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Postby jcmoorehead » Sun Jun 05, 2016 3:47 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:^
That's like the whole point of romance in general.

Oh, I wanted to point everyone to the direction of You are (not) Loved, it can be found on FF.net, it is lemon, yet it is not sour.


I didn't realize it was possible to post lemon content on FF.net, I'm going to keep mine strictly to AO3 for now but that is surprising, I always thought it wasn't allowed there.

Suppose I should say that I mentioned I finished it earlier but I did actually upload that AsuKawoShin fic to my AO3 profile.

I also had a go at doing a KawoShin one too. Sort of ran with the idea of them going back to Kaworu's during ep 24 and him having a piano there and he and Shinji play the piano together before they go onto other things. Was fun to write. AsuShin is and will forever be my main pairing but I do enjoy fooling around with Kaworu from time to time.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Mon Jun 06, 2016 4:50 am

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Yeah, it's allowed on there Good Sir, I was curious as to why you hadn't posted on there and on AFF.

Lemons weren't allowed on FF for quite some time cause of a torture porn fic called Agony in Pink, at least that's the urban legend.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Mon Jun 06, 2016 5:33 am

Main reason really is because when you look at the guidelines when posting stuff it says MA is not allowed. So I just didn't bother putting them up there. To be honest I'm going to keep them on AO3 for now just to play it safe.

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Postby amitakartok » Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:23 am

View Original Postjcmoorehead wrote:Main reason really is because when you look at the guidelines when posting stuff it says MA is not allowed.


And there are multiple groups of self-proclaimed enforcers who report stories in breach of this - or rather, report ANY story they don't like, abusing the fact that the moderators automatically purge the story without even bothering to check if it really is in breach of the site guidelines.
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Postby amitakartok » Thu Jul 28, 2016 8:32 am

Returning to topic, Kodama's chest size on the official art got me thinking: what if Hikari's going to develop those as well once she gets older?

And what are the chances of her resorting to suppressing her breasts with chest binding because she doesn't want to become the target of sexual jokes from Toji (not knowing that he's got a thing for big boobies, if his behavior towards Misato is anything to go by)?
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Postby Guy Nacks » Fri Jul 29, 2016 7:13 pm

Have any stories actually been written based on what's been proposed in this thread?
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Postby amitakartok » Sat Jul 30, 2016 9:22 am

Some, I think.
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Postby jcmoorehead » Sat Jul 30, 2016 11:58 am

I don't really keep up with what has been written lemon-wise for Eva. I don't really know/talk to any other fic writers and the ones I do don't tend to do lemon material so I can't really answer if any of whats been proposed has been written.

For what its worth I have got a few others up on my AO3 now. I ended up doing another KawoShin one, based on the idea that Asuka is going away for some time and she'd like a video of Shinji/Kaworu.

A friend of mine was feeling down so I wrote them some AsuRei, idea there was Asuka has to go to Rei's to deliver some stuff (Similar to Shinji at the start of the series), and she sees how run down Rei's place is and started to feel a bit bad. Rei comes out of the shower and things escalate.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:11 pm

I was wondering what the fuck was up with the AsuRei, I thought you were turning traitor on us LOL
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Postby jcmoorehead » Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:15 pm

View Original PostChaddyManPrime wrote:I was wondering what the fuck was up with the AsuRei, I thought you were turning traitor on us LOL


Haha nah, the AsuRei was to cheer up a friend and the KawoShin was just a bit of fun. I am still 100% AsuShin trash. :P

I am actually planning on writing something this week based off of a commission my friend did for me. Hopefully that'll be good, I have my main fics to work on as a priority though. Need to get another chapter edited of that before I think think about writing Lemon stuff.

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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:26 pm

I've been working on my darkfic with an associate, it's going to be the darkest thing ever.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Jul 31, 2016 4:40 pm

Please don't torture the kids any more.


I personally have trouble writing Shinji/Asuka lemon. I want to, but I can't: anything I think of immediately pulls the brakes in my head as "no way, she'd never do that with him".

Shinji with Rei, Mari, Mana, Mayumi, teen!Sakura or fem!Kaworu, fine. Asuka with Kaworu, Toji or even Kensuke, fine. But the two of them together? It just doesn't work out.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Jul 31, 2016 5:23 pm

Oh there's gonna be plenty of that LOL

Yeah I figured you were having trouble figuring out how to do AsuShin cuz I haven't seen any of it from you.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Jul 31, 2016 5:40 pm

The only one I came up with (and did so recently, in fact) involves Asuka hanging around the apartment in lingerie due to a heat wave.
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Jul 31, 2016 6:41 pm

Like a mixture of blackout and baby oil? If so you should throw some pride into that.

Pride, blackout, and pride are all fanfics by the way, they kind of deal with that subject matter.
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sun Jul 31, 2016 7:07 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Shinji with Rei, Mari, Mana, Mayumi, teen!Sakura or fem!Kaworu, fine. Asuka with Kaworu, Toji or even Kensuke, fine. But the two of them together? It just doesn't work out.



This needs to be a thing. I can't think of any fics with this pairing, which is ironic because it would probably be the best possible match, personality-wise for Shinji.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Jul 31, 2016 7:16 pm

Well, I was personally a fan of that pairing from day 1. Even wrote a non-H oneshot about it way back when.


On the H front... I had that idea of Shinji being on a sleepover at the Suzuharas and Sakura calling him over to her room. No penetrative things happen (yet), just groping. Shinji wakes up next day to the sight of a none-too-pleased Toji standing next to the bed (Sakura's bed, that is, after Shinji fell asleep with her).
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Postby Guy Nacks » Sun Jul 31, 2016 8:08 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Shinji wakes up next day to the sight of a none-too-pleased Toji standing next to the bed (Sakura's bed, that is, after Shinji fell asleep with her).



I think this plot point is a little too predictable.
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Postby amitakartok » Sun Jul 31, 2016 8:14 pm

I know, but think about it a bit: if the sleepover would be at Shinji's place, what reason would Toji have to bring his sister with him?

Especially if she and Shinji don't know each other, like here. Here, Shinji's been to Toji's place a few times before, so Sakura knows who he is, but they don't know each other on a personal level. That still doesn't prevent Sakura from having a bit of a crush at first sight on him, of course, coupled with secretly watching him all the time whenever he's over because she doesn't have the courage to step up and talk to him (especially not with Toji around). She's not antisocial or anything (quite the contrary, actually), she just doesn't want to make a bad impression. So she waits for Toji to go to sleep and for Shinji to go to the bathroom before sleeping before she calls him over.
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Postby Apalos » Tue Aug 02, 2016 1:29 pm

View Original Postamitakartok wrote:Please don't torture the kids any more.


I personally have trouble writing Shinji/Asuka lemon. I want to, but I can't: anything I think of immediately pulls the brakes in my head as "no way, she'd never do that with him".

Shinji with Rei, Mari, Mana, Mayumi, teen!Sakura or fem!Kaworu, fine. Asuka with Kaworu, Toji or even Kensuke, fine. But the two of them together? It just doesn't work out.

You can ship Asuka with Kensuke but not with Shinji?

Is it just a gut, emotional reaction? I'm kinda the same way with Asuka(Favorite character)/Kaworu(Most hated character). No matter how well written, I can't stand it.

Or is there a reason you don't think Asuka/Shinji would work?
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