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Postby Dark FireStar » Thu Nov 04, 2004 6:34 pm

Hexon.Arq wrote:Fly Me To The Moon
Where Bush can never track me down
There's no way I'll take up arms in service to that clown
America, kiss my ass
In other words, 'sup New Zealand
Get me outta here
And I will let you tag along
Let's break free before we find that we elected wrong
I'd like to think it's not true
I know it is
I blame you


Best..Poem..EVER!
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Postby MAGI » Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:01 pm

Eva Monkey sees
Thou hast not stayed on topic!
Only MAGI has

Am I the only one not living in America? At least that's a good thing. :lol:
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Postby Olin of Xephon » Fri Nov 05, 2004 12:44 am

Don't worry about it MAGI, a lot of people are apparently steamed about the election...I say don't repress it, express it!

Then it's out of your system and all over everybody's shoes! :lol:

Okay for real, here's a short one...

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Albino's lament


This place. This I. Hair blue as the sky.

Eyes red as blood. Child of mud. I'm the child of mud.

Skin whiter then snow, I sit alone and reflect on my woe.

Why must I cry, whine, even moan?
It is but my fate to live and die ever alone.

Faithful tool, ragged doll, for death and darkness I call.

To be used and cast away, that is what he made me for.
Locked alone in the prison of my mind, doomed to walk a path unkind.

I can do nothing but watch my life pass me by, hoping secretly that someday I die.

My name is Rei. Goodbye.

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:? That was a little depressing.

Maybe I should start writing optimistic Eva poems?
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby MAGI » Fri Nov 05, 2004 5:49 am

Once again, great rhyming, but the 'mud' thing is a little off. More importantly, Rei is absolutely out of character!
I feel like writing a non-haiku poem, now...

Darkness lies in the empty space.
Creeping along the walls.
The door is ajar.

Thin light streaks in the place.
Weakly, it calls.
A little too far.

His senses refuse to see reality.
Behind lids, the eyes hide,
The counter ticks.

He's going nowhere and to no finality;
Just stuck between track twenty-five
And twenty-six.

I suck.
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Postby Dark FireStar » Fri Nov 05, 2004 4:13 pm

I am out of rymes
Love for Eva never dies
Ill think of some more
:mrgreen:
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Postby MAGI » Fri Nov 05, 2004 9:20 pm

Nothing can beat a good haiku. :D

Darkness creeps on him
Now, wishing to see nothing
His SDAT plays on
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Postby Hexon.Arq » Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:55 pm

Father never felt
Me wanting warmth I don't have
Little heartless boy

Door to all my want
Crusted over like a scab
Little world removed

Thrust upon my back
Fate of souls that feel me not
Little horn is born

_you can't do anything, so don't even try
_get some help
_don't do what sonic does

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Postby MAGI » Sat Nov 06, 2004 12:30 am

:?

Laying on the sea
I feel not her naked skin
As she looks on me
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Postby MAGI » Sat Nov 06, 2004 3:20 am

I'm sorry. m(__)m I'm sorry.

Time to impress you with a German haiku! Go work it out!

Ich bin im Himmel
Ayanami ist ein gott
Wo ist das Baka?!
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Postby ChronoX » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:22 am

........heaven
Ayanami.......god
who is the idiot?!
can't think of the other words
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby MAGI » Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:44 pm

Haha, that's good :D
Even the translation's a haiku:

I am in Heaven
Ayanami is a god
Where is that Baka?!
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Postby ChronoX » Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:59 pm

when would Asuka say that Rei is a god. thats the only wierd part of the hakiu
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby MAGI » Sun Nov 07, 2004 4:17 am

:lol: Haven't you seen End of Evangelion?
Just think about it. :wink:
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Postby ChronoX » Sun Nov 07, 2004 1:13 pm

no i have not but i can see it now, the fact that Rei and lilith became a really big thing that looks like a god. so yeah i see where Asuka would think that Rei became a god
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby MAGI » Sun Nov 07, 2004 6:50 pm

Shame that you haven't seen EOE, yet. Best of luck to you.
God bless you. :lol:
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Postby ChronoX » Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:04 pm

i will try to get the two movies for x-mas and watch them that winter break but that is still a bit off. ill just have to wait a bit.
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.

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Postby MAGI » Sun Nov 07, 2004 9:18 pm

I hope to get Platinum 01 for Christmas. For once, I can watch the series and rewatch it, too. It's been three years since I last saw it, and I never saw past episode 21. :cry:

Anyway - hiakus.

The wide, gentle night
Breezing through quiet waters
Japan, tomorrow
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Postby Hexon.Arq » Mon Nov 08, 2004 12:03 am

Can it really be
Poor MAGI has yet to know
Real madness firsthand

_you can't do anything, so don't even try
_get some help
_don't do what sonic does

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Postby MAGI » Mon Nov 08, 2004 12:35 am

To tell you the truth
I caught glipses here and there
Both pleasure and pain

First time, them last few
Second time, I missed them few
Third time, cable cut

Madness from anger
Premature discovery
I talk to myself

Luckily, my memory is waning,
So when I watch them, it is as if I never did at all,
Thus not spoiling it.
Alas, it's too late to save this old fool.
I devote my time to showing others
The true way.
I was pushed onto the hard road
From ill-fortune
And bad luck.
I am cruel to myself
Only to be kind to them.
Them, out there, who are yet
To perceive
The imperceivable.
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Postby ChronoX » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:09 pm

MAGI wrote:I hope to get Platinum 01 for Christmas. For once, I can watch the series and rewatch it, too. It's been three years since I last saw it, and I never saw past episode 21. :cry:

Anyway - hiakus.

The wide, gentle night
Breezing through quiet waters
Japan, tomorrow

when ypu do watch all the episodes, watch the movies before the last 2 episodes, its supposed to make more sense that way
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.


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