings for carrier according to jap wiki.
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Postby evilhead008 » Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:13 pm

I'm not sure if this should be in the Fandom Area, but the website I found it on has it under "scans." Is it in the same boat as F-Type armor? Or an artist's name?

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Postby Great Genius Shinji-Sama » Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:16 pm

this needs to be in Everything else Evangelion. And its an AU manga.
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Postby Fazmotron » Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:46 pm

Looking around a bit before you post a new thread would be a good idea next time.
http://forum.evageeks.org/viewtopic.php?t=7424
Its a sticky too.
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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Wed Nov 25, 2009 3:31 pm

ZOMG TEH Rei

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that's January chara page

as far as December full chapter scans go, i've received the issue but since upgrading to Win7 my scanner is no longer supported by the dipshits at HP so I'll have to dig up an older machine during the weekend
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Postby Great Genius Shinji-Sama » Wed Nov 25, 2009 3:34 pm

TMBounty_Hunter said:
ZOMG TEH Rei
Now with 200% more smexiness.

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Postby TMBounty_Hunter » Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:25 am

December 2009
Vol II - Chapter 4

"chapter" 2, "story" 4 actually, but meh.

http://www.mresources.info/Eva_stuff/Ev ... 12_RAW.rar

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interesting how Asuka just goes for those mystery parts in the shoulder, still wondering wtf those are.

it won't answer the above question but hopefully some magic will happen and chapter 1 will be out before new years.
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