Another fanfic of mine.
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- ThanatosII
- Sachiel
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That was rather... out of character lol.
I did like the idea of someone watching the Asuka/MPE fight from a distance from the ground though.
I did like the idea of someone watching the Asuka/MPE fight from a distance from the ground though.
"Understanding each other one hundred percent is impossible.
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
- ThanatosII
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Wow haha, it just hit me that's what OOC stood for... I'm rather noobish to the area of fanfic heh.
I find it interesting that people have interest to write OOC pieces. That's just stemming from the fact I lack creative will to shift away from the source.
Anyway, now that I understand the point of this piece, I'll say it elevates Shinji's frustration with Asuka not being transparent (i.e. "You're intentionally hiding behind those smiles to keep things ambiguous!). Heck, it could had been going through his head during the car ride once it was radioed in that Asuka was kicking ass.
"Understanding each other one hundred percent is impossible.
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
ThanatosII wrote:Anyway, now that I understand the point of this piece, I'll say it elevates Shinji's frustration with Asuka not being transparent (i.e. "You're intentionally hiding behind those smiles to keep things ambiguous!). Heck, it could had been going through his head during the car ride once it was radioed in that Asuka was kicking ass.
Actually I wanted to make a trololo Shinji that had enough of Misato's and Asuka's shit.
You know... A mixture of Manga Shinji and Gendo. At least, that's how I see it...
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I have the impression that my fanfics have a story that is told too fast. And it seems that my fanfics are hilarious instead of horrific... Or even, terrific...
I think the only good story that I wrote until now is Cooking with Shinji...
I think the only good story that I wrote until now is Cooking with Shinji...
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- ThanatosII
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From what I could infer, you did rush the writing too, as I noticed some misspelled words (and missing words), but I could fill in the gaps.
I believe you write in a rush in order to finish as quickly as possible and get a quick reaction from us. I've dealt with this in respect to drawings and video effect projects. Just gotta control those urges from releasing your work too early.
And hey, we all have to start somewhere. [s]Rome[/s] NERV wasn't built in a day!
"Understanding each other one hundred percent is impossible.
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
Of course, that's why we spend so much time trying to understand ourselves and others.
That's what makes life so interesting." -Kaji Ryoji
"I got confused and I killed my sister... egh I can't help the way that I feel...." - Sorrow
Once you're regularly active on EGF, you get an idea of who is using the "Hidden" feature. Irony, eh?
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"As long as we're all living, and as long as we're all having fun, that should do it, right?" (from: The Eccentric Family )
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