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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:35 pm

Ok, so I've been holding this post back awhile, but with the upcome shift in the story, I need to post this.

This is all about NERV. After I started this story, I found one of the larger plot holes in the show, and was NERV. We have a loose understanding of its rank structure and how the departments break down within the show. Gendo runs the place under his crazy iron fist with Fuyutsuki as his right hand, Ritsuko heads the research department, and Misato heads tactical, but everything else is left relative mystery.

Basically how this will break down, Gendo and Fuyutsuki are where they are, while Division heads are in chage of thier division and are equal to each other regarding regular operations, unless there is an emergency situation where one's division is thought to be the best to handle a certain situation (where the trade off between Misato and Ritsuko comes in in the show, see Leliel). Branch commanders are ranked "Major" and above, while the Division heads are supposed to be ranked "Colonel" there are exceptions, namely Misato and Ritsuko, Misato, who will initially be a Captain, and Ritsuko, who is a civilian in command without formal rank. Civilians i NERV are given the clreaece and responcibilities of a certain rank, but are not refereed to by a rank, as they were former Gehirn employees who did not get fully transitioned into NERV. Kaji in the show (and in my story) seems to be in an extra-departmental position, not attaching him to a specific Division, but where he seems to solely report to Commander Ikari in some special role, as "Special Inspector" maiking him some kind of internal affairs agent, which is the best possible real-world analog I can think of.

For my story the information below will be used, and I hope all this made sense.

NERV Ranks
    Command Officer Ranks
      Commander
      Sub–Commander
      Colonel
    Senior Officer Ranks
      Lieutenant Colonel
      Major
      Captain
    Junior Officer Ranks
      1st Lieutenant
      2nd Lieutenant
      Junior Lieutenant
      Warrant Officer
    Non–Commissioned Officers Ranks
      Master Sergeant
      Staff Sergeant
      Sergeant
    Enlisted Ranks
      Corporal
      Lance Corporal
      Private First Class
      Private
NERV Divisions
    1st Division – Scientific/Research
    2nd Division – Intelligence
    3rd Division – Tactical
    4th Division – Medical
    5th Division – Technical/Development
    6th Division – Security
    7th Division – Maintenance/Construction
    8th Division – Logistics/Transport
    9th Division – Public Relations/Media
NERV Locations
    NERV HQ – Tokyo–3, Japan
    NERV 1st Branch – MIT, Massachusetts, United States
    NERV 2nd Branch – Area 51, Nevada, United States
    NERV 3rd Branch – Berlin, Germany
    NERV 4th Branch – London, United Kingdom
    NERV 5th Branch – Paris, France
    NERV 6th Branch – Hamburg, Germany
    NERV 7th Branch – Moscow, Russia
    NERV 8th Branch – Nice, France
    NERV 9th Branch – Volgograd, Russia
    NERV 10th Branch – Hong Kong, China
    NERV 11th Branch – Shanghai, China
    NERV 12th Branch – Madrid, Spain
    NERV 13th Branch – Matsushiro, Japan
    NERV 14th Branch – Beijing, China
    NERV 15th Branch – Quebec, Canada
    NERV 16th Branch – Tel Aviv, Israel
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Sat Oct 15, 2016 3:35 pm

Hello again EVA fans!

So, its finally here, today I have posted the conclusing chapter to the 34 chapter, 3 story long Origins Arc, and also, the opening chapter to new, 36 chapter, 3 story long Angels Arc.

Here for your reading pleasure:
Also, here's a look at the rest of the first half of Episode IV, no spoilers.
    Chapter 2 – Berserk Fury
    Chapter 3 – Awaiting Destiny
    Chapter 4 – Third Child vs. Third Angel; Sachiel Appears
    Chapter 5 – School of Hard Knocks; Shamshel Attacks
    Chapter 6 – Operation Yashima; Ramiel Obliterates
I'd also like to take this opportinity to thank everyone for the wonderful reviews, favorites and follows, and of course for anyone who has read through or just poked around the story, I humbly thank you, and deeply appreciate you taking a time to read my fic.

