Timstuff wrote:The fact that the characters are in a sexual relationship is very important to the story, but I think it was unnecessary to have such graphic depictions of the sex itself. Also, the 1.5 chapter is pretty much straight up porn, and I decided it was not the sort of thing that I wanted to have on my hard drive. If you take the graphic pages out of the main chapters you can still easily tell that Shinji and Asuka have sex, even if what happens between the foreplay and afterglow is more ambiguous (which many people argue is more artistic anyway).
I could not agree more. While the scenes themselves were extraneous, acknowledging that Shinji and Asuka were having a sexually active relationship was quite important in establishing the mood and the themes of ReTake. The sexual element was one of those things that helped add emotional impact to the story for me.
The Eva Monkey wrote:Ugh. What a stupid scene. It wreaks of the kind of stupid shit you come up with in middle school.
Still... overall premise and art are decent. I think it would have been a much more solid work if it had never went the pornographic route. If it hadn't, I might have actually read past the first one.
That's funny, I thought something like this would have been right up your alley once you got past the H-scenes, Senior Master Monkey. It's strange, I'm attempting to find the pattern that determines whether a fan would like ReTake or not - and so far I am stumped. It moves some people while alienating others.
Not since
EoE have I both loved and hated Shinji Ikari as much as I did after reading ReTake. It showed me just how weak-willed, selfish, and - most of all - perverse he really could be, yet how genuinely compassionate and innocent he is. It's also a violent love story: one that has scenes of horrific brutality and hopelessness mixed along with scenes of true tenderness and... beauty. It's not like other shipping fanfics - or even any other love story for that matter; it's not all touchy-feely and the threat of gruesome and brutal despair is real and imminent. It's a man's love story! I know I've called myself jaded, but maybe I'm just more of a sap than I thought I was...
As for the H-scenes themselves, anyone who knows Studio Kimigabuchi ought to know that it is within their style to make hentai that is deliberately disturbing - as if to make the reader feel guilty for indulging in it. So for those who were put off by those scenes, perhaps that was the intended idea. Then again, considering their other works, maybe we actually got off light...