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Postby chazthesilencer » Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:40 am

I need help.

I've created a little Eva parody series on
Youtube (and Veoh) by the name:
(New) Neon Menaces Evangelion
currently the third episode is uploaded.

I'd appreciate any support and criticism
the EvaGeeks community is willing to share
with me as the series is produced.

You people are- after all-
the audience I'm making it for.

I've begun scripting episode 04, although
I'm having trouble motivating myself to
really push on with the project.

Any thoughts?

I might post the outline of ep04's plot soon.

Here's an sample of my stuff:
NNME 03 (part01)
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Postby Zaiku » Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:27 am

I have seen everything of this series, I loved it so much I subscribed. (I'm ZaikuZERO on the tube.) Personally, the 3D style is very unique, the humour is fantastic, especially the countless references to Evangelion. Such as the, you're gonna get action at Rei's house, or I'm not suppose to be emo till later in the series. And the whole 'baka' translation jokes are fantastic.
I don't know what else to say but keep up the AWESOME work. :thumbsup:
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Postby Action_Bastard » Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:34 am

That has so much WIN, words cannot describe. Though I would like to see Ritsuko have a different voice, she sounds like she is from Brooklyn. Other than that, keep it up! :thumbsup:
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Postby Sharaz Destler » Fri Oct 03, 2008 10:26 am

"Come to the dark side...we have cookies" sounds like a reference to one of the clubs over at the Doctor Who Forum, but I'm willing to believe that it comes from somewhere else... :leekspin:

Also, I love Sachiel's Charlie Chaplin-style walk.

Your parody is an A+, I think.

EDIT: On one of the "Shinji screens" Gendo's standing near, I notice that the first one on the top row says "80085" on it. Am I supposed to read this as "BOOBS" as written in computer numerals? :)
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Postby chazthesilencer » Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:53 am

Sharaz Destler wrote:I notice that the first one on the top row says "80085" on it.

Thank god, somebody noticed the sight-gag :]

NME04 will likely cover the 8th + 9th
episode of the original series, effectively
skipping ep07...

The Jet Alone story will be covered later,
seeing as everybody loves ep07 so much :]

The plan is to introduce Asuka sooner
rather than later...
but should I withhold her appearance
until NME05? (If only just to wind-up the
Asuka fans? :])

I might go with a 2D look again for NME04,
though I would try making it look a lot
more lively than my previous 2D stuff.
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Postby Zaiku » Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:14 am

The 3D AND 2D BOTH look very good. Maybe you could pull off a Rebuild and do it in predominately 2D, but have fancy scenes and sequences in 3D.
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Postby Sharaz Destler » Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:33 pm

Ye Gods, I wasn't prepared to see the Teletubbies as the SEELE committee, though Keel Lorenz might have benefitted from being Davros rather than Robocop. :)

Also, the joke with Toji's "hip-hop-speak" and the incongruously Victorian subtitles is killingly funny.

One nitpick, though: why does Shinji have to sound like the GEICO gecko? :jiggy:
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Postby Avatar of Dreams » Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:32 pm

Honestly I can't find anything to criticize. You have an absolutely amazing sense of humor. You win the internet.

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Postby chazthesilencer » Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:17 pm

I'm doing a good job of finding things
to distract myself from working on this
script, the graphic novel section of the
library being the main cause so far...

We've already seen/heard an Arnie-style
Asuka in ReDeath, but are there any other
comedic interpretations of Asuka I should
try to avoid repeating?

Any references, anybody?
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:14 pm

I've seen most of the series as you know by my youtube comments ;) but I might have missed episode 3.

My only thought at the moment is to make a Shinji/Asuka erotic asphyxiation joke, that hasn't really been done in any fan parody videos* I don't think.

Or maybe something about Asuka not knowing whether to beat Shinji up or make out with him. I dunno, lol.

*Redeath (No I haven't seen Redux yet :( ) had the ingenious splicing of the episode 15 kiss with the 26' strangling but I don't know if that counts.

The only criticism which I made on youtube was I personally prefered it when you did all the voices. I thought it was funnier that way. Still, the talent you have for the voice-acting works well, too. /my 2 cents
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Postby Lucretius » Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:40 pm

You should definitely portray Shinji as an S&M freak. It's the only logical way to explain his attraction to Asuka and his desire for Gendou's approval. I mean, who would want Gendou to love them?

Neon Menaces has been brilliant so far, by the way. I especially liked the faux audio commentary. Spookily close to the real thing...

He shuddered a bit, remembering the somewhat creepy level of detail Kaji had gone into, while rubbing a watermelon in a disturbingly sexual way.

