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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Nov 08, 2015 5:22 am

There is a idea for a fanfic that I had in my mind for quite some time now, over a decade to be exactly. I had an attempt on writing it back than in German, but that was not realized that greatly. But since I really liked the idea I think I'll take a second run on it and this time in English.


My problem back than as its now is that I'm generally very very chaotic what does not sit well with writing a story linearly, than I rush through parts that would deserve more development only to get to write a later part that I'm thinking about right now.
So I thought that this time I will actually write the chapters out of order what do you think about that?
An other issue is that I'm rather on the spectrum so my understanding of how normal people behave is based only on observations, although a decade more of life experience should help with that I presume.
Anyways I don't consider anything final so if you think something is not right just submit a bug fix


The story is as the title may already suggest a crossover, one of the main characters in the fic will be Nadia from the other Hideaki Anno masterpiece "Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water", the other will be a new one so to say a wild card, for simplicity I just call him Trax.
To make things more complicated I will mix a few other series into the fic I will focus here on the works of another great master Gene Roddenberry. All that originates from my obsession to find a time line in which all my favorite series can coexist reasonably well.

Being obsessive about rational story lines, there will be no time travel any ware so don't worry this will be no "enterprise got back in time like story", instead the timespan covered by the story will be a few millennia, at least. Hah hah ... hah...
And obviously the chapters I'll start with will be mostly about the NGE epoch.








Now to give you a rough story outline and how all this different time lines fit together, well some of them at least.

In order not to disclose to many interesting things about the far past we start in 18xx when the back story to blue water took place, a.k.a. the revolution in Tartessos when gargoyle planned to take control over what was left of the Atlantean civilization on earth.
The revolution takes place when Nadia is a few years old, in contrast to the original story, when Tartessos gets destroyed she does not get lost but escapes with her father (Nemo) the ex king of Tartessos and other survivals that will form the resistance against Gargoyles plans to use the power of Atlantis to take over the world.
Devastated by the lost of his son and his wife Nemo swears vengeance against gargoyle and his new empire Neo Atlantis. To ensure that his daughter will be safe from Gargoyle and his minions he decides to put her together with the key to the power of Atlantis the Blue Water stone into stasis hidden away on a secret outpost.

When Nemo fights Gargoyle at a later point in time both dye. Since Nadia was not involved in this course of events the antique satellite city Red Noah stays dormant on the bottom of the ocean and thus don’t get destroyed in the fight tween Gargoyle and Nemo.
Then those who survived the war against Gargoyles Neo Atlantis decide to create a secret organization dedicated to keep dangerous Atlantean technology out of man kinds hands and the existence of their lost civilization a secret.
In the 20 century in the early 90’s a group of explorers from this secret society discovers the hiding place of the last surviving member of the Atlantean royal family a,k.a. Nadia. They awake her from the century's long stasis and she grows up in the modern age.
In the early 21 century she meets Trax a young scientist with an impeccable understanding for technology. She recruits him to help her and her secret society to reactivate antique Atlantean technology that was long lost.

Some decades pass and the Taelons come to earth (from the series earth final conflict) this are humanoid aliens mostly made up of energy. They appear peaceful and claim they want help men kind in their progress, they call them selves the companions.
As the story develops it becomes apparent that the Taelons have arterial motives. Man kind learns that they need something they call core energy to survive, and that they lost the capability to reproduce. They seek a way to fix that problem and apparently they are convinced they can find a solution on earth.
A antique Taelon called Ma'el whom visited earth two thousand years ago supposedly discovered means to save his kind, but being worried how the Taelons may choose to threat man kind, he did not shared much about his discovery with his kind and later dyed on earth of old age.

This part of the time line roughly fits seasons 1-4 of final conflict however the ending of season 4 is significantly altered and season 5 got scrapped altogether (since it was really really bad).
The new ending: The Taelons started running out of core energy for good, Ma'el's the original plan for this situation was for them to go into stasis and wait for man kind to reach a sufficient level of development to be able to help them.
But due to the more and more aggressive stand of he Taelons as they last days started coming near, the tensions between them and humans started to grow.
Zo'or the leader of the Taelon synod was not willing to risk the survival of his species on the good will of man kind. He decided as a last resort to extinguish human kind and repopulate the planet with replicants which would contain minds of dedicated Taelon supporters and would be equipped as a fail safe with a motivational imperative to serve the Taelons before anything else. Thus hopefully sooner or later fining a solution and waking up the Taelons waiting in stasis.
This sinister plan was cut short by Da'an the North American Companion. With his protector (personal bodyguard) Liam Kincaid (a Kimera/Human Hybrid), whom was also a double-agent for the Resistance, they crossed paths with Trax and Nadia multiple times. Da'an know that if Zo'or would start implementing his plan, Nadia would use the "tower of babel" to destroy the Taelon mothership. So he informed them up front about Zo'or's plans and gave them the access codes to the mothership board computer. Before Zo'or could start his plan Trax and Nadia boarded the mothership and took over control. They gave an ultimatum to Zo'or and the synod they could eider go in stasis and hope for the best or well there is no or... having no control over the ship's systems the synod head to comply with what Da'an's coup d'etat.
Da'an however did not cooperated with Trax and Nadia unconditionally, he bargain for a very high price. Trax and Nadia head to agree to personally guarantee the Taelons survival. A deal that demanded Nadia to spend some of the power of Atlantis she inherited to replenish the ships core energy reserves, and to spend possibly centuries on fining a solution for the Taelons problem.
And well, all Taelons went to stasis, that is except Da'an whom due to a past failed experiment head his own core energy replenished and a full timespan of ten thousand years in front of him.