Soon, the gang will be all together!
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The links and status of the saga are below:
Origins Arc - Complete!
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode I: The Phantom Menace; Complete, 10 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode II: Attack of the Seeds; Complete, 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode III: Revenge of Ikari; Complete, 12 Chapters
Angels Arc
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IV: The Last Hope; In-Process, 1 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode V: SEELE Strikes Back; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VI: Return of Reality; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Resurgence Arc - Under Construction...
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VII: Awakenings
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VIII: Echoes of the Past
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IX: Daybreak
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Sun Oct 16, 2016 6:39 am

DarkBluePhoenix wrote:While many characters in my story use the same birthdays they are given officially, for the characters with unknown birthdays, I had to make a few up to fit the story, or just add a specific date for the characters with only years listed.
Yeah, I left a few people off, mainly the Bridge Bunnies (wasn't ready for them yet) and Asuka's half siblings (Who were a story surprise), finally Mari's DOB will change now that she is back to make her 16 in the story, so they have been added into the list below and are listed in bold.
    > Keel Lorenz – March 16, 1925
    > Jushiro Kyoraku – August 15, 1945
    > Kozo Fuyutsuki – April 9, 1959
    > Naoko Akagi – June 12, 1965
    > Gendo (Rokubungi) Ikari – April 29, 1967
    > Shinji Ikari – May 21, 1970
    > Oscar Langley – January 1, 1972
    > Kyoko Zeppelin Soryu – March 25, 1974
    > Mimori Shikinami – August 18, 1975
    > Yui Ikari – March 30, 1977
    > Mari Illustrious Makinami – April 8, 1982 (After recovery, listed as April 8, 1999)
    > Ritsuko Akagi – November 21, 1985
    > Ryoji Kaji – June 17, 1985
    > Misato Katsuragi – December 8, 1986
    > Makoto Hyuga – February 13, 1990
    > Shigeru Aboa – May 5, 1990
    > Maya Ibuki – July 11, 1991
    > Kaworu Nagisa – September 13, 2000
    > Shinji Ikari – June 6, 2001
    > Kensuke Aida – September 12, 2001
    > Asuka Langley Soryu – December 4, 2001
    > Toji Suzuhara – December 26, 2001
    > Hikari Horaki – February 18, 2002
    > Sakura Suzuhara – April 2, 2003
    > Rei Ayanami – October 31, 2004 (Listed officially as October 31, 2001)
    > Asumi Langley Shikinami – March 20, 2006 (older twin)
    > Akito Langley Shikinami – March 20, 2006 (younger twin)

Oh, and in the theme of these added birthdays, here's some Asuka
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Postby silvermoonlight » Sun Oct 16, 2016 3:06 pm

Loved the chapters so happy that a certain person has returned :)

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Anywhere can be paradise as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy.

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Postby xfs » Sun Oct 16, 2016 8:25 pm

I saw Napster (2007) and Google (2010) in chapter 11. It's funny how Google being an usherer of cutting edge AI research IRL, its subsidiary in London just managed to propose a Differentiable Neural Computer that can only solve toy examples and cannot handle real-world problems yet (compared to MAGI). If NGE is a sci-fi, it's surely very optimistic.

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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Tue Oct 18, 2016 8:34 pm

Good news everyone!

I have a shiny, new AO3 account where I will be slowly catching up to my fanfiction.net account with NGE: Legacy. In order to accomplish this feat, I am going back to the beginning of my saga, and meticulously checking for grammatical and syntax errors. I clearly missed a bunch the last time around, so I'm doing a revision I'm calling the "New Grammatical Edition" or "NGE" for short.

As I update AO3, I will update Fanfiction.net with the completed stories. The edits will not change any content, just add grammatical clarity where there was once none. There may be a few words added in that I didn't actually type out but intended to, but other than that, the stories will essentially be the same.

Now every Saturday, you can look forward to a new chapter(s) for Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy.

Also, to everyone who has been reading, reviewing, favoritism, and following, I humbly thank you and hope you continue to enjoy my work as much as I have enjoyed writing it thus far.
:asuka_happy:
Also, be ready, as there are changes coming :lol:
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Thu Oct 20, 2016 9:32 am

Quick update, wonderful readers!

This Saturday, October 22, 2016, I will be posting Chapters 2 & 3 (see chapter titles in above post), then next Saturday , October 29, 2016, Chapter 4 will be posted, ushering in "The War of the Angels" and the fight to save humanity.

