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Postby Sammaeloo » Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:32 pm

"Yes I took the truck! Now I'm going to beat the shit out of you, you stupid jock!!"
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Postby Dranzer » Mon Nov 09, 2009 11:36 am

Yesss!I took the truck!

Beat the crap out of him...pleeease :nyao: Toji needs to learn where's his place....
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Postby GoatMan » Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:10 am

A)

"Yes, I took the truck," Shinji answered. The boy did not hesitate, and drove another fist into the boy's face. He was not trying to play soft at all.

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Postby Great Genius Shinji-Sama » Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:15 am

B. We don't have to take this BS!
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Postby Sammaeloo » Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:43 am

Whip his ass till his track suit is red.
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Postby Dranzer » Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:09 am

Just beat him,he understands nothing...beat the crap out of him! :grin:
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Postby Dranzer » Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:14 am

pls update pls :smirk:
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:04 pm

This is...different.

B. What the hell, kick Toji's ass.
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Postby GoatMan » Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:58 pm

B)

The impact sent Ikari reeling back a second time, the boy's vision distorted for a moment as he cleared his head with a quick couple blinks. Stumbling forward, Ikari clenched his fists, and tried to limber himself up. Suzuhara was about to walk away when Shinji tapped on the boy's shoulder.

Toji turned just in time to see the boy's fist contacting his jaw.

"Yeah, well screw you, too, pal!" Shinji breathed, and bending at the knees, caught his breath as he tried to keep his head from spinning.

"Toji!" Hikari shouted, running up to the boy. Glaring at Shinji, the class representative sneered. "What is wrong with you?"

Ikari stared back at the girl, then over at Kensuke, and finally at Toji. Sighing, he just walked away. There was no point in explaining himself to the others.

Being led off to the principal's office by Hikari with Toji in tow, they had just cleared the line of sight of two elderly foreigners speaking in German. Shinji paused for a moment as he heard a hollow clicking noise, and turned to see what appeared to be a security detail, the men in suits, approaching Class 2-A.

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A) Pulls the others behind cover, and observes the situation quietly

B) Walks up and asks what's going on

C) Follows Hikari to the principal like a housebroken male

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Postby Great Genius Shinji-Sama » Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:28 pm

B) John McClain doesn't shy away from authorities or funny situations. Approach the goons and see what the hell two men in suits and from the sound of it carrying guns are doing in a public school.
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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:40 pm

Section 2 follows the pilots everywhere so that's not surprising.

I'd say C. You acted OOC, time to act in-character so balance is resorted in the world. :tongue:
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Postby Dranzer » Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:50 am

B B B!!!

Thanks for the update :))))) I was getting worried about the topic ^^ I can't wait the first time when he meets Asuka XD Now that will BE EPIC! :grin:
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Postby Agentomega » Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:43 am

B!
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Postby GoatMan » Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:32 pm

B)

Ikari walked up to the men slowly, cautiously. Something just seemed...off about the whole situation. As he moved closer, he ducked behind a set of lockers just in time to see the lead man carrying an MP-5K submachine gun.

"Shinji!" Horaki demanded. "You get right back he-"

Too late, Ikari thought, as he noticed the men turn and look towards him. The first man was blonde, blue eyes, and a tall, muscular figure. The second had black hair, stood a few inches shorter, and average in muscle tone.

Of course, Shinji wasn't paying too much attention to that when the blonde started chasing after them.

He turned to Hikari, who finally managed to see the weapon in the man's hand. Suzuhara had seemed to entirely forget their little spat earlier, and was already pulling at the class rep to run. Shinji followed suit, ducking into...

A) A janitorial mechanical room, it's door ajar

B) The men's room

C) An emergency stairwell

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Postby GoatMan » Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:42 pm

On another note, as it fits this CYOA quite well:

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Postby Sammaeloo » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:31 pm

An emergency stairwell so we have a long chase scene.
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Postby GoatMan » Sat Jan 09, 2010 3:13 pm

C)

Ikari slammed against the door to the emergency stairwell, and sprinted up to the roof. Glancing back as he reached a landing between the fifth and sixth floor, he noticed it was the dark haired man with the submachine gun following him. As he reached the door to the roof, he paused.

Wrapping his hand in his dress shirt, he smashed the glass box, gripping the fire extinguisher.

As the dark man stepped out slowly through the door to the roof, he looked out to the left. Then, a sudden pressure tried forcing the door against him, his hands pinned against between the door and it's frame. He screamed in agony as a fire extinguisher came crashing down on his wrists, the MP5 falling free to the asphalt.

As he rolled, scopped up the gun, and fired cleanly into the torso of the man, Ikari snarled.

Shinji...

A) Searches the corpse for anything he can use

B) Calls Misato on his cellphone

C) retreats back downstairs to find Hikari and Toji

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Postby Sammaeloo » Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:24 pm

Go find Hikari and Toji but take the gun with you.
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Postby Great Genius Shinji-Sama » Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:46 pm

I go with C.
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Postby GoatMan » Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:05 pm

C)

Shinji Ikari fumbled with the MP5. He had played some first-person shooters, even handled a few airsoft replicas before, but a real weapon was still different. There was more mass to it, and with it, a sense of fear. This was a real weapon, something that could be used to kill.

"Just great," he sighed, making his way back down the stairwell.

There was a sudden burst of static from the tactical radio on the dead man's belt. "Jonas, are you there?" It was an older man with a thick German accent. "Jonas?"

Shinji...

A) Answers the radio

B) Picks up the radio, but does not broadcast.

C) Ignores the radio, and continues the search for Hikari/Toji


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