Since man kind was not very fond of the companions anymore the most promising course of action for them was to try to find the world from which Nadias people came all his millennias ago.
They spent a better part of a century on searching for Nadias home world, a task that unfortunately appeared to be more difficult than anticipated.
In the mean time on earth humanity was recovering from the Taelons leaving, what caused a lot of infrastructure like the portal network etc, that was Dependant on the Taelons to stop working.

In the year 2100 the Katsuragi expedition found mysterious ruins deep under the Antarctic ice cover. They found remains of a technologically highly advanced civilization from a time long before Ma'el came to earth. And well they ware messing around with some specimens they found what as everyone knows resulted in the second impact.
This dramatic event did not go unnoticed on the Taelon mothership the lost of almost half of the words population was a unprecedented catastrophe. Hence Trax and Nadia returned to earth.
With the inter-dimensional drive of the Taelons they ware there to watch the after math of this catastrophe only a few hours after it happened. The understanding they head with the Taelons, while obliging them to focus on the Taelon problem, however stipulated that any significant risks to man kinds survival would take precedence. (Besides for every practical purpose any agreement was unenforceable anyways)

The mothership remained hidden while Trax and Nadia came back on earth to find what was left if anything from the secret society once tasked with safe guarding the Atlantean legacy and to find out what happened in Antarctica...

15 years later .... That is when the chapters of the NGE epoch start.


Whats you impression of the concept?
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Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:28 pm

I finished a few chapters: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia

please give me some feedback.

I know I know the English is improvable, a lot probably.

And I have rather a lot of dialogs and little text around, what should be improved but for me, this part of writing is very hard.
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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:05 am

Anyone read it yet?

How is it?

Am I waisting my time writing it with my limited linguistic skill set?

Cheers
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Postby Iuvenal » Wed Nov 18, 2015 4:51 pm

View Original PostTraxXavier wrote:Anyone read it yet?

How is it?

Am I waisting my time writing it with my limited linguistic skill set?

Cheers


I've had it on my list to check out for a while but haven't gotten a round tuit yet.
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Postby TraxXavier » Wed Nov 25, 2015 9:23 am

I added a new chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/4/Deus-est-Nadia
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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Nov 28, 2015 4:55 pm

"Chapter 5 (2115-07-06) - An Angel meets God" is up and running https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/5/Deus-est-Nadia


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This girl, she has Liliths sole. – Nadia thought – But that's impossible she isn't Lilith yet somehow she is, that can't be.

Apparently NERV figured out a way to make it possible. – Trax thought – No matter how unlikely that appears, it fits well with our assumption that Lilith is out of commission.

But how could they have captured her sole into this body? – Nadia asked – it can't be compatible. Lilith was an arch angel as large as Adam.

Well but this body of hers it's not entirely human, – Trax thought – you felt that very clearly.

It's not possible to determine where a sole will be reborn; it can be only transferred it between compatible minds. – Nadia thought.

The atlanteans head a lot of experience in the past with transferring minds and soles, it is tolled that atlanteans never really die; instead their minds are transferred into a holy artefact, one of the 4 element stones created billions of years ago by the Ancients. Also the Taelons did their share of experiments on that subject. They were capable of transferring the mind and soul of a patient to a previously brain dead body (Episode 1x17 "The Devil You Know") as well as into a non-biological surrogate body (Episode 2x12 "One Man's Castle"). In the latter case however a transfer back was not possible as the generated system quickly diverged too much from the original biological neuro template and the changes ware not back portable.

Strictly speaking between systems that can create a compatible coherent state across its entire neural network, only the total wave function has to be similar enough. – Trax explained – In the end your ancestors could imprison Adams sole in a small device.
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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Dec 05, 2015 2:55 am

Guy's I need some input ;)

Whats yur opinion of this new Mari character, from NGE rebuild?

I'm just finishing the chapter "Second attack", and am at a crossing that would decide if in the later chapters Mari will appear or not.

Since my feelings about Mari are rather ambiguous I'm not yet sure how to proceed. Hence if you have any particular preference the one was or the other just write it down :!:
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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Dec 05, 2015 6:51 am

Anyhow, we hat at this point a ambiguous ending

next chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/7/Deus-est-Nadia
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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Dec 06, 2015 5:56 pm

Rei lives in an otherwise abandoned apartment building on the perimeter of Neo Tokio-3. The doorbell was broken, Nadia tried using it but to no effect. She noticed that the door was unlocked, Nadia entered.

