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damn hexagon, youmake up some of the best hiku's i've read.
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.
your'e good to MAGI, i used to be pretty good myself but i just can't find the inspiration to make a good one now.
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.
- Dark FireStar
- Arael
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Dark Firestar's haiku remake:
There, the wind billows
Then, like an old man's last sigh
Shine upon the world
Shine and then reveal
That now shall begin the end
And the end begins
To begin rebirth
From the rough waves of the sea
Reprise of Lilins
And here's my added bit:
Rise, mankind, above
Create that which will lead you
Evangelion
There, the wind billows
Then, like an old man's last sigh
Shine upon the world
Shine and then reveal
That now shall begin the end
And the end begins
To begin rebirth
From the rough waves of the sea
Reprise of Lilins
And here's my added bit:
Rise, mankind, above
Create that which will lead you
Evangelion
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Is it okay for me to be here?
- Olin of Xephon
- Ramiel
- Posts: 310
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- Location: Standing on the fine line
Good Stuff.
Here's a new one I wrote...
Impending Impact
When I came, when I saw, I laughed aloud and died of awe.
Where not some secrets meant to be, hidden forever, eternally?
Is ignorance bliss? that gift we’ve missed, is knowledge worth a life to risk?
I have many queries, no answers to give, perhaps it’s better in darkness to live.
They buried me in a shire and there I did dance, doomed to pursue a lovecraftian romance.
There was a maiden dressed in white of a forgotten hue, said
her to me and I to her Who Are You?
Grim was the time when she told me her name, desire and thirst I failed to tame.
May the bitter taste leave me soon, the reaper does dance to a solitary tune.
Peel back the shroud, shatter the coffins, stare at evil devine.
Singing chains and twisted wires proclaim his name, he’s a cosmic faggot with a falsified claim to fame, his monilithc groin doth defile us all the same.
He’s the eighteenth Angel, lived among us all, Humanity is his name.
Beware little children, remain yet humane, and for your fathers our future please retain.
Beware little children, the hour is late, tis a angel at the gate...He's knocking on heaven's door.
The vipers and asps desire our worship, quick, slit your wrists to reveal them your kinship.
Sanity defined, falsehood refined, grab us now before we fly away.
Would our fathers hear our lonely lullaby, they’d drink deeply of disgust and die.
(we’d bury them at sea)
Sanctity profaned, face retained, sleep silently with the whore of the world,
beware the next, forget the rest, over horror not vex, we’ve split open purgatory revel in the mess!
Next we march on seven circles, may Babylon regurgitate her blessed cycles.
Smash all to dust and leave behind a gorgeous husk Hail To Causality!
Yet wait yet awhile, dance a sad dance on the grave of humanity, the blessed dark angel who may yet set us free.
Gaze forlorn at the sea of red, there the maiden lies.
I ask one question, answer me true, by all the angels of every hue,
just who are you?
Here's a new one I wrote...
Impending Impact
When I came, when I saw, I laughed aloud and died of awe.
Where not some secrets meant to be, hidden forever, eternally?
Is ignorance bliss? that gift we’ve missed, is knowledge worth a life to risk?
I have many queries, no answers to give, perhaps it’s better in darkness to live.
They buried me in a shire and there I did dance, doomed to pursue a lovecraftian romance.
There was a maiden dressed in white of a forgotten hue, said
her to me and I to her Who Are You?
Grim was the time when she told me her name, desire and thirst I failed to tame.
May the bitter taste leave me soon, the reaper does dance to a solitary tune.
Peel back the shroud, shatter the coffins, stare at evil devine.
Singing chains and twisted wires proclaim his name, he’s a cosmic faggot with a falsified claim to fame, his monilithc groin doth defile us all the same.
He’s the eighteenth Angel, lived among us all, Humanity is his name.
Beware little children, remain yet humane, and for your fathers our future please retain.
Beware little children, the hour is late, tis a angel at the gate...He's knocking on heaven's door.
The vipers and asps desire our worship, quick, slit your wrists to reveal them your kinship.
Sanity defined, falsehood refined, grab us now before we fly away.
Would our fathers hear our lonely lullaby, they’d drink deeply of disgust and die.
(we’d bury them at sea)
Sanctity profaned, face retained, sleep silently with the whore of the world,
beware the next, forget the rest, over horror not vex, we’ve split open purgatory revel in the mess!
Next we march on seven circles, may Babylon regurgitate her blessed cycles.
Smash all to dust and leave behind a gorgeous husk Hail To Causality!
Yet wait yet awhile, dance a sad dance on the grave of humanity, the blessed dark angel who may yet set us free.
Gaze forlorn at the sea of red, there the maiden lies.
I ask one question, answer me true, by all the angels of every hue,
just who are you?
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."
- Dark FireStar
- Arael
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Olin of Xephon, you da man of rhyme! I could never do that. That's why I stick to haikus.