I'd call it the "Fight Against Giants" but the acronym gets a bit dicey when trying to post it... -o-;

The links and status of the saga are below:
Origins Arc - Complete!
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode I: The Phantom Menace; Complete, 10 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode II: Attack of the Seeds; Complete, 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode III: Revenge of Ikari; Complete, 12 Chapters
Angels Arc
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IV: The Last Hope; In-Process, 1 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode V: SEELE Strikes Back; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VI: Return of Reality; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Resurgence Arc - Under Construction...
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VII: Awakenings
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VIII: Echoes of the Past
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IX: Daybreak
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Postby xfs » Thu Oct 20, 2016 1:59 pm

View Original PostDarkBluePhoenix wrote:I'd call it the "Fight Against Giants" but the acronym gets a bit dicey when trying to post it...

True, "F.A.G." would allude to a different Gendo from the one in your fic. (Now, make an omake where Gendo fights
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with fish.)
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Thu Oct 20, 2016 2:34 pm

xfs wrote:True, "F.A.G." would allude to a different Gendo from the one in your fic. (Now, make an omake where Gendo fights
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with fish.)

Yes, that is a far different Gendo than my own, who is a bumbling idiot and not a cold calculated anything.

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Funny you should mention Godzilla... no spoilers!
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Postby silvermoonlight » Thu Oct 20, 2016 3:41 pm

View Original PostDarkBluePhoenix wrote:Yes, that is a far different Gendo than my own, who is a bumbling idiot and not a cold calculated anything.

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Funny you should mention Godzilla... no spoilers!


Yes more chapters :)

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Depends which Godzilla though.
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Postby pwhodges » Thu Oct 20, 2016 5:27 pm

View Original Postsilvermoonlight wrote:
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Heh! - I already used that line.
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Fri Oct 21, 2016 7:37 pm

Hello again, EVA fans!

EDIT: So, the chapter list that was below seemed kinda silly to have buried three pages into the thread, so I've moved the chapter listing for all stories to the beginning of the first page,. The original post I put down was also preserved, so you can see it more effectively, as is the original post here.

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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Sat Oct 22, 2016 10:24 pm

Good news folks!

After some technical delays, I have two new chapters up for NGE: Legacy!

Here for your reading pleasure:
Same as before, a preview of the upcoming chapters for the rest of the first half of Episode IV:
    Chapter 4 – Third Child vs. Third Angel; Sachiel Appears
    Chapter 5 – School of Hard Knocks; Shamshel Attacks
    Chapter 6 – Operation Yashima; Ramiel Obliterates
This Week's Pilot  SPOILER: Show
Rei Ayanami, the featured pilot in Chapter 2!Image

And next week, Shinji will be feeling like this.
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The links and status of the saga are below:
Origins Arc - Complete!
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode I: The Phantom Menace; Complete, 10 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode II: Attack of the Seeds; Complete, 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode III: Revenge of Ikari; Complete, 12 Chapters
Angels Arc - Underway
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IV: The Last Hope; In-Process, 3 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode V: SEELE Strikes Back; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VI: Return of Reality; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Resurgence Arc - Under Construction...
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VII: Awakenings
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VIII: Echoes of the Past
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IX: Daybreak
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Postby Fyrstorm » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:47 am

Hooray! New chapters! I must say, I wasn't expecting the events of Chapter 2, but I can see where you're coming from with them.
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Sun Oct 23, 2016 8:32 am

Fyrstorm wrote:Hooray! New chapters! I must say, I wasn't expecting the events of Chapter 2, but I can see where you're coming from with them.

Well, I must say, keep expecting the unexpected...
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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Wed Oct 26, 2016 8:46 pm

Hello again!

So, the new chapter will be up on Saturday (October 29, 2016) but because it’s an important one, I figured I’d let you guys see a very small part of it, so I hope you enjoy.
Excerpt of Episode IV, Chapter 4  SPOILER: Show
Excerpt from Episode IV: The Last Hope – Chapter 4 – Third Child vs. Third Angel; Sachiel Appears

Unit–01’s eyes lit back up and its head jerked up, and Shinji awoke sitting in the Entry Plug, which was now in low–power mode. Shinji could see everything around him, but couldn’t do anything as his controls were dead. “How are you moving, it says the power is out…” Shinji looked around. “Well, I guess beggars can’t be choosers…”

The jaws of Unit–01 strained against the bolts holding it shut. The metal strained and creaked against the muscles flexing underneath the armor. Unit–01’s head moved about and its neck joints popped in anticipation of fighting. The bolts finally snapped after a massive amount of effort on the part of Unit–01.

