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Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Wed Aug 06, 2014 10:28 am

My second fanfic! Don't worry...

It isn't a continuation of Cooking with Shinji.

It's just a short fic...

[url]http://archiveofourown.org/works/2090610[/url]

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:27 pm

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Forever!? Oh my God :hitthetable:

What happens when he sees them in Instrumentality or wherever Souls go when the body dies? Also I take it Instrumentality didn't go down for some reason? How did that not happen?

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Thu Aug 07, 2014 1:45 pm

ChaddyManPrime wrote:^
Forever!? Oh my God What happens when he sees them in Instrumentality or wherever Souls go when the body dies? Also I take it Instrumentality didn't go down for some reason? How did that not happen?

Well, it seems that I didn't cleared this part up...

I read a lot of fics that made Instrumentality not happen but they also didn't cleared much that. And the story happens 4 years later since 3I and Instrumentality happened. Anyway, I'll try not to FAIL next time.

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:41 pm

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You didn't fail bro, you just got to think about everything logically. So Instrumentality went down but Misato and Asuka stayed dead? That's pretty harsh for Shinji. Oh you know what would have been a fun twist? Have it turn out that Shinji was the one that was actually dead and the reason that he wouldn't see them again was because humans are basically made immortal after 3rd Impact. The graves of course would have been made by someone else while they thought Asuka and Misato were dead.

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Thu Aug 07, 2014 5:44 pm

ChaddyManPrime wrote:^
You didn't fail bro, you just got to think about everything logically. So Instrumentality went down but Misato and Asuka stayed dead? That's pretty harsh for Shinji. Oh you know what would have been a fun twist? Have it turn out that Shinji was the one that was actually dead and the reason that he wouldn't see them again was because humans are basically made immortal after 3rd Impact. The graves of course would have been made by someone else while they thought Asuka and Misato were dead.

Well, my intention was to make a harsh story for Shinji. And that idea of yours sounds good but I would have to make a full fic with that and I just wanted to write a short fic.

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Thu Aug 07, 2014 7:14 pm

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You didn't have to make it a full story, you just had to have Asuka and Misato be the ones to have left in the car and had them have a conversation about Shinji's death.

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Thu Aug 07, 2014 7:21 pm

ChaddyManPrime wrote:^
You didn't have to make it a full story, you just had to have Asuka and Misato be the ones to have left in the car and had them have a conversation about Shinji's death.

Should I have added Asuka's romantic declarion to dead Shinji although he had :fap:

on her?

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:30 am

Sure but that's kinda cliched at this point :lol:

I would rather see her cursing him for abandoning her and not coming back, and maybe kicking over his grave stone and giving him the ol' double duece.

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:50 am

ChaddyManPrime wrote:Sure but that's kinda cliched at this point I would rather see her cursing him for abandoning her and not coming back, and maybe kicking over his grave stone and giving him the ol' double duece.

Then I would be obligated to make Shinji's ghost haunt her. :devil:

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:50 am

Thomas68 wrote:Then I would be obligated to make Shinji's ghost haunt her.

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!

I gave myself a new idea!

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:20 pm

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I've always loved the Eva fanfics where the characters haunt the other characters after death ^_^

Stillborn · Postby **Stillborn** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:21 pm

Then read Unwanted Child. It's exactly that.

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:41 pm

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Don't read it Thomas, it's pretty lame.

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 6:34 pm

ChaddyManPrime wrote:^
Don't read it Thomas, it's pretty lame.

How's the plot?

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 6:36 pm

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What don't you understand about lame?

SPOILER: Show

It's weird because of the Supernatural powers, Shinji's ghost makes walls bleed somehow, like it's the Amityville Horror or something.

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 7:00 pm

ChaddyManPrime wrote:^
What don't you understand about lame?
SPOILER: Show
It's weird because of the Supernatural powers, Shinji's ghost makes walls bleed somehow, like it's the Amityville Horror or something.

I was wondering if the way the story is told is lame not Shinji's ghost capability of making walls bleed.

And I was wondering if its scary or sad somehow...

Thomas68 · Postby **Thomas68** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 7:51 pm

I just readed Unwanted Child and well...

Is just as lame as my fic. The difference is the author put more disgrace in this fic.

ChaddyManPrime · Postby **ChaddyManPrime** » Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:41 pm

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I told you it was Lame bro, and your story wasn't lame, it just needs some revising.

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