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Revenge for a rape of a love one?

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Postby dennisud » Sun Jul 25, 2004 8:51 pm

I've run into a very interesting story here.

What if some "Rich" kids had raped one of the female pilots?
What would Shinji do?

Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1934430/1/

Read and Review! :wink:
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WTF!?

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Postby Olin of Xephon » Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:07 pm

This came out of left field...WAY out of left field.

Hold on second, I'll read...
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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What the...

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Postby Olin of Xephon » Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:19 pm

Chapter five doesn't exist!?

I've never really thought about this kind of scenario. Asuka seems a little out of character, but that's very excusible under the circumstances.

As far as what Shinji would do...?
I'm not certain he could bring himself to kill these people by himself, even if he could, I'm not certain he would be able to.

However, if he climbs into the Eva, who knows what kind of rage would be unleashed?
Kinda creepy stuff...but pretty plausible given Asuka's wnadering around Tokyo 3 at that point, and section 2 ignoring her so NERV would bring in another pilot.

I hope these people get it in th end, whoever they are...
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby Kiel » Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:30 pm

As much as I love Shinji as a character...I don't think he'd be able to kill these rapists :cry:

Gomen ne Shinji-kun :cry: I wanted to believe in you!

Shinji piloting the big, purple people eater...

That's a different story :mrgreen:

I wonder what NERV's policy is on pilot's attacking evil civillians is?
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Postby dennisud » Tue Jul 27, 2004 5:33 am

Olin of Xephon wrote:Chapter five doesn't exist!?

I hope these people get it in th end, whoever they are...


Chapter 5 is now up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1934430/5/

plus he doesn't kill them, but IMHO he does get a certain amount of justice!
But with the next eppy we have a clear suspicion that the Section 2 agents and of course Gendo DO finish the job!
Now, we'll see what the aftermath brings.
Just read and see!

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Postby dennisud » Tue Jul 27, 2004 5:38 am

Plus a second more expansive story has another that Shinji cares for in similar straights, though it's not as emphasized!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1899041/1/

But in this one Gendo has a hand in it! :o

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Nice.

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Postby Olin of Xephon » Tue Jul 27, 2004 10:39 pm

Good fic.

Don't really know what else to say. Gendo has a bit of a sadistic streak in him ne?

I like how Shinji got some personal revenge. He needed it. Well, Asuka needed it.
I asked "And where would you take me?"
At this the beast laughed, tears made of my mother's blood leaked from his eyes.
"I will take you to every place you never wanted to be, and you will hate it."
"Then I will take you to every place you've already been, and you will hate that also."
"Last I will take you to the places you have always dreamed of, and that you'll hate worst of all."

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Postby sadsadshinji » Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:42 am

somehow, i can imagine Shinji breaking mentally and beating the shit out of someone until forced to stop...
its a good fic i think...
but you should keep it going...

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Postby max3000 » Wed Jul 28, 2004 9:15 am

Haha the author stole the idea from an Eva hentai doujin.

Don't ask me how i know >_>
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Postby coff » Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:24 pm

How do you know?

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Postby max3000 » Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:50 pm

I have over 1 gb of Eva doujins. HAPPY NOW?!
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Postby dennisud » Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:11 pm

max3000 wrote:I have over 1 gb of Eva doujins. HAPPY NOW?!


Well, It still makes a good a powerful story! plus it shows what Shinji can do Without the Eva and with Gendo's influence.

Now I hope he keep s his spine for afterwards.

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Postby MongolSquad » Wed Jul 28, 2004 9:28 pm

Nice fan fic. Very nice and interesting twist wit the whole rape and Shinji beating the shit out of the punks. Makes me proud of Shinji.....*sniff*

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Postby sadsadshinji » Sun Aug 08, 2004 1:06 am

where did you find the doujins?

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Postby Timesplitter 01 » Sun Aug 08, 2004 6:48 am

Finally Gendo can be proud of Shinji :D . He beat the crap out the guys and is going to do some more :D :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
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Postby sadsadshinji » Sun Aug 08, 2004 12:44 pm

heh heh heh...like father like son...kinda a bit scary though...imagining Shinji being the commander of nerv....with a goatee...and gendo's shades....really scary....
but what do they plan on doing?

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Postby Timesplitter 01 » Sun Aug 08, 2004 6:38 pm

Shinji being the commander of nerv


It will be interesting , but that would mean that Asuka would have to die :? , to be like his father or maybe not
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