Unit–01 let out a very primitive, reverberating sound from its now free and open mouth. “ROOOOAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

Unit–01 leaned forward and stretched its arms out and leaned forward as it growled a low, reverberating tone and it stared down Sachiel.

“Holy shit, this is about to get messy.” Shinji said. “I better hold onto something…”
So, look forward to the new chapter folks, its coming soon…
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The links and status of the saga are below:
Origins Arc - Complete!
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode I: The Phantom Menace; Complete, 10 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode II: Attack of the Seeds; Complete, 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode III: Revenge of Ikari; Complete, 12 Chapters
Angels Arc - Underway
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IV: The Last Hope; In-Process, 3 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode V: SEELE Strikes Back; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VI: Return of Reality; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Resurgence Arc - Under Construction...
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VII: Awakenings
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VIII: Echoes of the Past
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IX: Daybreak
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Postby xfs » Thu Oct 27, 2016 12:01 am

Excerpt of Episode IV, Chapter 4  SPOILER: Show
What is going on? This raises many questions. Unit-01 going berserk here is a response to its pilot being in danger of death or being unconscious to pilot. But by the reaction of Shinji, he's pretty much conscious and well and kidding around?

Wait and see.

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Postby silvermoonlight » Thu Oct 27, 2016 3:18 am

Awesome!
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Postby jcmoorehead » Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:25 am

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Quite intrigued by Shinjis reaction to this as well. Wonder if this is just going to be his reaction until he realizes the horror of what is happening.

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Postby DarkBluePhoenix » Thu Oct 27, 2016 11:01 am

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What is going on? This raises many questions. Unit-01 going berserk here is a response to its pilot being in danger of death or being unconscious to pilot. But by the reaction of Shinji, he's pretty much conscious and well and kidding around?

Wait and see.
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Quite intrigued by Shinjis reaction to this as well. Wonder if this is just going to be his reaction until he realizes the horror of what is happening.
Thank you guys for the wonderful posts.

Now, I won't give anything away about the chapter, but here's another "spoiler free" excerpt
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Excerpt from Episode IV: The Last Hope – Chapter 4 – Third Child vs. Third Angel; Sachiel Appears

Unit–01 moved slowly into position under the launch doors. The lock bolts sealed around the base of the launch pad as the doors above Unit–01 began opening.

"Launch pad locked in place... closest intercept point has been selected... launch path is clear and open... all systems online... board is green." Maya reported. "Evangelion Unit–01 is ready for launch."

"Understood." Misato said as she turned to Gendo. "Commander, do we proceed to launch?"

"Of course Captain." Gendo replied with his hands folded in front of him. "The fate of humanity rests on our success this day. If we fail to defeat the Third Angel, humanity and the Earth will be destroyed. Proceed to launch Unit–01, operational command is now yours, Captain Katsuragi."

"Yes, sir." Misato replied.

"Ikari, are you absolutely certain of this?" Fuyutsuki asked as Misato turned back around. "He is your son after all."

"I'm aware of that, and I won't let our relationship cloud my judgement on the matter." Gendo said, smirking slightly. "I'm quite certain, Fuyutsuki."

"Evangelion Unit–01... LAUNCH!" Misato ordered.

The locks on the base of the pad beneath Unit–01were released with explosive charges, and the pad shot upwards suddenly with great speed.

"WAHHHHHHH!!!!" Shinji screamed once again, not expecting the sudden the sudden acceleration upinto the path to the surface of Tokyo–3. The force of the sudden acceleration was so strong, it had pressed him quite hard into his seat.
So, look forward to the new chapter folks, its coming soon…

The links and status of the saga are below:
Origins Arc - Complete!
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode I: The Phantom Menace; Complete, 10 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode II: Attack of the Seeds; Complete, 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode III: Revenge of Ikari; Complete, 12 Chapters
Angels Arc - Underway
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IV: The Last Hope; In-Process, 3 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode V: SEELE Strikes Back; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VI: Return of Reality; Outlined, 0 of 12 Chapters
Resurgence Arc - Under Construction...
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VII: Awakenings
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode VIII: Echoes of the Past
Neon Genesis Evangelion: Legacy - Episode IX: Daybreak[/quote]
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