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The Defilement of Asuka Langley Soryu [Discussion]
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What a cocktease of a fanfic.
3 chapters and the author still hasn't revealed what's wrong with Asuka? Am i to expect some futanari bullshit now?
3 chapters and the author still hasn't revealed what's wrong with Asuka? Am i to expect some futanari bullshit now?
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have you heard of the movie The elephant man? In the trailer they didn't show what he looked like. You had to see the movie.Guy Nacks wrote:What a cocktease of a fanfic.
3 chapters and the author still hasn't revealed what's wrong with Asuka? Am i to expect some futanari bullshit now?
I suspect said author is doing something similar. Besides, if he was doing futa, it would be M rated right?
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Asuka-pus?
Dafuq?
Dafuq?
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Asquida Langley Shoryu? 
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Well, mammals do express up to 4 pairs of mammae; just that humans usually only develop the second pair.
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But that's incorrect... she has 8 arms + 2 legs, so a squid is the better fit.
MMMM.... tsundere calamari.
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"I'd consider myself a realist, alright? but in philosophical terms I'm what's called a pessimist. It means I'm bad at parties." - Rust Cohle
"Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize that half of 'em are stupider than that." - George Carlin
"The internet: It's like a training camp for never amounting to anything." - Oglaf
"I think internet message boards and the like are dangerous." - Anno
"I'd consider myself a realist, alright? but in philosophical terms I'm what's called a pessimist. It means I'm bad at parties." - Rust Cohle
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I'm just glad this isn't an M-rated fic. cause if it was, you bet your ass the author'd be all over the concept of Asuka-pus and Shinji gettin' in on in varying creative ways.
Though since she has 8 arms, she'd probably be able to stimulate other participants as well.
Though since she has 8 arms, she'd probably be able to stimulate other participants as well.
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What. The. Fuck.
What. The. Fuck.
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And take into account that Arael has been killed before having the time to finish...just what the fuck did he had in mind?!
Do we even want to know?!
And how in the nine circles of Hell could Fuyutsuki even thing for a second that... that would boost her ego?!
Do we even want to know?!
And how in the nine circles of Hell could Fuyutsuki even thing for a second that... that would boost her ego?!
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Kensuke is a military otaku who, at one point, is shown creepily taking pictures of girls to sell. He would clearly fit right in as an animator at Studio Gainax. -- Compiling_Autumn
EoTV is a therapist, EoE is a drill instructor. -- Chuckman
Seriously, that is the most fananked theory I've ever heard, more than Mari being Marty McFly travelling through time to keep her parents (Asushin) together. -- Jäeger
Kensuke is a military otaku who, at one point, is shown creepily taking pictures of girls to sell. He would clearly fit right in as an animator at Studio Gainax. -- Compiling_Autumn
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I have no idea what the author is thinking.
But I believe mariachi has a point. Way I see it, Fuyutsuki may have seen it as an ego booster because, well, how would you feel if if one day something made you grow more arms?
Personally, I think it would make life a bit easier, but author may have alterior reasons.
But I believe mariachi has a point. Way I see it, Fuyutsuki may have seen it as an ego booster because, well, how would you feel if if one day something made you grow more arms?
Personally, I think it would make life a bit easier, but author may have alterior reasons.
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Heard from the author that next chapter is 'imminent' (o rly?).
My favourite quotes:
'Silence is a Virtue' - Benjamin Franklin
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'Don't always believe everything you read on the internet just because there's a picture with a quote next to it' - Abraham Lincoln
'Silence is a Virtue' - Benjamin Franklin
'War. War never changes' - Fallout 3
'CONKERS!' - Me
'Don't always believe everything you read on the internet just because there's a picture with a quote next to it' - Abraham Lincoln
Well that last chapter ended on a teeny bit of a cliffhanger....so i'll be glad to see how it's resolved.
Among the people who use the Internet, many are obtuse. Because they are locked in their rooms, they hang on to that vision which is spreading across the world. But this does not go beyond mere ‘data’. Data without analysis [thinking], which makes you think that you know everything. This complacency is nothing but a trap. Moreover, the sense of values that counters this notion is paralyzed by it.
And so we arrive at demagogy. - Hideaki Anno, 1996
And so we arrive at demagogy. - Hideaki Anno, 1996
So i've read up to chapter 3 of this thing.
Really not much to say about a not-exactly-well-written and kind of not very ambitious piece of fiction. The main twist of the fanfic manages to be pretty tragic and falls in line with something you would expect from the angels, but... that's it. There's no other reason to read anything of this fanfic.
Also, i'm probably the only one who thought "Oh great, now you'll be four times as effective!"
Really not much to say about a not-exactly-well-written and kind of not very ambitious piece of fiction. The main twist of the fanfic manages to be pretty tragic and falls in line with something you would expect from the angels, but... that's it. There's no other reason to read anything of this fanfic.
Also, i'm probably the only one who thought "Oh great, now you'll be four times as effective!"
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