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Postby devil_eAter » Thu Oct 09, 2008 8:17 pm

They have been awesome so far!!!

Here is an idea for the future! Asuka keeps saying ull crap to Rei and Rei does to her what she did to Shinji, kick her between the legs revealing Asuka to be not all girl.

Shinji:......okay, that was really weird...I'm going to go smoke something, black out, and forget I saw that...
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Postby chazthesilencer » Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:04 am

Script is typed, the first draft ready.

Currently contacting my VA (Voice Acting)
team, seeing if they're up for more.

As soon as everybody (or indeed, nobody)
has confirmed, I'll be posting a
recruitment video.

One thing of I'm sure of, is that:
I'll be needing an actress to play the
voice of Asuka...

In the meantime, can anybody help
me with my lack of witt, and suggest
a few homosexual-sounding names for
boats, please?

^Serious :] No, really.
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Postby V » Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:10 am

Oh I love these parodies, you're the guy that makes Neon Menaces?

Episode 3; pretty good, though the "torus" thing was that apparently, Ramiel has an energy reactor inside itself that is toroidal in shape; that is, donut shaped. I have no idea why they just don't call it that.

***my idea for a running Asuka gag would be to have her speak in NOTHING BUT German; translate your dialogue through Babelfish (who would really notice if its entirely accurate?) and have a running gag be that everyone apparently understands her anyway.

**might want to make fun of that in episode 9, Asuka says "you're thinking in Japanese aren't you?" sort of acknowledging that we hear English but they speak Japanese.

also poke fun at that the conceit that Asuka has a Japanese name but is mostly German and looks European; sort of like Misato were to say "the next pilot is named Asuka" and Shinji would be daydreaming about her as the perfect girl, only then to be started that she's this angry German girl.

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Postby Zaiku » Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:39 pm

In the meantime, can anybody help
me with my lack of witt, and suggest
a few homosexual-sounding names for
boats, please?


Umm, let me give it a shot:

S.S Pride.
S.S Rainbow.
S.S YMCA
S.S Gorgous.
S.S Babez
S.S Kaworu
S.S Love
S.S Harmony
S.S We're all homosexuals
S.S Gay Rights
S.S Mud Wrestling
S.S Wang
S.S Sausage Party

Feel free to take out the S.S, I think that's only for crusie ships, but I'm not sure.
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Postby chazthesilencer » Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:26 am

Cry for help, I need VAs

Roles currently open for audition include:
Asuka
Ritsuko
Kensucky
Kaji
The Admiral
Sea-Man 1
Sea-Man 2

I don't have many female supporters, (hardly surprising, eh?)
so finding a VA for Asuka and Ritsuko
could well be time consuming...

Please help me, fellow EvaGeeks.
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Postby Lucretius » Sun Nov 02, 2008 9:34 am

chazthesilencer wrote: homosexual-sounding names for
boats, please?

^Serious :] No, really.


Hmm...

*S.S. Moby-Dick

*S.S. Humpback Whale

*S.S. Fighting Seamen

*S.S. Fighting Sperm Whale

*S.S. Giddenbehind


Nah, those suck. :spout:

Since V brought up the subject of German...maybe you could have Asuka say really Anti-Semitic things that nobody understands?

Asuka: Wir muessen die Juden umbringen!

Shinji: What?

Asuka: I said, "Let's go."

Or:

Asuka: (upon meeting Shinji) Bist du Jude? Juden sind verantwortlich fuer alle Kriege!

Or you could have a running gag where she refers to the Angels as "Juden."

Asuka: (killing Sandalphon) Stirb langsam, Jude!

He shuddered a bit, remembering the somewhat creepy level of detail Kaji had gone into, while rubbing a watermelon in a disturbingly sexual way.

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Postby V » Sun Nov 02, 2008 5:22 pm

that's not cool man, not cool. As a one-shot joke maybe, but Asuka is a *major* character who would be in all subsequent episodes; the joke couldn't sustain itself, and would come off as simply racist or boring
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Postby The Bastard King » Sun Nov 02, 2008 6:19 pm

S.S. Fabulous.
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Postby Lucretius » Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:33 pm

@V: It could work if it was limited to the episode 8 parody. She could end the joke cycle by saying something to Shinji along the lines of "Ich mag dich, auch wenn du Jude bist," following the battle with Gaghiel.

He shuddered a bit, remembering the somewhat creepy level of detail Kaji had gone into, while rubbing a watermelon in a disturbingly sexual way.

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