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Postby jcmoorehead » Wed Jan 04, 2017 3:05 pm

I'll keep that in mind when I check them out then, although I imagine they'll still be decent.

Nice to see you have plans too, quite excited to see that third part too. You've done a great job with them so far, all in character and very nicely written too. Intrigued to see what the next one will be.

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Postby Bagheera » Wed Jan 04, 2017 3:28 pm

View Original PostAngelNo13Bardiel wrote:I rise from the (assumed) grave, with more Evafics for you folks.


Glad you're still with us, man. You disappeared kind of abruptly, so some of us were worried! :tongue: It's doubly nice to see you're back to writing, as more quality Evafics are always appreciated.
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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Sun Jan 15, 2017 7:09 pm

I did another new thing. Yay! Fans of Hands All Over and The Trick is to Keep Breathing will probably enjoy it.
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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Thu Jan 19, 2017 10:59 am

And the stuff just keeps on coming. This time, we go back to the original version of I Won't Let You Fall Apart and give it a proper cleanup/release. Not as much of a tragedy this time, just straight hurt/comfort/drama. Kinda dark, but not as much as Dead Flag Blues. Hope you lads and lasses like it.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Jan 19, 2017 11:13 am

Just read through it, not much I can really say here without repeating what I already said in the review. Really managed to capture the mood of that particular part of the series well within it. First person perspective really made it stand out and allowed us to really get into and feel everything Shinji did at that point. Really liked the balance of darkness to hopefulness in there too.

Also worth pointing out the third part of your trilogy above was also very good too :P

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:39 am

Now, just talking hypothetically: if I were to continue on with the previous story with one last part...and we'll just say, again hypothetically, it would be a little while after those recent events and from the other character's perspective...which of these would be most fitting for a title?

List that proves that Bardi has trouble naming things sometimes  SPOILER: Show
-Black Celebration
-Disintegration
-Finding Beauty in the Dissonance
-Growing Flowers in a Desert
-I Miss the Comfort in Being Sad
-I'll Be Your Mirror
-Let Me See You Stripped
-Sing This Corrosion to Me (this is the one I'm leaning toward)


Again, just throwing stuff at the wall, but...anyone who stops in, tell me what you think.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:45 am

Without knowing the contents of the story itself hard to really pick out one from the list, I quite like Growing Flowers In A Desert as a name or Finding Beauty In Dissonance but I'd say go with what you feel is the best option.

With most of my fics I don't normally name them properly until the piece is complete, usually for my Lemon fics that means looking through the lyrics of Meat Loaf songs and with the others just looking at other song titles/lyrics. :P

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Mon Jan 23, 2017 12:45 pm

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:Without knowing the contents of the story itself hard to really pick out one from the list, I quite like Growing Flowers In A Desert as a name or Finding Beauty In Dissonance but I'd say go with what you feel is the best option.


I figured I'd get that sort of answer from somebody. I just wanted a third opinion on the matter, that's all.

Thanks for weighing in, as least.

With most of my fics I don't normally name them properly until the piece is complete


Meanwhile, I usually name them once I have the sequence of events/gist of it down. Not even begun, just once planning is finished. Probably doing it wrong in some way, but hasn't failed me yet. And it isn't like I don't have a long list to pick from (I tend to have more titles than I do ideas).

Funny you should mention Meat Loaf: the title I'm leaning towards comes from a goth/hard rock song produced by Jim Steinman. It's good.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon Jan 23, 2017 1:55 pm

View Original PostAngelNo13Bardiel wrote:Funny you should mention Meat Loaf: the title I'm leaning towards comes from a goth/hard rock song produced by Jim Steinman. It's good.


Ah wow, I had no idea he worked with them outside of writing the song More (Which has just been re-recorded by Meat Loaf funnily enough) you can definitely hear some of Steinmans production stuff in that song. Very 80s but the choruses in the background sounds very Steinman.

For naming fics I dunno if there is a way to do it wrong really. Sometimes I'll have the name of a fic in mind before I do write it. My recent Rei/Mari one I knew was going to be called Trembling Blue Skies when I started writing it.

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Thu Jan 26, 2017 11:36 am

And another one is finished. The previously-only-hypothetical sequel mentioned above is now available for reading. Not my best, but response to the previous was good enough that I figured I might as well give it a follow-up.

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:Ah wow, I had no idea he worked with them outside of writing the song More (Which has just been re-recorded by Meat Loaf funnily enough) you can definitely hear some of Steinmans production stuff in that song. Very 80s but the choruses in the background sounds very Steinman.


Indeed. And now that you mentioned it, I think I'll have to go look up that version of More. I'll bet it's pretty good.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Jan 26, 2017 11:59 am

View Original PostAngelNo13Bardiel wrote:Indeed. And now that you mentioned it, I think I'll have to go look up that version of More. I'll bet it's pretty good.


It's good although I will warn, and this goes for the album itself, his voice is really not what it used to be. I absolutely love the album because the emotion and the character still comes through. Going All The Way is probably one of his best on it.

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Fri Jan 27, 2017 3:43 pm

Just a heads-up to anyone following this thread: the next one-shot will be up on the 14th (hint hint), Shinji's Ladder will take at least two or three weeks to finish putting together (I want to keep it a one-shot, but a damn lengthier one than I'm used to doing) and New Divide probably won't be seeing its first chapter go up until at least the end of March/beginning of April.

EDIT: Aaaaaand now there's something slated for a White Day release, too. I love actually having motivation for a change.

There's the itinerary, at least. Now let's just see if I hold to it...

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:It's good although I will warn, and this goes for the album itself, his voice is really not what it used to be.


I'm used to that from long-time artists these days. Age catches up to us all.

Besides...you're talking to a guy who was never perturbed by either Jello Biafra or Morrissey, two very distinct and either-hit-or-miss-with-listeners voices.
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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Tue Feb 14, 2017 3:38 am

We've got a two-for-one special today. Both Alone With You (the aforementioned Valentine's Day-themed piece) and Where Boys Fear to Tread (something I mentioned over here) are now up and available. Go on, have a look and, of course, leave your thoughts on them.
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-When it comes to Asuka/Shinji, pre-EoE is like moving Mount Everest and post-EoE is like moving the Olympus Mons. Either way, it's moving a mountain. It's just the size of said mountain.-

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Postby AngelNo13Bardiel » Tue Mar 14, 2017 3:48 am

Happy Pi Day!
Wait...that's not the right holiday? Ah shi-
Err...I mean, happy White Day! Here's something for the occasion; namely, the sequel to Alone With You. Enjoy.
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Don't bend; don't water it down; don't try to make it logical; don't edit your own soul according to the fashion. Rather, follow your most intense obsessions mercilessly. - Franz Kafka
Clones to the left of me, tsunderes to the right...and here I am, stuck in the middle with Shinji. - how I view my experience with Evangelion
-When it comes to Asuka/Shinji, pre-EoE is like moving Mount Everest and post-EoE is like moving the Olympus Mons. Either way, it's moving a mountain. It's just the size of said mountain.-


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