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Postby esselfortium » Thu Sep 24, 2009 10:33 pm

Rei...that's not Ikari-kun, that's a radiator. :rei_meh:

Nice usage of draft24 swimming scene, though I'm still a little bit confused regarding Kaworu's motivations in this continuity, all things considered, and Shinji's willingness to trust him again so soon.

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:43 pm

Evangelion New Movie Edition: Quickening wrote:Shinji awoke the next morning in something of a daze. It was already well past 9AM according to his clock, but Misato and Asuka were both still fast asleep.

Kaworu-kun... I wonder just why he cares for me so much? I trust that he's on our side, but... Will this war really end? And will everybody be happy afterward?

He unconsciously rubbed the back of his neck, one of his scars from the previous night beginning to itch.

Quietly entering the kitchen to cook some bacon and eggs, the brown-haired pilot was at least thankful that Asuka seemed okay. Despite what happened to her in Eva-03, she seemed to be in good spirits, but...

Shinji sighed tiredly, turning the bacon over with a spatula. He couldn't help but feel a growing sense of anxiety. As if something really bad was going to happen, and soon.

Shaking his head to clear it, Shinji set the kitchen table for three plus one penguin. He then knocked on Misato's door to wake her up.

"Good morning, Misato-san.", he quietly said.

His guardian smiled wearily, giving him a tight hug. "I'm glad you're alright, Shin-chan." She looked tired to him.

He internally sighed with relief that his injuries from Seele's torture last night weren't visible. Still, he was filled with dread at the thought of what Asuka would think, it was only a matter of time for the redhead to find out.

Asuka...

Leaving Misato to her breakfast, Shinji knocked on his other roommate's door. Met with silence, he entered.

His eyes softened. Asuka, wearing her bandage, was laying on her left side, hugging her pillow against her body. The morning sunlight peeking from her curtains illuminated her fair face and her soft red hair, giving the German girl an angelic look.

Approaching her bed, Shinji put a hand on her shoulder. Bending down, his lips softly pressed against her right cheek. Asuka muttered something in her sleep, eyes slowly opening. She saw Shinji, and smiled softly.

"Baka... You're okay." Moisture gathered in her eye as she pulled Shinji in for a hug.

"Ye--Yeah.", he gulped, shaking in her embrace. There was so much he wanted to say to her...but how? And what? The boy desperately wanted to talk to Asuka about what he realized recently about Rei, as well as Kaworu's vow to protect him--perhaps it could reassure both children that their fellow pilots were there for them--but Shinji wasn't sure how to say it.

However, before any other words could even be exchanged, the alarms for an Angel attack suddenly went off.
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Postby esselfortium » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:09 pm

An angel attack? Rut row.

Who's available to pilot right now? I'm assuming Asuka isn't well enough to pilot again yet (and presumably Unit 02 is still in stasis), but after what happened in Unit 03 (and, though it didn't directly affect her, what happened to Rei and Shinji with the angel after that) I don't even know if she'd want to. o_o

edit:
Legendary wrote:Am I the only one who is concerned that Asuka has
SSD wrote:an angelic look
?

FFFFFFUUUUUUUU--
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Postby Legendary » Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:57 pm

Am I the only one who is concerned that Asuka has
SSD wrote:an angelic look
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Postby Dirty Mick » Sun Oct 18, 2009 11:43 am

Gaaaahhhh, I read this from beginning to now, and feel a little guilty I haven't done it sooner. Maybe I'm just stating the obvious, but compaired to the earlier chapters the later ones feel different somehow. It's almost like I'm seeing you mature as a writer over a long period of time.

Eh, ya I'm stating the obvious. But nevermind my rambling, keep up the good work! :thumbsup:

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Postby Lucretius » Sun Oct 18, 2009 12:14 pm

Can we has Asukael? :grin: Nice update, as usual.

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Postby esselfortium » Sun Oct 18, 2009 12:17 pm

Lucretius wrote:Can we has Asukael? :grin:

Every time you say this, I go like this IRL: :asuka_geh: :asuka_sad:

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:07 pm

Another short update. I'm sorry it's so abrupt. ^^;

Evangelion New Movie Edition: Quickening wrote:The Evangelions-08, 02, and 07 respectively--were out on the battlefield, awaiting orders.

