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Postby ChangCY5555 » Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:27 am

I have two NGE fanfics up on FanFiction.net – one an in-progress crossover with Godzilla (2014), the other a completed one shot. Would anyone mind giving me some constructive feedback? Adam knows I need it.

A God Given Form: [url]https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10802090/1/A-God-Given-Form[/url]
In Vino Veritas: [url]https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10820358/1/In-Vino-Veritas[/url]
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Postby ChaddyManPrime » Sun Nov 16, 2014 8:34 am

As I said in my review for In Vino Veritas, give me more Misashin cause I liked it.
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