Rei! Are you there? – Nadia asked.

The living room was very sparkly furnished a bed, a chair, a small dresser, a large bookshelf, and a fridge used also as a nightstand with various pills on it, there was also an empty wall closet. Next to the fridge there was also a box apparently acting as rubbish bin with some old bandages and pair of broken glasses.

Rei came out of a bath and entered the room naked.

Nadia, why have you come here? – She asked surprised.

Ritsuko asked me to bring you your new ID card; the old one is no longer valid – Nadia answered and put the envelope with the ID card on the chair.

What an odd place to live – Nadia thought. She has noticed that there was no surveillance equipment any ware inside. The hallway was monitored with a hidden camera and there was a car parking upfront with two agents from the NERV security, but apparently they have not been surveying Rei directly.

Rei, how long have you been living here? – She asked.

About 3 years – Rei answered.

Isn't that a bit uncomfortable? – Nadia asked.

I don't need more – Rei answered.

Ok… – Nadia said and looked around again. She noticed that the pills on the fridge ware sorted in one of this dosage boxes one use to organize medicine.

Are you fully recovered from the accident, are you really ready for the reactivation test? – Nadia asked.

Yes, why shouldn't I be? – Rei said.

I noticed that you are still on medication. – Nadia said.

That is normal Rei said, my body can't produce all the needed proteins on its own, I'm dependent on this additives. – Rei said.

Nadia approached Rei and laid her right hand on Reis chest, her eyes flashed with a bright blue glimmer.

I see… – Nadia said


New chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/8/Deus-est-Nadia
Evangelion x Earth Final Conflict crossover FanFic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/1/Deus-est-Nadia
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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Feb 13, 2016 3:33 pm

New chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/13/Deus-est-Nadia
new pilot, old angel :D

have fun
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Postby TraxXavier » Wed Mar 23, 2016 4:46 pm

I finished the next chapter:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/14/Deus-est-Nadia
Its till now the longest one.

And some more chapters are in making
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Apr 01, 2016 1:46 pm

Next chapter
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/15/Deus-est-Nadia

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Leliel attacks neo tokio 3, the only reasonable plan to atack it is to strap a interdimmensional drive from a taelon shuttle to an EVA and asoult the creature from the interdimension
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Postby TraxXavier » Fri Apr 22, 2016 11:36 am

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Postby TraxXavier » Fri May 20, 2016 4:42 pm

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Postby TraxXavier » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:03 pm

It was some time since I uploaded the last chapter.

I'm somehow not sure how to proceed with the next one "The new unit and its Pilot (17,18)" in this chapter unit 03 will be brought to Japan and its designated Pilot will be Mari Illustrious.

And that is the problem, she had so little screen time in the rebuild series that I'm really not sure how to write her character especially the interactions with the other and our protagonists.

It appears to me that Mari is often portrait as not very ehemm... sane so that complicates things in a way. Now, on the other hand I don't have to stick to it.

I thought about a possible back story I think since she is British she should covertly work for the MI6, now how does a teenager get to work for the MI6 I think this needs a extraordinary motivation. Like for example her father (a MI6 agent himself) being assassinated by SEELE, of cause it was made to look as an accident.

An other thing I'm not sure about is should I go the Mari x Asuka route or better not.
I think that a Rei x Asuka story has much more potential for a Reis character development, for her to really become an own person. I somehow thing that without such a relation Rei will just settle for being Nadias envoy.
On the other hand however I think that for Asuka a relation with Mari would be more satisfying in the long run than with Rei as Reis priority would always remain serving Nadia.

Now, forgoing Asuka's satisfaction in favorer of Rei becoming an own person. That has an other useful side effect: Asuka could participate in future plans of our protagonists that require a very high level of trust. A level of trust you can not get from a emotionally independent person. I mean things like giving one of the blue water type stones to her. You cant give that sort of power to someone whom may leave you or cease cooperating with you. Reis obedience at least with regard to important things is guaranteed and if Asuka does not have strong intimate emotional bonds to anyone else, its a safe enough bet.

In a Mari x Asuka type setting they would be before anything loyal to each other (like spouses should be) so Mari may support an idea to do something Trax/Nadia would not approve of. And that is not good.
In a Mari x Rei setting Rei would while in all other cases also be loyal to Asuka, always prioritize her loyalty to Nadia. For her Nadia is a true goddess in a deeply religious sens and that trumps even spouses loyalty.


So I really have a hard time deciding what way to go. Any suggestions or new view points would be greatly appreciated. :)
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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Jan 15, 2017 5:18 pm

finally finally finally i finished the next chapter: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11613231/18/Deus-est-Nadia
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Postby TraxXavier » Sun Aug 20, 2017 3:45 pm

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