Darkness fills the room
The morning rays, pitiful
Wishes to see you
A glass of water
Old bandages left behind
A pair of glasses
Your room is so dark
Yet this dark lets me not rest
Do you ever sleep?
Darkness fills the room
The morning rays, pitiful
Wishes to see you
A glass of water
Old bandages left behind
A pair of glasses
Your room is so dark
Yet this dark lets me not rest
Do you ever sleep?
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Is it okay for me to be here?
What the? Did anyone take drugs in Evangelion? :? Well, whatever.
Cold eyes, unspeaking
But his soul is not empty
Can you realize that?
---
Two hands on her throat
From which only evil spews
So shut off her throat
---
Dazzling sparkles
Dancing along the water
The cicadas chirp
Three people hear them
They stand underneath the tree
A long summer day
The old man watches
The woman picks up her child
The child claps her cheeks
I'm addicted to haikus. :)
Cold eyes, unspeaking
But his soul is not empty
Can you realize that?
---
Two hands on her throat
From which only evil spews
So shut off her throat
---
Dazzling sparkles
Dancing along the water
The cicadas chirp
Three people hear them
They stand underneath the tree
A long summer day
The old man watches
The woman picks up her child
The child claps her cheeks
I'm addicted to haikus. :)
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Is it okay for me to be here?
This is not a double post, I'm not repeating anything. No one usually reads this thread, but I'll just keep posting away, 'cos haikus just keep springing up in me.
Spider-like angel
You feel the pain of its tears
It burns like acid
Crosses everywhere
Each springing up from the Earth
Glowing eerie green
She asked you not to
Yet you look up asking why
Three kicks in the face
More to come...
Spider-like angel
You feel the pain of its tears
It burns like acid
Crosses everywhere
Each springing up from the Earth
Glowing eerie green
She asked you not to
Yet you look up asking why
Three kicks in the face
More to come...
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Is it okay for me to be here?
- the_seventh_child
- radio gaga
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- Gender: Female
MAGI wrote:This is not a double post, I'm not repeating anything.
then what is it?
and btw i like the poems of all of you..
Anime and manga unite us all. Much better than the Olympics. - Carl Horn |11.30.2004.
"As of this moment, we are changing from soldiers to pirates!" - Captain Jeffrey Wilder (Macross Frontier #22)
"As of this moment, we are changing from soldiers to pirates!" - Captain Jeffrey Wilder (Macross Frontier #22)
- Dark FireStar
- Arael
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Bush is in office
republicans got da house
also the senate
the U.S. is screwed
republicans control it
were all gonna die
this is true by the way. the republic party rules the government, except the judges, but thats only a matter of time.
republicans got da house
also the senate
the U.S. is screwed
republicans control it
were all gonna die
this is true by the way. the republic party rules the government, except the judges, but thats only a matter of time.
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.
I appologise in advance, but here it is.
Was listening to Jesus Beiblet Meine Freude, and inspired me to write this:
I can't explain it
Where is my reality?
And where is my dream?
Nothing much, of course, but it inspired me to make more haikus for the music. Here it is, not in the order of which I wrote first:
Begin with a hymn
Choral, J-Pop... Sagisu
Cruel Angel's Thesis
Everyday life
It's Jesus Bleibet Meine Freude
The music is good
Terrifying fight
Blood, blood, blood... I'll kill you all
Air on a G string
If I can't be yours
Then my life has no meaning
Thus, I live no more
Fly Me to the Moon
You knew all along, of course
The Egg of Lilith
Was listening to Jesus Beiblet Meine Freude, and inspired me to write this:
I can't explain it
Where is my reality?
And where is my dream?
Nothing much, of course, but it inspired me to make more haikus for the music. Here it is, not in the order of which I wrote first:
Begin with a hymn
Choral, J-Pop... Sagisu
Cruel Angel's Thesis
Everyday life
It's Jesus Bleibet Meine Freude
The music is good
Terrifying fight
Blood, blood, blood... I'll kill you all
Air on a G string
If I can't be yours
Then my life has no meaning
Thus, I live no more
Fly Me to the Moon
You knew all along, of course
The Egg of Lilith
ココにいても、いいの?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Is it okay for me to be here?
Fly Me To The Moon
Where Bush can never track me down
There's no way I'll take up arms in service to that clown
America, kiss my ass
In other words, 'sup New Zealand
Get me outta here
And I will let you tag along
Let's break free before we find that we elected wrong
I'd like to think it's not true
I know it is
I blame you
Where Bush can never track me down
There's no way I'll take up arms in service to that clown
America, kiss my ass
In other words, 'sup New Zealand
Get me outta here
And I will let you tag along
Let's break free before we find that we elected wrong
I'd like to think it's not true
I know it is
I blame you
ROFL hexagon ! insulting bush to the beat of fly me to the moon is genius
"We are born, meant to die. If I am to die, then let it be with a sword in my hand, my enemies at my feet, and my blood on my body. Come forward, come forward, come forward! And let us all meet in bloody combat."-The Rose Lord, William Rose.
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