The 11th Angel, a rotating crystal-like being with red orbs--it's core--on either side of it's body--hovered over the abandoned city of Tokyo-3.

Shinji in Eva-08 tensed a little. "Misato-san", he whispered into the intercom. "How are we supposed to fight this thing? Just looking at it gets me worried!"

"Calm down, Shinji-kun. I want you three to observe it for now. If you find an opening, attack, but maintain your distance."

"Understood, ma'am!", Mari replied with a smirk in Eva-07. She adjusted her glasses. Her lenses reflected in the sunlight, body shifting a little in her pink plugsuit.

Seeing her chance, the bandaged Asuka in Eva-02 fired with a pallet rifle. Shinji was extremely surprised the redhead was serious about continuing to pilot, yet at the same time, he was relieved to know she'd fight by his side.

The Angel's middle-section was hit, silence... Suddenly, either ends of the red core began to glow, sizzling with electricity, before the powerful wave was fired at Eva-02!

Cursing, Asuka narrowly missed the Angel. "Misato, a little advice here! How the hell do we destroy the core if it's in two different places?!"

"We'll figure something out, just hang in there for now."
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Postby esselfortium » Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:14 pm

Yay, another update, and so soon! :D

I spotted one minor error, "before the a powerful wave". edit: yayfixed


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Postby Lucretius » Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:05 pm

Yay, a new Angel! Mind rapage to come?

He shuddered a bit, remembering the somewhat creepy level of detail Kaji had gone into, while rubbing a watermelon in a disturbingly sexual way.

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Postby Legendary » Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:15 pm

Quick! Killz it! Death to all Shateiel's!

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Postby esselfortium » Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:22 pm

Is this dual-core angel going to require a synchronized interpretive-dance number to take it down?

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Postby cojax8 » Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:39 pm

esselfortium wrote:
"Misato, help! My depth perception isn't what it used to be!"


Haha, yes!, I’m glad to see I’m not the only one thinking that is going to screw her over.

@fic. Enjoying it so far, good writing style (not that I know much about writing though), and everybody seems to be (pretty much) in character.
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Postby UrsusArctos » Mon Oct 19, 2009 3:11 am

Shateiel, eh? Good stuff coming up!
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Postby Janrok24 » Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:26 am

I'm loving every bit of this! :D

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Finished Lemon H sequel-fic Theme of Love [COMPLETE!!]

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:14 pm

Theme of Love

FINALLY I buckled down and finished this thing! X_x

It's been a long time coming (har har) so I hope you all enjoy it. This is a sequel fic to my H-fic Anxiety-Ridden Honeymoon, so you might want to read (or re-read) that one before you dive into this.

NEW! DarkScribes Link

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For those curious, both Asuka/Shinji WAFF fics feature titles/descriptions from unused S2 Works pieces.

A-4 Anxiety-Ridden Honeymoon (Lonely version) can be download here.

M-15 (theme of love) is for download here.

More information on S2 Works is here.

I hope you enjoy my latest been-in-developmental-hell fic! And PLEASE leave me some kind of review either on here or one of the aforementioned sites. I don't care if it's an anon review or what, but I need to know just what I'm doing right and wrong with fics. I'll fix any formatting errors at some point.

Thanks and enjoy! ^_^
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No spell-check on this PSP, FFFF-

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Postby Sailor Star Dust » Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:36 pm

I hate the fact OpenOffice gave me this one annoying error which in turn screwed up some formatting things... (I miss Word, bawww!)

Format-fixed version should be up either tomorrow or next Friday for those who'd rather wait to read this. (After it was too late I caught an annoying but hilarious typo of Asuka kissing herself. :lol: )
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Postby Sharaz Destler » Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:42 am

Sailor Star Dust wrote:I hate the fact OpenOffice gave me this one annoying error which in turn screwed up some formatting things... (I miss Word, bawww!)

(After it was too late I caught an annoying but hilarious typo of Asuka kissing herself. :lol: )


1: Want me to send you a copy of Micro$oft Office 07 for Christmas? I should be able to get some kind of student discount...here's hoping.

2: Well, that sounds like something Asuka might do...
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Postby Themaninblack » Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:41 pm

SSD, the lovable pornopgrapher

Nice read though.
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Postby Kaname Langley » Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:36 pm

Nice ! :boingy:
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