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Postby VUX » Fri Jan 26, 2018 1:57 pm

I'm thinking about writing a fanfiction megacrossover event for a series i'm planning, which involves an alternate Post-Third Impact timline. In this universe, Eva Unit 01 freed itself from the tree of life and killed Lilith, stopping the event halfway but at the same time reducing the Earth to a apocalyptic wasteland. When Shinji awakens 15 years later, the world is a barren rock with oceans of LCL and an ecosystem ruled by Kaiju. Meanwhile, humanity is forced to live in scattered colonies and factions frequently warring against one another. Meanwhile, two of the main characters from my fanfic's normal timeline appear as well, adding to the chaos. Now Shinji and his new friends must join forces with a rebellion against an unamed warlord for control of the planet. This fanfic will include a wide selection of characters, and monsters from Godzilla, Pacific Rim, Gamera, the Ultra Series, as well as OCs
Tell me what your opinion, does this sound good, or bad? :???:
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Postby Geometer » Fri Jan 26, 2018 2:53 pm

Your free to write what you want, but this just seems like more mech battles for the sake of mech battles. A lot of fan fics have the problem of just being more stuff and don't really expand or reinterpret the source material that much.

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Postby VUX » Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:38 pm

I do too have character development, in fact, i'm planning on killing off a bunch of important characters!
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sat Jan 27, 2018 12:44 pm

Really interesting idea but I would cut the mega cross over down though like have Godzilla, Gamera and other Kauji and the Pacfic Rim teams from the movie the reason being this will be your first fanfiction and it can be very hard to juggle so many characters at once and it means each character will not get enough air time or character development which they need to carry the story.

I would also give this a dark tone and have it be just as dark as the Evangelion series and even show the Pacific rim cast having issues like drinking, pain relief or even drugs because its so stressful and earth is not winning also from what I've heard humans need green because it keeps us upbeat so take away the green and replace it with red where nothing grows it can cause a lot of misery and depression.

Also Shinji could be the one to unite the Evangelions with the Jaegers because before this they could have been at huge odds and have a really strained relationship this could come across with Q Misato going there badly built shows off and they don't listen to us where as the Jaegers crews hate the Evangelions because they see them as the thing that destroyed the world and left it in ruins hence why there using robots because they hate the idea of living beings in armour which is what the Eva's are.

I hope this helps ^_^
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Postby VUX » Sat Jan 27, 2018 2:21 pm

It does, but this won't actually be my first fanfiction, also, I wanted to include the guilt of the ultramen, who where unable to defeat the angels because it is forbidden to interfer with the affairs of non aliens, since the angels were Earth's original inhabitants. Also, the reason i put in traveling through dimensions is because i wanted to show the people you know as friends can become completely different given the circumstances.
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sat Jan 27, 2018 2:28 pm

View Original PostVUX wrote:It does, but this won't actually be my first fanfiction, also, I wanted to include the guilt of the ultramen, who where unable to defeat the angels because it is forbidden to interfer with the affairs of non aliens, since the angels were Earth's original inhabitants. Also, the reason i put in traveling through dimensions is because i wanted to show the people you know as friends can become completely different given the circumstances.


Ah that makes sense now and the crossing of characters could make for some very interesting moments. ^_^
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Postby VUX » Sat Jan 27, 2018 3:21 pm

I've decided that i will write a different fanfic, which is both an alternate timline where Third Impact never took place and a shared universe with Godzilla, Gamera, Pacific Rim, and the Ultra series. It will focus on developing original characters even further and will introduce new OCs, as well as iclude impressive monster action later on
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sat Jan 27, 2018 3:44 pm

View Original PostVUX wrote:I've decided that i will write a different fanfic, which is both an alternate timline where Third Impact never took place and a shared universe with Godzilla, Gamera, Pacific Rim, and the Ultra series. It will focus on developing original characters even further and will introduce new OCs, as well as iclude impressive monster action later on


Just a thought you may still want to keep the rebuild red planet setting in this because I've never seen a crossover evangelion/godzilla fanfiction of that type, they all take place when the world is green ^_^
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Postby VUX » Sat Jan 27, 2018 4:13 pm

Alright, it will take place after third impact, where the world rebuilds itself over time back into a green state after instrumentality
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Postby VUX » Sat Jan 27, 2018 4:22 pm

What do you think a good name for it would be?
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sun Jan 28, 2018 7:30 am

View Original PostVUX wrote:Alright, it will take place after third impact, where the world rebuilds itself over time back into a green state after instrumentality


I have a question are you using Shin Godzilla or normal Godzilla its just you could use Godzilla in the plot line as the key to bringing back the green as his/her DNA is a state of mutation and could manipulated by the Eva team or you could even use Biollante for this as well as she basically a walking plant with teeth and Godzilla's sister in the canon as she was made using his DNA.

What do you think a good name for it would be?


I'm sure you can come up with a great name ^_^
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Postby Cybermat47 » Sun Jan 28, 2018 8:16 am

View Original PostVUX wrote:What do you think a good name for it would be?


Evangelion: War of the Monsters, perhaps?
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Postby VUX » Sun Jan 28, 2018 9:08 am

I was also thinking of Angels, Gods, and Monsters
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Postby VUX » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:53 pm

Godzilla will resemble the one from the Hesei series, which means that i'll propably use Biolante. Maybe her genes could be combined with a synthetic form of LCL that can restore plant life.
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Postby VUX » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:56 pm

I think i've also got most of my main characters in order
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Postby Asuka'sBigBrother » Mon Jan 29, 2018 12:17 pm

Just make sure you don't need paragraphs of exposition,
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Postby VUX » Mon Jan 29, 2018 1:53 pm

The most exposition will probably be in the first chapter, in order to explain what happened to both the characters and world after third impact
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Postby Asuka'sBigBrother » Mon Jan 29, 2018 6:41 pm

View Original PostVUX wrote:The most exposition will probably be in the first chapter, in order to explain what happened to both the characters and world after third impact

Don't. Show no tell. Let the events leading up to your story weave themselves naturally. You don't need to explain everything in the first chapter. Your story doesn't have to be perfectly linear. Instead of cramming everything we need to know in one chapter, let the reader discover for himself what happened base don what you show us.

Here's a technique you might want to try:
Have the character remember an event in the past, and shift the story to that event by using a transitory object that provokes thought in the reader. For example, in one chapter of my story, I have Shinji look at a tree and then the scene shifts between the past and the current day. That way we're exploring the past in the perspective of the character you're looking to characterize.

If you're creative enough, you can tell a coherent, complex story, without a single line of exposition.
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Postby VUX » Mon Jan 29, 2018 7:08 pm

I know, but sometimes doing that is kind of boring, since i just want to get to the action sometimes
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Postby Asuka'sBigBrother » Mon Jan 29, 2018 9:47 pm

View Original PostVUX wrote: since i just want to get to the action sometimes

Then start with the action, and then weave in the preceding plot
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